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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: chavvi16

aur banayiye apni image
due to that only she was afraid of you
but then she is afraid of strangers
really aap khushi ke kya lagte hain
its not like aap unke directly kuch lagte hain
thats what i should have said
waise toh rishta hain tedha medha
iss liye toh janab aap se hain woh door door
hmmm he was so waiting to run and see his angel
but no he didnt show it
teri image ki toh
beta khushi teri image ki dhazziyan uda sakti hai ab
well she has the right ammo naa
anyway thats for later
nani gave him reason to see his angel
but bhai sahab over karr baithe
if only dadi knew right
but best she dont
we dont want her fainting do we
so he starts to make her angry with him
this way he can talk to her
and she too will respond
thanx payal you are a life saver
cheers for pm
so he fell in love with her and didnt know
awww so cute naa
and khushi avoiding aru
that sure was cute
man he was stalking her
haila who that this day would happen either

🤣 Laughed the whole time I read this review, parents thought I have gone mad!😆
Thanks for it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52


PART 3. DHOOM DHADAKKA ARNAV STYLE! PART I

The day of Aakash and Paayal's wedding dawned bright and clear and Arnav woke up with excitement bursting through his veins. Today was the day he was going to get Miss. Khushi Kumari Gupta talking to him either by hook or by crook. He smirked as he remembered his plan; get Khushi Kumari Gupta angry enough that she starts speaking to him. And once done with that, he will ask for forgiveness and explain why he got her angry! And then he would ask whether they could be friends and so that he could talk to her whenever he wanted to! How he was going to make her angry, he had no idea! But he was sure he could figure something out, after all he was Arnav Singh Raizada!

As he reached the hall, dressed up in his best three piece suit, his eyes widened in excitement as he saw Khushi prancing around the hall going towards the mandap with basket full of flowers in her arms dressed in maroon sharara. Arnav stared at her with wonder. Suddenly, an idea to get her angry entered his mind and he smirked. He pulled out his mobile and started walking towards Khushi. He kept his eyes on his mobile acting as if he was concentrating on it when all the while his concentration was actually focused on Khushi coming right towards him while looking up and mumbling to herself. He counted in his mind:

5

4

3

2

1

And BAM!

Khushi crashed into Arnav and both went flying down. Arnav fell down with Khushi right on top of him with flowers from Khushi's basket floating all over them. Arnav looked at Khushi who had her eyes closed tightly and was stunned to see her so close. He had expected them to crash and her to start shouting but he did not expect her lying on him and being close to him. He stared at her mesmerized. She looks like freshly bloomed deep dark red rose today in maroon Sharara; Arnav thought absentmindedly and then widened his eyes as he realized that he was again thinking like a poet! Right at that moment, Khushi opened her right eye and looked right at him. When she realized that she fell on Arnav, she opened both her eyes wide and looked at him in shock. She gulped and looked at him in horror.

Arnav sighed mentally; yeh toh abhi bhi mujhse darr rahi hai! Chalo Arnav bitwa! Apna infamous ghussa dikhaao jisse tumhaare Office employees kaamp uthte hain aur iss angel ko ghussa dilaao!

, "Uthne ka kasht karogi tum?"

"Huh!"

"Uthogi ya godh mein uthaaun?"

"Nahi!"

Arnav waited for Khushi to start fighting but the moment Khushi got up she was more interested in adjusting her Duppatta. That's it! Arnav had to take drastic step to get her talking.

"DEKHKE NAHI CHAL SAKTI? ANDHI HO KYA?", Arnav roared at her. Arnav expected Khushi to fight back but what he did not expect was her transformation from demure village belle to roaring tigress. Her eyes spat fire while her whole body language screamed fury. Her face showed outrage while her mouth opened and showered her wrath on him. Arnav was mesmerized by her.

"Kya kahaa aapne? Hum andhe hain? Aur aap kya hain? Khud dekhke chalte nahi aur humpe chillaate hain!"

"Kya?"

While Arnav glared at her, inside his heart jumped in happiness. She was talking to him! His mind started singing; I am the best! I am the best! I am the best!

"Tum kya kehna chaahti ho? Ki galti meri hai?"

"Haan!"

"WHAT?",

"Dekhiye Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada! Aap humpe galat ilzaam laga rahe hain! Aur Khushi Kumaari Gupta yeh bardaasht nahi kar sakti!"

"Ilzaam? Toh kya tum mujhse takraayi nahi? Haan? Bolo?"

Suddenly Khushi looked up and spoke, "Hey Devi Maiyya! Dekhiye inhein! Kya bol rahe hai? Takraaye toh yeh bhi the! Toh galti sirf humaari kyun?" Arnav looked at the ceiling incredulously. Is she serious? She is talking to the ceiling?

