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Posted: 11 years ago

The late latif that I am. 😛

PROLOGUE

The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the Title was the utterly beautiful song by Ryan Adams and One Tree Hill and how freaking much I miss it! So yeah, you pretty much owned my heart with just the Title. :')
Coming to the story. *scratches head* Where do I start from? Man, I've never faced such a serious case of loss-of-words quite like this. Nothing I pull out from this limited vocabulary of mine will do enough justice to your writing.

"So you come to me when the stars go blue."

The impact of this line cannot be described in words. It has got traces of longing and subtle mystery weaved in and is making me CRAZY to just get to you and make you spill the entire story. You know, I'm the kind of idiot who craves nothing more than mystery novels but skims through the pages just to know what the end story is. Patience has never quite been my best friend. 😛

But damn. Its not a novel I can have my way with. You're going to torture me slowly, aren't you? But its okay. Because the wait comes with a dosage of your ingenious writing. 😳

CHAPTER ONE

Payal (who is mast magan because of exams)
LMAO. 🤣 I can't explain how long you kept me laughing at this. 😆😆😆
But wait. That was a dedication?😃 I think I'm starting to get teary. Not kidding. :') ❤️

She was just another happy girl in another happy world until her family, her life was snatched away from her in a car accident when she was eleven.

So I had this little smile plastered across my face till I came to this line. And then BAM. You wiped it right off. The fault in one's stars logic fit perfectly. Family is the only permanent aspect in this otherwise transient life. Having that snatched away was bound to shrink her emotionally.

While Sanyukta's backstory was palpable, Randhir's just left this gaping hole in my heart. Poverty, sexual assault and absence of schooling are all devils no child should have the misfortune to encounter. To face them all together and the indefinite repercussions they are bound to leave is just...beyond my brain's capability to comprehend. They way you dished it out, dropping one bomb after the other, just about managed to strike all those emblematic heart strings out there. I'm stumped. I'm tormented. I'm happy. I'm teary. In all the good ways. And I just CAN'T wait to know their story. Two unfortunate characters having warred with demons of their own and yet so realistic that you can't help but relate to them.

I can officially say this is the one story I'm going to await the most.

Didn't make much sense, did I? No surprises there. I was supposed to be reading Maxwell's Velocity Distribution but where am I? I blame your choice of title. 😳



Edited by Grenade - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow...superb upt
cont soon


Hey! Please tell me your name?
Thanks SO much for reading and commenting! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Grenade


The late latif that I am. 😛

PROLOGUE

The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the Title was the utterly beautiful song by Ryan Adams and One Tree Hill and how freaking much I miss it! So yeah, you pretty much owned my heart with just the Title. :')
Coming to the story. *scratches head* Where do I start from? Man, I've never faced such a serious case of loss-of-words quite like this. Nothing I pull out from this limited vocabulary of mine will do enough justice to your writing.

"So you come to me when the stars go blue."

The impact of this line cannot be described in words. It has got traces of longing and subtle mystery weaved in and is making me CRAZY to just get to you and make you spill the entire story. You know, I'm the kind of idiot who craves nothing more than mystery novels but skims through the pages just to know what the end story is. Patience has never quite been my best friend. 😛

But damn. Its not a novel I can have my way with. You're going to torture me slowly, aren't you? But its okay. Because the wait comes with a dosage of your ingenious writing. 😳

CHAPTER ONE

Payal (who is mast magan because of exams)
LMAO. 🤣 I can't explain how long you kept me laughing at this. 😆😆😆
But wait. That was a dedication?😃 I think I'm starting to get teary. Not kidding. :') ❤️

She was just another happy girl in another happy world until her family, her life was snatched away from her in a car accident when she was eleven.

So I had this little smile plastered across my face till I came to this line. And then BAM. You wiped it right off. The fault in one's stars logic fit perfectly. Family is the only permanent aspect in this otherwise transient life. Having that snatched away was bound to shrink her emotionally.

