SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 22

Originally posted by: federized2210

Aru,

What an update yaar!!! What an update!!

Spell-bounding!

I am so glad u chose this topic...I've always wanted to read something like this, but i'm not at all apt for this genre and so never tried my hand at writing it! But u weave magic with ur words!!!

Loved Sanyukta's intro to the core!

Loved Randhir's ever more!!

Hey did that just rhyme??🤣

Loved the end bit!!! I'm expecting a lot from this story. I always expect a lot from u!!!!

The quote at the beginning clinched it!!

Such fine language!

I would have typed longer, but today m down with fever and so I'm, for this once, leaving a short review!

Waiting eagerly for chapter 2!

Bring it on girl👏

Love u loads.

Always an ardent reader of your works,

Anu❤️

PS: 'The fault in our stars' is just WOW!!!!😃

Also, the dedication was ...expected🤣

I'm not gonna be formal and thank u for it!!!

We're too 'close' to be thanking each other!

By 'we' I mean all the KBGs!!!

No pun intended🤣

Originally posted by: anki08

Arushi,,

When you update,,it feels like my wait for an eternity has come to a halt...So magnificient you are that i just literally crave for words that could truly entitle you..

Your words have power to transport a reader into a new horizon altogether...I am literally diving in waves of your unmatched brilliance..You have your own niche,,it will be a mockery to search your comparisons..You set standards every time you pen down..Your works are free flowing,,free from every bondage and shackle,,you invoke the sense of "just going ahead"in the reader...

This SS of yours,,is a harsh reality of millions of teens out there...We often tend to believe males to be the mightier but thats not the case always..."Boys dont cry",,thats what we all readily assume but this SS is a poignant satire on this...

It is an eye opener..I will not demean this SS of yours by calling it love story...It is beyond that...It is a story of strength,,endurance and unmatched will power that two teenagers are portraying,,each in his/her own way...Ofcourse,,love will add another dimension to it...

You ,,Arushi have stunned me with this plot of yours..Your writings are not hidden behind a veil of fiction..These are much more in concordance with the reality..I am glad that i have got a chance to come across you...

Love you and admire you loads...

Himani...

Originally posted by: UnnatiArjuhi

Awesome .
Unique concept .
This story is more of reality then fan fiction .

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

PARI! Master of emotions? Naw! You lie SO well! xD *Thappaad!* You are tooo modest duhling!

Most Gujjus are a curse to the world, no offense to anyone. I can't believe I detest them so much in spite of being one. All the "panchaat" they do always gets to me! OMG!!! I have met my soul mate!!!!! I detest the whole concept of gossiping and then being two-faced! Pisses me off!

Sanyukta's past will be explored in further updates! Please enlighten me about why you think her past wasn't mentioned! :DNot here! Otherwise I shall feel guilty like last time (that is if what I am presuming is right... See you should be cocky once in a while as well😆)

I can't wait for June 6 too! That trailer was love! <3

Yep, we live in this big bubble that has to be popped real soon! I'm not saying that there isn't happiness, but just that people undermine its value! And what better person to teach us the pursuit and value of happiness than you! I love this topic! And like baba, it too is close to me & I also cried when watching Satyamev Jayate (season 1)... Not entirely devoid of emotions😆

I hope as much as you do that I be able to handle this topic with care! I KNOW you will do complete justice to it!

Thank you SO much, Pari! Always! :*I ❤️ you more sister! Update real soon!

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Arushi!!!! u r being such a gud girl updating on time👍🏼
d quote was too gud👏..omg d way u started was awe striking
okay now u r telling us d past of our heroes...ohh god poor sanyukta she must hav gone through hell at dat tender age😒..n kaustuki her frnd since childhood😛...its gud dat kaustuki is here to support sanyukta😊..on d other hand i can't even imagine Randhir's life..working all d day n still they cudn't live a happy life😔..ufff child abuse seriously😲..i jus feel very sad for Randhir..yes they moved to delhi but did he forget his past😕...acha a male escort..soo dats y he was wid sanyukta in d prologue no??? grt dat he have some self respect😳
dis story is still a question mark to me..i wonder how they met n wt happened n wt happens in d future..btw how is ur prep for xams..gud luck for ur xams..n for d record dis time u made me check d dictionary for 3 times!!!! u jus amaze me Aru..u jus write like a professional 👏
i m truly blessed to read ur work Aru...🤗
next update after 5 days???? i ll be waiting...❤️

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

~Unres~

First of all I'm really SoRRy...I thought that I had commented for the prologue too but I just realized that I didn't!🤣

Short-term-memory...you see🤣

The title!! I'm in love with your and Anu's title selection skills.🤣 Seriously they are like one of a kind.

As for the prologue, obviously the plot is bound to get interesting when its written by the author of "The Grease Story". You know..how I heart GS. That's one of my fav. till date!

The Chapter.

The chapter was quite interesting. The way you described their dwindled lives and adversity is the thing I loved the most!

You are an exquisite writer and cosmos of words. [I said this to Anu once and I won't be wrong if I say this to you too.]

Needless to say I'm hooked to the story!

Solicitously Waiting for the next part.

Update ASAP.

Love ya

Samaira (Remember me?)