SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 23

*gapes at the post* *speechless* *sniffs tearfully* *claps frantically*

Oh.My.God. You are one helluva brilliant writer! I usually don't bother leaving reviews...because most of the time I have nothing to say. But I am glad I read this story...I just couldn't resist commenting! Its so different from other stories in the forum. So poignant...and realistic. Quite different from your previous Grease story! Shows what a versatile writer you are!

Incest is a really sensitive topic...and you are brave to pen down such a story. I had goosebumps while reading it. Your words managed to rouse that feeling of disgust while reading about Randhir's trauma. And the title is brilliant too! I want to read TFIOS...infact I did start reading...but I am sucker for happy endings...so gonna have to wait till I am in a morbid enough mood!

Thnks for the PM. Please do continue PMing me! I can't promise to review every time...but I will definitely 'like' the chappie! Keep writing and rocking!

P.S: Dekho...main itna royi ki tissue khatam ho gaye! Hehe...kidding. But I can see this is going to be angsty,tear-jerker story. Koi nai! I will keep my handkerchief ready!

Title:*thumbs up*Read--> cry--> repeat

Originally posted by: IheartDramione

*gapes at the post* *speechless* *sniffs tearfully* *claps frantically*

Oh.My.God. You are one helluva brilliant writer! I usually don't bother leaving reviews...because most of the time I have nothing to say. But I am glad I read this story...I just couldn't resist commenting! Its so different from other stories in the forum. So poignant...and realistic. Quite different from your previous Grease story! Shows what a versatile writer you are!

Incest is a really sensitive topic...and you are brave to pen down such a story. I had goosebumps while reading it. Your words managed to rouse that feeling of disgust while reading about Randhir's trauma. And the title is brilliant too! I want to read TFIOS...infact I did start reading...but I am sucker for happy endings...so gonna have to wait till I am in a morbid enough mood!

Thnks for the PM. Please do continue PMing me! I can't promise to review every time...but I will definitely 'like' the chappie! Keep writing and rocking!

P.S: Dekho...main itna royi ki tissue khatam ho gaye! Hehe...kidding. But I can see this is going to be angsty,tear-jerker story. Koi nai! I will keep my handkerchief ready!

Originally posted by: Dancindoll8

Title:*thumbs up*Read--> cry--> repeat

Her smile didn't quite reach her eyes. His smile never saw the light of day or the frost of night.

What a brilliant start!

This one line just summarised their pain and anguish and instantly got my attention and what followed was nothing short of perfection. .

I just loved the way you wrote it and also the way you structured it all..

You gave the characters new dimensions and added to their aura..

The completely new, real and brave storyline if I may add is like a breath of fresh air...

Randhir's past especially made me want to reach out to him..

The way you wrote it all made me feel the disgust, pain and the physical and mental trauma and this should just tell you the power of your words and skill...

Take a bow for writing about such a sensitive issue with such maturity and care...

The way you have portrayed the harsh reality of life especially of the poorer section of the society is commendable. ..

Looking forward to more of this...

Keep updating fast as it will give me all the more incentive to come online...

p.s.unresed on page I dont know

Originally posted by: nafees5

Arushi janeeman, this was spectacular!
i've told u that this story is gripping..n don't need to tell u that brilliantly u portray emotions of each n every character,u know it ,right ?😎
but but but, i cannot stop myself from telling u that...

You r writing a Masterpiece!!

mtlb muje samj nai aa raha ki how beguilingly u write about such a sensitive topic..hats off girl!!
loved the way jis tarah say tumne donu k pasts ko describe kia hai..there is that depth that touched my heart,really👍🏼

now i'm waiting to rea more of this story..jab b fursat milay..update kariyo..intezaar rahega..

Well done!

lots of love n jhappie paapie

from naira❤️🤗
(now ua official fan)😉

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Hey di...

sorry for late...busy with exams now am free...

coming to the update...

it was awesome and amazing...

ur vocab is just wonderful...i should search meanings in google...

urs and priya's is just awesome...

u penned it beautifully and perfectly...

it was just flawles...

sanyukta should suffer that much at tender stage...

randhir also same..he worked four jobs...OMG..he also suffered a lot...

kastuki is der to support sanyukta...am glad she is sanyukta's friends

The quote is just perfect...I liked it...

u r hell a brilliant writer...

this is completely different from ur previous story na...

overalll it was marvelous...fabulous..stupendous...

love,harika...keep smiling...it costs only two lips...

Ohh my... Randhir's past was so... Heart wrenching... Cruel...
Sanyukta's as well... But not so much is mentioned about her...
Waiting for it...

This ff is on a very different topic.. Keeps you grounded and aware of the harsh reality... Not everyone is born with a silver spoon in the mouth... And even if they do.. It may not last for long.. Kal kya ho..kisne dekha hai..

Nice flight... Waiting for you to be airborne :-)

Thanks for the pm!!
Continue soon!

Originally posted by: Shiya1206

Ohh my... Randhir's past was so... Heart wrenching... Cruel...
Sanyukta's as well... But not so much is mentioned about her...
Waiting for it...

This ff is on a very different topic.. Keeps you grounded and aware of the harsh reality... Not everyone is born with a silver spoon in the mouth... And even if they do.. It may not last for long.. Kal kya ho..kisne dekha hai..

Nice flight... Waiting for you to be airborne :-)

Thanks for the pm!!
Continue soon!