While Sanyukta's backstory was palpable, Randhir's just left this gaping hole in my heart. Poverty, sexual assault and absence of schooling are all devils no child should have the misfortune to encounter. To face them all together and the indefinite repercussions they are bound to leave is just...beyond my brain's capability to comprehend. They way you dished it out, dropping one bomb after the other, just about managed to strike all those emblematic heart strings out there. I'm stumped. I'm tormented. I'm happy. I'm teary. In all the good ways. And I just CAN'T wait to know their story. Two unfortunate characters having warred with demons of their own and yet so realistic that you can't help but relate to them.

I can officially say this is the one story I'm going to await the most.

Didn't make much sense, did I? No surprises there. I was supposed to be reading Maxwell's Velocity Distribution but where am I? I blame your choice of title. 😳




Payal! Itna vadda comment! Haila! Going to read it 3 - 4 times before replying xD
Aah! Done reading!
Yes, big late latif you are but I can understand how much exam pressure there must be! :/
So, you are forgiven! :D
Isn't OTH just the most incredible show ever!? :")
Aww! How very nice of you! :*
Thank you SO much for expressing yourself in those words about that line! You made my day! :*
Bahahaa! I hate suspense! I ask people what the surprise is (if there is one for me) and then I act surprised in front of everyone xD
Even while reading a book, I always get tempted and read the last few pages first xD
Bahahaa! Yes, I am going to be very slow with this one! :P

About Chapter 1, I'm glad you laughed and cried! :* :")
Thank you SO much for writing in about this! I can totally feel how highly anticipated this story is and I shall try my very best to make it the best :D
Velocity? Physics? Can I please study for you? xD
Thank you SO much for reading and commenting so beautiphoolly! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
**I am so sorry, I know I am very late in commenting, but then I can't help it**
Even I want chummas too *wink wink*☺️
But firstly I want to give Chummas to you! :-* :-*
This chapter was again one the most beautiful update!
Oh Aru( Don't mind me calling you Aru)! You describe their life very well! They were like poles apart but still of the same Earth! I was dumbstruck by Randhir's character sketch! He is totally different! A responsible and caring Adonis!
Sanyukta lost her parents so early, and then she became so Cold! Thank god, at least Kaustaki was there for her!
Randhir on other hand, was no less than Sanyukta, he had too suffered like her! He is such a caring boy!😳 What the hell I read??????? He was sexually assaulted by his Uncle😲! I can't believe it!
It's the most shocking C.S. that I have read! Aru, this SS is definitely gonna be Unique! Hell! Randhir's family had to suffer so much! Aru, you are making me emotional!😭 Randhir is a Escort even! It was the least I guessed! Don't think that I have problems with Escorts, but its the first time when I am seeing such a AVTAR of Randhir!^_^
You are impressing me day by day Aru! You describe the chapter beautifully, especially the C.S. of Randhir! I would be waiting for more such updates!

Love
Sanju😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

TFIOS :') I have yet to read the book, but I so desperately DESPERATELY want to!! God, I need to start earning monaaay! And start buying some books!! xP

Sanyukta's parents died? :O WWHHYYY YOU DO THIS? WHYYY??
*sniff sniff*
Cruel Potato :P
OMFG. Randhir was...was...assaulted??? God, I can't even...This is going to be an angsty, heart-wrenching-and-throwing-it-on-the-floor, tears-inducing, depression-jagaoing story.
Angst is my drug, I live for it. But, you're gonna tear us all apart, aren't you? :'(

Kudos to you, Aru, for doing this. This is what cooks in your mind? There's more to you then meets the eye, my friend. So much more. :'O
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue


Ananya, you stalker! SO much talent? xP I didn't stalk iss baar, I was just lucky xD
Bwahahaa! You seem so cool and carefree that you pass off as free and lukhi xP I am cool 😆
I LOVE CSK too! Did I tell you that? Sorry for that random piece of blabber! AHH, another CSK lover <3 Any reason? 😆
You MUST read TFIOS! He has written the book so effin' brilliantly that you would never want it to end, let alone happily! Seriously? :O That good?
Aww, bwahahaha! I ate bhindi and roti! You want to try too? xP I would love too 🤣
Thank you for getting into the intricacies of this one, Anu! Anytime 😆
What is really tough? Sorry, having a conphused moment xP Making two characters seem like complete opposites when they're not xD
You'l know about the birthday soon! :D Can't wait xD
REALLY? This is TOO much to handle in a day! Published? *smacks herself on the head and pinches her skin red to make sure she right the right thing* Ananya, what do I do or say to tell how just how much this means? :") I'm serious. Kuch bhi bol lo. 😆

