SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 18

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

res

UNRESERVED.

I'm first, I'm first, I'm first *dances*

Vaah, with the number of stalkers you have, I'm surprised I managed to res first 🤣 but hey, you are what you are 😆

And vaah, you added me to this list too 😲

Why do people have the impression that I am lukhi and velli? 🤔

I am, in fact, not velli at all. 😳

Tch tch. Kuch toh log kahenge, logon ka kaam hai kehna. 😳

About TFIOS, I don't know whether I should read it. I'm a sucker for happy endings. 🤔 One of my classmates is forcing me to read it and I want to read it but I don't want to read it. Urgh. 🤓

What were you thinking when you wrote this? Seriously, what. Kya khaake likha tune behen? Damn, it is SO good. This has got to be the most unique story I've read on SanDhir till date. The characters are gripping and their pasts have been given a lot of thought. Their characters are so unique. Who would have thought Randhir could have been sexually molested instead of the female lead. And that too by a male. And both the characters are so different. I couldn't find one similarity other than the determination. That, my friend, is really tough, according to me.

And then the b'day invite. Is he the stripper there or something? Urghhh, so intriguing.

I agree with Flames and Pari, you've officially become the best writer of this forum. 🤗 It kept me hooked and your vocabulary is brilliant too.

Aruu, this one could be published. Honest to god, it could be.

Absolutely loved it woman. Absolutely did.

Originally posted by: Prizi

Too good

Originally posted by: lastsong

Res!!

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Hey!!😊

This was one hell of a chapter!!!

You penned it down so beautifully!! You have amazing vocabulary!! I wish I could write like you :)

They both have painful past!!

Incest is such a sensitive topic!! My heart goes out to those who had to go through something so awful!!

The story is so refreshing!! You are so articulate and eloquent. The quote at the begging was brilliant!!

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!

Thanks for the PM😊

-Kaetki ❤️

P.S-I never told you my name😆 I have read your FF 'The Greasy Story' and was a silent reader but couldn't resist myself on commenting on this one!!😃 And yeah 'The Greasy Story' was an amazing story.I never wanted it to end.

Originally posted by: gujjupari

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You are a master of emotions behena! 👏

I have heard that saying, "The fault in your stars" tooo many times! I think Gujjus are just born with a capability to degrade other Gujjus

Anyways, Sanyukta's past is interesting! Lost her family at a young age, and was brought up by distant family members... Interesting that you didn't delve in to her past... And I know exactly why! (maybe?!)..

On a side note, The Fault in Our Stars is just brilliant! I can't wait for the movie to come!!!! 6th June!!!!! Might have exams then, but oh welll... Trailer was really goood😃

And Randhir's past was just painful to read! I have read "Lolita" and that was a torture... Incest is just a horrendous crime! Period! And it really does scar children!

I love how sensitively you have portrayed the harsh reality of life!

I am really happy that you have chosen this topic! We think that the world is all joyous and dreamy, but there are always stories like such! And I hope, actually I know, that you will treat it with sensitivity and care!

Conti sooon!!!

PS: Naaaw! You mentioned my name😳... I love ya Gujju behena 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

unres on pg 17

PS:I am thodusa gussa u should hv said me before I would have loved to be first to comment!

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Res!

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Res!!!

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ARUSHI DI!!!!!!!😊😊😊

You dedicated this part to meee!

OMG!!!I am really on cloud 9!😳😳😳

Thank you very much for this dedication!😊

I have heard about The Fault In Our Stars from Saachi and now u!

She said me that u asked her to read it!

And from that day I am hearing the name of book so many times!

Those starting lines are SOOO TRUE AND DAMN AWESOME!

Sanyukta is a rich and orphan girl

I feel sad for her!

But she really is a talented girl who is handling the business of her dad

After reading about Randhir I had tears in my eyes 😭😭

His childhood was so rough

I can't even imagine how much pain he must have gone through

After reading that invitation I think so Sanyukta is gonna call at the agency and Randhir will be the escort I mean date!😊

AGAIN THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE DEDICATION!😊Means a lot to me!

And SORRY for late reply I was out of town😊

-In Hope of Loads of Update😉

& Love 😊

-Prachi😊

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Ananya, you stalker! SO much talent? xP I didn't stalk iss baar, I was just lucky xD

Bwahahaa! You seem so cool and carefree that you pass off as free and lukhi xP I am cool 😆

I LOVE CSK too! Did I tell you that? Sorry for that random piece of blabber! AHH, another CSK lover <3 Any reason? 😆

You MUST read TFIOS! He has written the book so effin' brilliantly that you would never want it to end, let alone happily! Seriously? :O That good?

Aww, bwahahaha! I ate bhindi and roti! You want to try too? xP I would love too 🤣

Thank you for getting into the intricacies of this one, Anu! Anytime 😆

What is really tough? Sorry, having a conphused moment xP Making two characters seem like complete opposites when they're not xD

You'l know about the birthday soon! :D Can't wait xD

REALLY? This is TOO much to handle in a day! Published? *smacks herself on the head and pinches her skin red to make sure she right the right thing* Ananya, what do I do or say to tell how just how much this means? :") I'm serious. Kuch bhi bol lo. 😆

I LOVE YOU! Tanu and you are the two adorable chhotu sisters I always wanted! :* Aww, I LOVE YOU TOO <3

PS. I don't watch HIMYM. Just know the dialogue xP Oh. It was worth a try. 😆

Originally posted by: sachi123

ARUSHI! Darling, I am so impressed by your writing skills! Take a bow Roomie! Your Writing makes me Happy :D! Thank You for Writing this :D! I love you so much for recommending me The Fault in Our Stars and also including it in your SS! I guess Highway had quite a big impact on you! Also, I can see a lot of Fans for you! You are Popular girl :P :D! A Suggestion by a Not-so-vocabulary-girl :- Please use simpler language so that common people like me can understand. And also simpler language makes Writing Relative and Understanding :P! Please, do not point out grammatical mistakes everywhere :P! I hope I did not ask too much!
Keep Writing More and More!
Love,
Sachi.