SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Aru!!!!

Where do you go when you're lonely
Where do you go when you're blue
Where do you go when you're lonely
I'll follow you
When the stars go blue
The stars go blue, stars go blue

"When stars go blue" by Ryan Adams! I knew I had heard this song before!!! It seemed sooo familiar when I read it on the train and then it clicked!!!! Duh!

Often we associate the colour blue with calm, composure but also rage, a lot like the ocean! But then again, I have sometimes heard the colour blue being associated with depression... In context with the song, when people loose their spunk, they turn blue and then comes there savior who will never leave their side ?!

I think I might wait for the SS to progress more, before jumping to conclusions😆! But you had me at the title itself😳

The way you tell a narrative is sooo unique!!! It reminded me why I fell in love with The Grease Story all over again! Your expression is flawless and it practically seems effortless as well! You know you have a great story right here!!!

If this is my comment for the prologue, can you imagine the first chapter 🤣... Next take some aspirin and then read my comments🤣

PS: Blue is also my favorite colour sister!

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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@..Mellifluous..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

hey di...

awesome prologue just loved it...

u penned it perfectly and beautifully

it is intriguing plot... and fascinating me alot...

and title is awesome..which i didn't understand😆 but it is beautiful...

and the vocab...hats off..it wwas like perfect...just flawles...

prologue..seems interesting..very interesting...

well here it is randhir only right !!!

well what hpned 15 yrs ago...

am so keenly looking forward to it...

thanks for the pm!!!!

love,harika..keeep smiling...😊😊😊u can take one..they r free...😛

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--
A new SS from Arushi... Hmmm...Can my day have a better start?... Hell, no.
To be very honest I've not come across any of your works and it irks me to no extent to know that I've missed reading the stories of such an awesome writer...

The title of the story was enough for me to know that this story is gonna be something different, rather something special and after reading the prologue I must say I made the right deduction.
If I had any ounce of sanity left in me, you took it way with the prologue. Such a mystic prologue with so many questions... Mind telling me how do you maintain such a suspense quotient?
I've rendered speechless after reading the prologue... spellbound as well..
The curiosity level of my mind has increased by thousand folds..

Now update the first chapter soon and satite my curious and hungry mind...
Damn! If my exams would not have been round the corner, I would have stalked you for updates..
I'll be eagerly waiting for the first chapter.

--With love
Kajal

KAJAL! By starting "Love In A Thousand Years" and your other OS (Sorry, I forgot the name!), you have become one of the most mature (not because of the genres you write about xP) writers of this forum for me! You know what you are saying and I love the sense of direction!

Your day has a better start because of my story? THANK YOU! :* What exactly is it that you are flattering me for? xP

Naw! Don't feel bad about that! You can find a catalog of my work in my siggy! Hope you find the time to read and review after your exams! :D All the very best for them!!

I made you insane? Bah, what a romantic accusation to make! xP

If you think the suspense quotient of this story is high, remember Ridhima's role in Anu's "Meant To Be"? I think that is the real meaning of suspense!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D :*

Each chapter will have a gap of 5 days or a week because I have entrance exams round the corner! :(

How old are you? And what are you studying?

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D :*

Always,

Arushi

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Arushi...if dats wat u call it1!!! an explanation for d title den let me tell u u made me luk into d dictionary for 3 times during dat explanation alone...🤣
n yes...its a sheer pleasure for me to take ur vocab classes...luv u❤️
n btw...ur reply is d same size as my cmnt :p...😆
oops i forgot..ur xams...its okie i will be waiting...

Harita! Bwahahahhahaaa! SO sorry for that! :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..
hey di...
awesome prologue just loved it...
u penned it perfectly and beautifully
it is intriguing plot... and fascinating me alot...
and title is awesome..which i didn't understand😆 but it is beautiful...
and the vocab...hats off..it wwas like perfect...just flawles...
prologue..seems interesting..very interesting...
well here it is randhir only right !!!
well what hpned 15 yrs ago...
am so keenly looking forward to it...
thanks for the pm!!!!
love,harika..keeep smiling...😊😊😊u can take one..they r free...😛

Harika! I'm SO sorry for not being able to reply on any of your stories! Too caught up with entrance exam prep! Thank you SO much for that comment! I'm SO sorry, I really want to explain that title to you but my hands are aching from all that typing! I've told your twin, Harita xP, the meaning! Please read it from my post?

I would love to buy all the smiles I can from you! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting!!! :D :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Bwahahahaa! Very smart you are! xP

It must have been Kriti's comment, na? xD

Oh achha! You and blue! xP

Bored? Find me a sinlge person who gets bored by your comments and I will supply you with your favorite chocolate for this lifetime! *-*

Bwhahahahahaaa! Yeah, now I understand the advantage! xP

Accha! When do you not have to type? xP

Hahaha! This is a secret, shhh! I have kinda hijacked and fixed the timing of my updates for Priri and Tanu to be first! One time, Tanu got SO excited that she RESed before I updated!! xP

You like Naley? Me tooo! Actually, I ADORE OTH! :')

PS. I love your siggy! Friends! \m/

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: gujjupari
Aru!!!!

Where do you go when you're lonely
Where do you go when you're blue
Where do you go when you're lonely
I'll follow you
When the stars go blue
The stars go blue, stars go blue

"When stars go blue" by Ryan Adams! I knew I had heard this song before!!! It seemed sooo familiar when I read it on the train and then it clicked!!!! Duh!

Often we associate the colour blue with calm, composure but also rage, a lot like the ocean! But then again, I have sometimes heard the colour blue being associated with depression... In context with the song, when people loose their spunk, they turn blue and then comes there savior who will never leave their side ?!

I think I might wait for the SS to progress more, before jumping to conclusions😆! But you had me at the title itself😳

The way you tell a narrative is sooo unique!!! It reminded me why I fell in love with The Grease Story all over again! Your expression is flawless and it practically seems effortless as well! You know you have a great story right here!!!

If this is my comment for the prologue, can you imagine the first chapter 🤣... Next take some aspirin and then read my comments🤣

PS: Blue is also my favorite colour sister!

Pari! I LOVE that song! If you notice, most of my stories' titles are songs! xP

You commented in blue too? Yayayayayyy! :*

You watch OTH? The song is in there too! :D

Yep, your analysis of the blue is might awesome! :D

Aah! You are TOO kind, Pari! *hugs and kisses and kisses and hugs for my Gujju ben* :*

Bwahahahaha! I will update only to read comments of reviewers like you, because you are a.w.e.s.o.m.e! :*

Lots and lots of love! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting!

Always,

Arushi

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey Sparky! Just wondering, aapke passport pe aapka ka naam hai? xP

I have seen how profoundly kind you are with your compliments for Anu's stories, and I cannot thank you enough for leaving me this review! As the story progresses, we will discover who the boy is :D

Yeah, same pinch about the chemistry! Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! :D

hehe.. I don't have a passport but I can tell you the name which I have on my PAN card.. its Sonu.. Sonu Gupta.. btw unique way to ask the name.. and about complimenting on anu's stories, yaar I just keep blabbering.. whatever it came into my mind, I just shared it hehehe.. haina.. you also agree na that SanDhir has more chemistry than SaRth.