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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: chavvi16

almost missed it
if only nani knew
damn that was so funny
okay not funny but cute
he is gone
hook line and sinker baby
ab inka kuch nahin ho sakta
really dude
jealous of aki
when you know he loves payal only
bless who would have thought
he would fall in love at first sight
but of course he did
and boy was he mesmerised
and lost in her
haiyye can picture it in my mind him doing that
man this was so cute
hmmm what a dream that was
as if she would do that so soon aru
but like where your imagination sorry kalpana is going
cheers for pm
this is start of it all naa
and there is more to come yipeee

Glad you could imagine the scenes!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: fffan123

Hayee Kya update tha. Fabulous.

Jab se tere Naina is my favorite song and I was imagining the ARHI dance while reading it. Brilliant.

If only Nani knew what her grandson was really thinking when he answered that he was thinking about meeting 😆 😆 😆 She would have immediately married Akdu Singh Raizada to Miss. I-Love-To-Fight.

Looking forward to next part Kalpana.

If getting AK married is Naani's response to knowing what Arnav was thinking then I am thankful she cannnot read minds! Warna meri story ki toh start se pehle end ho jaati!😆
Glad you could imagine the song sequence and that song is one of my favs too!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Fantastic start

Aww poor Arnav, Khushi didn't even notice his charming personality.
He has fallen in love with at first sight.
Oh the beautiful dance was all his thoughts
I love Naniji hilarious comment that he even think about his meetings in his thoughts too.
Khushi has distracted Arnav brilliantly that now I think he won't breath at peace neither think about romancing his files and business meeting till he makes Khushi his forever.

Agree with your last line!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: zaya93200

arnav and khushi

a couple that was completely
out of my mind a few month
but after reading this
i fell in love with them again

Feeling proud that I made you fall in love with them again!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: saima4744

arnav unbieleve able.

how he jujed her wrong.he still thinking that khush and aki r seeng each others.
what the.
song nice.
his dream was also very amazing.
simply dream her waist and hand in hand.
nani brock his shell.
he came in realty that he was dreaming.
tf pm.

Khushi and Aki seeing each other???????
I think you are confusing this story with Kahaani Zubaani!😆😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: archa2810

seriously?? meeting?? only arnav can come up with such excuses... stupid raizada!!

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
any chance of an update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

any chance of an update😃

Expect one tomorrow!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39


PART 2. THE PRELUDE TO DHOOM DHADAKKA!

From the day of the sangeet, Arnav had only one wish and that was to talk to angel who changed his life with one glimpse of her face. Her beauty entranced him, her smile stole his breath and her innocence made a place in his heart unknown to him. Yes; unknown to him! Arnav did not know why he was stupefied the moment she was in front of him, but all he knew was that he had to see her, talk to her once atleast! Arnav did not know that he was falling for her; all he knew was that he wanted to know more about the angel who had entered his life and turned it upside down.

So the very next day after Sangeet, Arnav got up with only one wish; talk to his angel once! By the time he got dressed and ready for the day, the haldi function had started. He entered the hall and watched as his brother was put haldi. He was amused at how funny his brother was looking but refused to show any expression on his face. Afterall, he had an image to maintain. At first he searched the hall for a glimpse of Khushi but after a while it struck him that Khushi would be attending the bride's haldi! He sighed as he realized that the girl side haldi was going on in another room and hence, he won't be able to see Khushi right away! As he turned to walk back to his room disappointed, someone called for him. He turned around to see his Naaniji standing there with a smile on her face, "Arnav Bitwa! Humaara ek kaam kardijiye!" Arnav looked at her curiously and she handed him a bowl filled with haldi, "Aapanke yahaan riwaaz hai ki wahi haldi ladki ko lagegi jo ladke ko lagi hai! Toh kya aapan jaake ladki waalon ko yeh shubh haldi de aayenge?"

Arnav felt happiness burst in his chest as he realized that his Naaniji was unknowingly fulfilling his wish to see Khushi! He would have hugged his Naani and kissed her cheeks if it hadn't been for his image! He looked at his Naani sternly. Even though inside his heart firecrackers were bursting, outside he refrained from showing his happiness. He had to give a token protest to maintain his image, right? So Arnav folded his arms against his chest and looked away with stern expression on his face, "Aur kisi ko bhej dijiye Naani! Main nahi jaaunga!" Naaniji pouted, "Arnav bitwa! Ee shagun ka saamaan hai! Parivaar waale ke haath hi jaana chaahiye!" Arnav frowned and pointed at his sister who was prancing around her brother teasing him by applying haldi all over him, "Di ko bhejiye phir! Main hi kyun?" Naaniji huffed, "Theek hai! Hum uu ko hi bhej dete hain! Lekin yaad rakhiye Chote aapan humaar dil dukha rahe hain!"