Arnav looked down and his eyes fell on his Naaniji coming towards them. His eyes widened; if his Naaniji saw them together she will start planning his marriage with Khushi. No thank you! He loved his confirmed bachelor status. Run Arnav Run! By the time Khushi looked down, Arnav had vanished.

Arnav hid himself away from Khushi and Naaniji for a while as he reassessed the situation and adjusted his strategy accordingly. After a while, Arnav came out of his hiding place, and his Naaniji found him who informed him that Aakash was coming with the Baaraat. Arnav and Naaniji had come over to the hall early to make sure everything went smoothly while Anjali and other family members came with Aakash in the Baaraat.

Soon Arnav was standing beside Aakash stupefied as Khushi sweet talked Aakash like a nymph and managed to extract money from him. Arnav was befuddled by her charm, innocence and her beauty. But of course he did not know that! All he knew was that he wanted to talk to his angel again.

With the aim of talking to her, Arnav walked towards Khushi exactly when her mother called Khushi to get Paayal down and Khushi turned around.

CRASH!

Khushi slammed right into Arnav.

"Aap?"

Arnav was about to open his mouth to apologise to her about crashing into her now and earlier too when Khushi continued.

"Dekhke nahi chal sakte aap? Har waqt takraana jaroori hai kya?"

Arnav stared at her astounded. Sexy! That was the only word which flashed through his mind as he took in Khushi looking at him with fury blazing in her eyes, her cheeks red due to anger and her body language making him want to pull her close and kiss her anger away. Kiss? When did he start thinking in such a manner? Arnav wondered absentmindedly but soon the fiery looking girl in front of him captured his attention again. All the strategy of making friendship flew out of the window as his eyes took in his feisty Angel. No! Not Angel! She was definitely not an angel with her angry eyes and her fighting stance. Nope! She was... She was Miss. I-Love-To-Fight! Forget friendship! Come on Miss. I-Love-To-Fight! Lets fight!

"Tum ladkiyaan apne aapko samajhti kya ho? Jab dekho ladne ke liye ready rehti ho! Lagta hai ladne ke siva kuch aata hi nahi hai tumhein!"

Before Khushi could retort back, her mother called her again and Khushi went away but not before pointing her finger at Arnav and saying, "Aapko toh hum baad mein dekh lenge!" Arnav rolled his eyes but once she stormed off Arnav let out a heavy sigh as he looked at her dreamily. Aise dekhogi mujhe toh main roz tumse takraane ko tayyaar hoon!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
yeh DM
kahan se kahan pahunch gayi baat
he was just gonna crash into her and of course fight with her
so she talk to him
but instead he started to look forward for the fight
aur sorry bhool gaye
but now that he has told her
god save him
chun chun ke badla legi khushi haina
oh ho sexy huh maan
waah kya baat hai brother
sahi jaa rahe ho beta
hmmm angel nahin miss love to fight haila
aur toh aur he legged it seeing nani
ufff shaadi toh hone hi waali hai
ab nahin socha apne bachelor status ke baare mein aru babu
he was so lost in her wasnt he when she fell on him
waise aru not that hard to get her angry
after all aap ki shakal dekh ke hi woh gussa ho jaaye
dude DM se baat karr rahi thi
cant blame her yaar
waise he enjoyed fighting with her
kya zamana aa gaya hai
aaj kal log lad ke pyaar ki shururat karte hain
he became a poet too after seeing her
and then is shocked too
he doesnt know what he is in for years later of course
did he actually say that he would love to crash into her if she looks at him like that
waah kya baat hai
yeh toh gaye ji
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Awesome update
Arnav his enjoying their cute fight very much. In this way he is getting chance to adore his crazy Khushi whom he found more beautiful when is furious.
His plans for troubling and making Khushi angry are working successfully. Eager to know about his next step to make Khushi his, hamesha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awe tht was jst sooo adorable
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
lovely written.
not friendship only miss fight loved it.
twice time thud with mkkg lovely.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Aise dekhogi mujhe toh main roz tumse takraane ko tayyaar hoon! -- haye arnav toh gaya.. he loves his bachelor status na.. is he having any idea what is he doing with khushi.. he is falling for her.. this man is not even having any idea about it.. loved the update.. it was awesome.. dosti toh huyi nahin.. ladayi toh chal rahi hai..


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Does he know that telling khushi all this is gonna be fatal
Hell no he doesn't
And that will be fun
Ek toh he started the fight and then saying ladkiyon ka shauk hota hai ladna
Dude you wanted her to fight so she would speak to you
Now suffer not now but in last one
Revenge is a dish best served cold aru
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
part 2
awesome dear...
excellent...
my God Arnav saw her and fell in love with Khushi in the first sight itself...
and he did try to see her again and again...
the way he was actually doing that drama in front of Naaniji is giving the idea how all he would have planned and executed till date...
hes such a nautanki...
Khushi is gonna be so shocked at last...
cont soon dear...

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