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sydy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

The backstory of Arnav-Lavanya-Aarav is so touching...I feel so sad for the poor soul..died so young...
Though lavanya lied to Arnav about child , in her conselling sessions it shows that in her own way she loved him beyond reason and wanted him in her life by hook or crook...but some relationships are meant to be doomed i guess...
liked that Arnav and Astha patched...And Arnav and Khushi have come closer both emotional and physical level...Love to see how their relationship proceeds...

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arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Oh Arnav suffered a lot. I felt really bad for him.And lavanya, well she is a different case all together. First of all,she lied about Aarav and then guilt had taken toll , the outcome unhappy marriage and the cost aarav..I was wondering if it was love for Arnav that made lavanya lie or the rejection from Arnav had hurt her ego so much that she lied to him...😲. Lavanya is a suffering too but . I am not sure if Aastha knows about the truth behind aarav and lavanya😲

Wonderful update Jenny 👏

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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Ohhhmmggg!! So many significant things happened in one update!

ok so first astha's viewpoint was revealed. And it was understanding, glad that arnav and his mom's relationship is still strong 😊

and then the all important past of lavanya, aarav and arnav was revealed!! And what a revelation! The way arnav told khushi about his past 😭 Loved the way they both supported each other 😊

And of course the kiss!!!

Loved the update heaps! Thank you 👏

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

You touched my heart with this update...

You continue to bring out Khushi's constant inner conflict between what she wants and what she thinks is right, perfectly...though the romantic in me wants Khushi to throw caution to the wind and just be with Arnav...the sudden arrival of Lavanya and the glimpse in to her pain and agony confused me...

But then came the news of her betrayal..and whatever may be her reasons...she seems to be battling some serious demons now...if her visit to the psychiatrist and her extensive case history are anything to go by...

I cant hate her, for she too went through the unbearable pain of losing her child, i only feel pity...

Loved Arnav for not resenting the child and for being able to hold on to the strong father-son bond, even when he knew that blood ties were absent..that he is capable of such selfless love and emotion is a rare trait...

The portrayal of Arnav struggling to cope with the loss of a child, his pain exacerbated by Lavanya's accusations that he had actually wilfully wished Arav harm...it was splendidly written!

Glad that arnav cleared the air with his mother..her ways may not be right, her intention are..

The comforting kiss, showing the almost healing powers of having someone to hold and love in a time of suffering..was beautifully written..

The moonlit night, the saffron scented breeze, the sea of lavender coloured flowers.. i think Kashmir tourism department might be thanking you soon...a lot of us are now wanting to go see this magical place for ourselves 😛

Loved this update Jenny!

Thank you for being such a wonderful writer...your tales enthral us ...

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Maya

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Abyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Oh Jenny that was such a heart wrenching chapter...simply awesome...I really had a soft spot for lavanya. but her tried tricking arnav despite knowing that he didn't want to have a relationship with her... and now its clear that she's paying the price of her own lies... she might be in love with him but that doesn't give her the right to force someone into a loveless marriage...poor aarav... it's very sad and tragic how he died... can't even think such a small kid going through this... lavanya must be like this due to loss of her child but she's not doing the right thing to blame arnav for this.. as she is the one who cheated him and lied in the beginning ...

poor arnav...i just hope and wish that now him and khushi gets the love which they both deserve...

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Outstanding update dear..this update is all about relations, love, trust, truth and heartache..

After reading arnav's love for aarav...this reminds me the quote of Hazrat Ali a.s where He said...Rishte khoon ke nahi...Rishte ehsaas ke hotey hain...Agar ehsaas ho toh ajnabi bhi apne ho jatey hain..Aur agar ehsaas na ho toh apne bhi ajnabi ban jatey hain...La cheated him.shton ki buniyaad jhoot per rakh ho toh ekk sach ke jhonke se woh bikhar jati hai...finally, he shares his pain with her...so so heart touching...and the way she soothe him...and confess her love for him..amazing.. Muhabbat kya hai..Kisi ke dard ko apne seene se laga kar...uske dard ko apna bana kar...apni khushiyan us per luta deney ka naam muhabbat hai..aur aisi hi sachi muhabbat khushi ko arnav se hai... I love the whole chapter..

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Rani7812

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

Amazing chapter Jen! Poor Arav! Though I feel bad for Lavanya she should pay the price of tricking Arnav in a marriage.Hope Arnav and Khushi starts a new relationship with all the love they have for one another.