Naaniji turned to walk away and Arnav's eyes widened. Oh no! Yeh kya hogaya Arnav! She was supposed to force him more, not walk away. He grabbed the bowl from Naani's hands and mumbled, "Aap bura kyun maan rahi hai Naani? Main jaata hoon na!" Naaniji smiled at him proudly and Arnav walked away with the bowl of haldi in his hands.

As Arnav entered the room the first person he saw was Khushi who was just coming towards the door, smiling at someone nearby, not noticing him. Arnav stood still as he stared at her. Dressed in a yellow salwar kameez to match with the haldi theme, she looked as beautiful as sunbeams lightening the room. His eyes widened as he realized that he was thinking like a poet. As she neared the place where he was standing, her eyes took notice of him and she stilled; her eyes, her smile, her expression froze as if in shock. She looked away from him, her eyes darting around rapidly as if she was nervous. Nervous? But why would she be nervous? Arnav dismissed the thought and spoke up, "Woh... Naani ne haldi bheja hai!"

Arnav's voice jerked her out of her thoughts violently and her wide eyes stared at him with fear. Yes! Arnav was sure now. It was fear and nervousness he saw not only in her expression but also in her body language. But why is she scared of me? Before he could think anymore, she grabbed the bowl from his hand and scrambled off in hurry. Definitely scared of me, but why? Arnav had no answer.

Arnav did not see Khushi again the whole afternoon but not for the want of trying. He had sneaked around, eavesdropped conversations, snooped the whole place but she was either not in the place itself or was actively hiding from him. And remembering the fear and nervousness in her eyes, Arnav had his bets on latter.

Finally in the evening, Arnav had a glimpse of Khushi again when he went with his Daadima, Di and rest of the family except the groom as Ladkewaale for the Paayal's mehendi ceremony. He was again mesmerized as Khushi danced on various hindi bollywood songs related to mehendi. But he also noticed her hesitation as she came near him to serve juices and snacks. He had to do something. This was getting ridiculous. How was he supposed to speak to her if she was kept on scrambling away the moment she saw him?

As the mehendi function ended and his family mingled amongst the crowd, Arnav sat beside Paayal who gave him a smile. Having known him from the time she dated Aakash, she knew that behind his hard exterior there was a soft hearted man. Of course, Khushi refuse to believe it when Paayal told her that! But Paayal could not fault her. Arnav had that commanding and intimidating presence that put everyone around him immediately on guard and scared for their life.

After a while, Arnav could not stop himself from talking to Paayal about Khushi.

"Yeh tumhaari behen thodi ajeeb hai!"

"Arnavji! Aapka matlab?"

"Matlab... Pata nahi kyun mujhe dekhke door bhaag jaati hai!"

"Woh... Arnavji! Anjaan logon se humaari Khushi bahut darti hai! Sab se choti haina toh hum sabne use bahut sahej kar paala!"

Arnav wanted to shout; he was not anjaan was he? He was her family through her sister. Ab main kya karun? Paayal smiled softly, "Par hum aapko ek ajeeb baat bataayein?" Arnav was not interested in idle gossip but he could not tell his sister-in-law to shut up, right?

"Khushi ki ek badi ajeeb aadat hai!"

Arnav's ears perked up at any information on Khushi.

"Woh na ghusse mein kisise bhi lad padti hai! Jis insaan se use darr lagta hai usi se bhi ladegi agar uss insaan ne use ghussa dilaaya toh! Ek baar use ghussa dilaao sab darr varr gaayab!"

Soon, Paayal's attention was diverted by her friends and Arnav was left with his own thoughts. And think he did! So Madam tum ghusse mein kisise bhi lad padti ho? Toh kya tum mujhse bhi ladogi? Ya darke bhaagogi? Kal pata karna padega ki kya yeh Angel jhagadti bhi hai?

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
aur banayiye apni image
due to that only she was afraid of you
but then she is afraid of strangers
really aap khushi ke kya lagte hain
its not like aap unke directly kuch lagte hain
thats what i should have said
waise toh rishta hain tedha medha
iss liye toh janab aap se hain woh door door
hmmm he was so waiting to run and see his angel
but no he didnt show it
teri image ki toh
beta khushi teri image ki dhazziyan uda sakti hai ab
well she has the right ammo naa
anyway thats for later
nani gave him reason to see his angel
but bhai sahab over karr baithe
if only dadi knew right
but best she dont
we dont want her fainting do we
so he starts to make her angry with him
this way he can talk to her
and she too will respond
thanx payal you are a life saver
cheers for pm
so he fell in love with her and didnt know
awww so cute naa
and khushi avoiding aru
that sure was cute
man he was stalking her
haila who that this day would happen either
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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