I LOVE YOU! Tanu and you are the two adorable chhotu sisters I always wanted! :* Aww, I LOVE YOU TOO <3

PS. I don't watch HIMYM. Just know the dialogue xP Oh. It was worth a try. 😆

Hahahaa! Lucky you! xD Yes, yes xD
Main reasons: Dhoni, Raina, Albie Morkel and Ashwin! :D SAMEEE. But Morkel isn't there now x(
I swear, Anu! It is that damn good. WOW.
Oh that tough thing? I'm good with tough things, so what can I say? xP
Naw, just kidding! I'm SO glad you thought that after reading! :D Accha? xD
Mujhe tumse bas yeh bolna hai ki "The sun goes down, the stars come out and all that counts is here and now, my universe will never be the same, I'm glad you came"! :* The Wanted? :/ I like that song though 🤣
Bwahahaa! Nice try, chhoti Anu xD Bas Nice? </3 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arushi tuje update karna hai ki nai ???

itni padhayi ?? gosh..muje b bata kaisay concentrate karte hain yar...muje bht zarurat hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krisrock

**I am so sorry, I know I am very late in commenting, but then I can't help it**

Even I want chummas too *wink wink*☺️
But firstly I want to give Chummas to you! :-* :-*
This chapter was again one the most beautiful update!
Oh Aru( Don't mind me calling you Aru)! You describe their life very well! They were like poles apart but still of the same Earth! I was dumbstruck by Randhir's character sketch! He is totally different! A responsible and caring Adonis!
Sanyukta lost her parents so early, and then she became so Cold! Thank god, at least Kaustaki was there for her!
Randhir on other hand, was no less than Sanyukta, he had too suffered like her! He is such a caring boy!😳 What the hell I read??????? He was sexually assaulted by his Uncle😲! I can't believe it!
It's the most shocking C.S. that I have read! Aru, this SS is definitely gonna be Unique! Hell! Randhir's family had to suffer so much! Aru, you are making me emotional!😭 Randhir is a Escort even! It was the least I guessed! Don't think that I have problems with Escorts, but its the first time when I am seeing such a AVTAR of Randhir!^_^
You are impressing me day by day Aru! You describe the chapter beautifully, especially the C.S. of Randhir! I would be waiting for more such updates!

Love
Sanju😳


Sanju! No problem about the comment! It doesn't matter how early or late it comes. All that matters is that it does :D
Here! Take all these chummas! :* :* :* :*
Aww, thank you! :D
Of course, I don't mind you calling me that! :D
CS? :?
Thank you SO SO much for reading and commenting! :D :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TheDreamyKid


TFIOS :') I have yet to read the book, but I so desperately DESPERATELY want to!! God, I need to start earning monaaay! And start buying some books!! xP

Sanyukta's parents died? :O WWHHYYY YOU DO THIS? WHYYY??
*sniff sniff*
Cruel Potato :P
OMFG. Randhir was...was...assaulted??? God, I can't even...This is going to be an angsty, heart-wrenching-and-throwing-it-on-the-floor, tears-inducing, depression-jagaoing story.
Angst is my drug, I live for it. But, you're gonna tear us all apart, aren't you? :'(

Kudos to you, Aru, for doing this. This is what cooks in your mind? There's more to you then meets the eye, my friend. So much more. :'O


Priri! All my pestering finally got you to comment! xD
YOU HAVE TO READ THAT BOOOK! If you would have told me, I would have gifted it to you for your birthday this year xD
Bahahaa! Woman, you gotta earn it! xD
I don't intend to tear you apart (though in my wildest fantasies, I would love to xP), because I hope to give you this story as "really" as possible!
Hahaa! This, and many more things cook in my mind! I guess you'll never know xP
Thenkoo SO much for reading and commenting SO soon, you lajee dozy! xD

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nafees5

Arushi tuje update karna hai ki nai ???

itni padhayi ?? gosh..muje b bata kaisay concentrate karte hain yar...muje bht zarurat hai


Hey Naira! My net was misbehaving these past few days! Will update in a day or two! :D

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