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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hai vahii aariz-e-lailaa vahii shiirian kaa dahan

nigaah-e-shauq ghadii bhar ko yahaan Thaharii hai

( aariz = cheeks , Dahan = lips )

vasl kii shab thii to kis darjaa subak guzarii hai

hijr kii shab hai to kyaa saKht garaan guzarii hai

( vasl = union, subak = delicate , Hijr = separation, Shab = night )

dast-e-sayyaad bhii aajiz hai kaf-e-gulchii.n bhii

buu-e-gul Thaharii na bul-bul kii zabaan Thaharii hai

[dast=hand; sayyaad=hunter; aajiz=helpless]

[kaf=palm; gulchii.n=florist; buu-e-gul=flower's fragrance]

aate aate yuun hii dam bhar ko rukii hogii bahaar

jaate jaate yuun hii pal bhar ko Khizaan Thaharii hai

Khizaan = autumn]

- faiz Ahmed faiz

( poem lyrics and translation by Google)

I just love the wordings so couldn't stop myself.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Bizzare comment to make but I was super thrilled to see the verse that you had used. My favourite from a Pakistani serial called Dhoop Kinare... now that I think of it, I can draw parallels between Arnava nd Dr Ahmer :-)

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Thank you soo much for the loong chapter.

The worries that khushi goes thru r so genuine. The situation where she is attracted to him. N now knows he likes her too. Or maybe loves her. The wife who may have a chance of reconciliation if not for her.

And wen she feels her need for him nore, she tries to find fault with lavanya so as not to feel too guilty. It all feels soo real.

Khushi is so understanding with astha too. She cud see how difficult it is for astha to show that everything is fine wen clearly its not.

I was shocked to read that lavanya still wanted arnav back. That is goin to create a complication. Or worse, a broken heart is wat im worried abt.

A suggestion. In the text sent by arnav

"Hey..how are you? Hope you found my little note and didn't mind my rather unconventional method of communicating! Anyway, waiting for your answer, but if you choose not to, that's fine with me. Take care."

Instead of " if u choose not to, thats fine with me" i think u cud have said i will understand. Coz im sure if khushi chooses to not reply, he is not gonna be fine. Sry if u din like me correcting u like that. Im no expert, but just felt it wud have been more true, the other way.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

no neither is khushi rebound girl
though it may seem to be
and neither is la cold and unfeeling woman
but then what happened
they were happy at one point
they have a son too
wait where was their kid
its not that the kid is no more than they drifted apart is it
so their marriage was neither love nor arranged
or was it love at one point
so la is nothing like she assumed
she still loves him
but what happened to him
what changed i wonder
it wasnt easy for neither astha nor khushi to be cheerful
well how can it be with what happened
am glad though astha didnt think khushi was the one who trapped him or something but then it doesnt go with her personality
you can force someone to notice you
but not to feel for you
which he does do and am sure it has nothing to do with him being on the rebound
i feel bad for all three
but khushi was right in thinking that his marriage cant be the only reason for sadness in his eyes
hope to know more
and what poem that was in the end
cheers for pm

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Viji

@vijiasr08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

beautiful update and long one loved it

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

jenny that was an absolutely beautiful update and even if it lacked romance it was special reading about the main characters of this story lost in their thoughts.

starting by astha, im so happy that she is not usual mother of the boy type that will be always blaming the girl for anything their son did, she consideered khushi as her own and she did wat she deemed right to prevent her from a bitter situation that will have eventually lead to an everlasting heartache.

im guessing that something must have happened to aarav, maybe they lost it and this loss has created the gap between arnav and lavanya. i cant wait to know wat really happened but one thing is for sure that lavanya does love arnav and wants him back.

i do like arnav's character but i have a little preference for khushi, love her morals and values, she knows that she will never be genuinely happy if the foundation of her love is on someone else broken relationship. but love is such a complicated thing that even in these situations her heart cant seem to help itself from missing arnav

i hope that the smile that appeared on arnav's face was because the message was from khushi. i dont want to judge his relation and seperation with lavanya until i dont know the whole truth, but it must have been something huge for them to be at crossroads like this.

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Thank you for updating.

The update is sad and shocking.

Arnav and Lavanya had a son.

From the update it is clear that Lavanya is disturbed. Khushi is thinking of giving a chance to Arnav.

Will love to see Arnav and Khushi's love story to take few steps. Arnav and Khushi have suffered a lot and they deserve love and deserve to be happy.

Please update quickly.😃

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Dodo_jinu

@Dodo_jinu

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

just read it :) very nice :) thanks for pm :)

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Gosh... what more surprises have you stored for us Apu... and how come u write this amazingly every time... i can literally feel what they are feeling...
Arnav-Lavanya have(/had) a son... this came as a shock... where is Arav now... what's reason behind their separation... and Lavanya seems to b emotionally disturbed... what actually happened between them...
Poor Khushi, she is blaming herself now... stressing herself thinking this much... i think its time she knows the whole story... and from Arnav...
as much as i like Astha Aunty, i really hope she doesnt interfere here, and ArShi TALK and make it all clear between themselves...
waiting to see whats next...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Now that I have got over my nostalgia for Dhoop Kinare interesting update...

So Arnav and Lavanya had an arranged marriage or even a love one? HAd a son who probbaly died, maybe on account of Lavanya's carelessness or they just driftef apart. Sometimes the death of a child ends up separating the parets as they cannot deal with the grief...

Lavanya still cares for him? But Arnav has moved on?

While I found Khushi's google search very cute and amusing, the truth is that for a man who has been separated for only a year, to figure that he loves Khushi is quite sudden. Unless Lavanya and his marrage was falling apart much before that?

Questions, questons and more questions? Hopefully the next udate will answer some?