SanDhir SS: The Deep Dark Secret *UpdateScheduled * (pg29) AN pg33 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sadiej18

Really nyc story it looks like you have put a lot of effort in this I hope u keep writing ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks a lot. Indeed, its the first one so put much effort to make it attractive x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Amazing update

This is surely mysterious
Update soon


Thank you. Indeed, the mystey continues. BTW, get well soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Hey Guys, back with another update. Please give it a go. Hapy Reading! And any criticism is most welcomed ๐Ÿ˜Š


Chapter 3: The Need

Present

It had been 5 hours since Sanyukta had not returned. As Sabarwal's theory and practical were cancelled, everybody had gone their own ways to enjoy the rest of the day. Kaustuki and Jiggy left for canteen while Randhir left for the library. Parth went to his room while Yoyo and gang went out to party in Punjabi Mohalla just around the corner. Sahil left for the market after Sanyukta. Also, it had been 3 days now since Vidhusi had left for Hyderabad, her home town. She had left a letter saying that her Dad was ill so she was going to meet him and would try to be back as soon as possible.

Kaustuki tried calling Sanyukta several times but her phone was switched off. Sahil had not returned neither Yoyo Gang while Jiggy was in Vardhan's office to sort out his internship. She called up Parth but he abruptly told her that he was out with his CITE friends. The only person she could seek help from was Sanyukta's mortal enemy; Randhir Singh Shekhawat, who was still in the library.

...

She could only hear her heartbeat when suddenly she heard somebody's footsteps crushing the already dead autumn leaves. The air around her tensed up badly. Oh this was not good. She had to escape before the life was cruelly snatched from her. With all the energy she had in her body, she dragged herself up, only to fall badly on her feet again that refused to bear her weight due the numbness. "Ouch" she yelled, quickly covering her mouth. Sanyukta had twisted her ankle in such an angle that she still could feel it with a numb foot. How she wished Randhir, her personal saviour, was here to save her from this dangerous stranger.

'Oh my MCP, please save your farzi, I promise I'll never trouble you ' thought Sanyukta painfully, with a sinking feeling. Something broke inside her, it was not just a rib that cracked after she hit a big stone, but also, how on earth was he ever going to find her, if not her than her DEAD BODY? When they couldn't even track her down!

Somehow she managed to crawl into the opposite direction. Soon, she could spot a road further ahead.

...

Randhir's P.O.V


I have been glued to this spot for the past few hours working on Sabarwal's project. It's been a week since farzi and I are not talking to each other. All I saw this week was her being glued either to Kaustuki or Parth (arghh). Come on. I thought this was farzi who would never leave me alone despite my threats. That's what I admire the most about her. She does take our enmity seriously.

But after that day, she has just stopped even looking into my direction. I don't know if she can sense my anger, my guilt, my NEED for her. Yeah. I admitted this a long time ago I need her in my life. Randhir Singh Shekhawat, the Great Egoistic MCP needs his Farzi Agarwal. After all, life is just so dull without her. I don't know if she feels the same. But I don't care anyway. I somehow have to start our hateful conversation just like old time. I just can't take it anymore, not even my ego!

Wait? What is this sinking feeling? Why do I feel like someone is calling me? Why am I feeling so funny inside as if something terrible is going to happen? Arrrghhh Randhir you have officially lost it!

Randhir you need a psychiatrist. This farzi has blown your mind into pieces" Randhir thought out loud. He just couldn't concentrate. That's when he felt someone standing behind him.

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Ok, so this was the update. How did you find it? Please share your thoughts as Feedback is very helpful. For PMs, Buddy Up ๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
res!
unresed on pg 4 btw :)

EDITED!

"my NEED for her" OMG!!! Best line ever!!!๐Ÿ˜†
Great update! Make longer updates nah! Please!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Though I loved the Sandhir moments in this part!

Conti soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
her personal saviour !!!!!!!!!!! i love it yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome update. lovd d Present mre dan d past. dnt mnd dear jst my POV. U r a fab wrter. plz plz plz make randhir find hs farzi b4 sm1 harm her more. update soon buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Amazing :) :) :)
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
wow.jst loved it.
loved every bit of it. .
chalo atleast sanyukta accepted randjir as her personal saviour. .
and omg randhir is all thinking about her..
awesome update..
eagerly waiting for the next part. .
update soon.waiting. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Its really interesting... Sanyukta and Randhir both are missing each other. Sanyukta is promising herself and asking Randhir to come for aid and she will never trouble him in future and Randhir enjoyed being getting troubled by her.. both are just hopelessly in love just like serial, its just that they need to realize.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome ss i am speechless i can just say please please please please please continue soon

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