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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for note ..
Really appreciate your every word ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579


nahi... amusement park banwa dete hain... ;) ya fir ek party hall... karan ki shadi yahi kara lenge... :)



dil ka dard am kam karne wla dawaikhana khol dete..
aise jaari butiyaan. jo heatache s kam karti hai...
especially for the people who r in love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the update
And thanks for the note and clarifications
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Posted: 11 years ago
Self imposed restraining order to stay away from IF weaved away thanks to your brilliant writing! First and foremost I was shocked to read the last couple of updates they spent the most amazing evening together and then bang back to the real world filled with insecurities,jealousy and every other emotion that could possibly drive a sane person insane.
Gotta say Khushi has a lot of guts to still have faith in their relationship, suddenly I realized I root for Arhi cauz they are Arhi, don't get me wrong but I was just thinking if I ever get involved with a person like Arnav I will probably end up going mad. And one thing I always keep telling my mom is, other things apart I need a person who trusts me explicitly since I'm also willing to give the same. So from a girl's point of view and temporally letting go of the fact that I'm a huge die head fan of Arnav I would say Khushi really has chosen a life which is very difficult,specially a gal like her who doesn't even know how to distrust people. So I feel like more than anyone else Khushi is the one who is being thrown in to an abyss, maybe it's selfish for me to make this statement knowing what a horrible past Arnav has had, but still when I think of myself stuck in a situation similar to Khushi I probably wouldn't have thought so sensibly. Having said that I would also like to mention the fact that even Arnav is stuck in a similar situation since he gave himself a chance at being happy, something that he has totally deleted from his life, so overall even he chose a life which he hasn't got any idea of how to lead...

Now coming to Rishab, he started off as a friend then realized his feelings, then was on his way to confess the same but he never got the opportunity. Then when he decided to fight for his love he was completely denied and now he is deeply hurt amalgamated with jealousy of seeing his love with someone else. I really like his character, but I have a question though if in case Khushi had got married to Shayam, what would have been his reaction? More than anything else when he got to know about Khushi's marriage been fixed with Shayam why didn't he react back then and come running o Khushi to profess his love? just the way he accepted Khushi getting married to a stranger back then why can't he make up his mind now also? Because if I'm not mistaken all the things happened within a very close time frame. Maybe my queries are sounding so stupid but Rishab happens to be one of my favourite characters, and you have moulded his character very well I couldn't help but ask these questions😊

Last chapter was so heart breaking, I would say all three of them are responsible for where they are at this particular moment. But I feel for Khushi!!!! In my opinion she was trying her level of best to make Arnav understand that he should be able to trust her and she is even willing to go to the extent of sacrificing her friendship. On the other hand Rishab also should have understood that Khushi is no longer only his friend but a married woman, and trying to prove his point wouldn't have done any good for anyone other than causing heartache for everyone involved. Arnav of course a person who is carrying such a big baggage on his back that is also filled a lot of unpleasant memories, he can't be blamed but as you go on you need to let it loose a bit... Anyhow lets see how their lives progress from this point onwards.

For the millionth time gotta say you are such an AMAZING writer! Always manage to keep readers guessing as to what to expect next, so I won't make any guesses will happily wait to see how you will unravel the story more like the love saga of Arhi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
I was hell busy and wasn't able to comment but yet followed and read the updates and I just mustered a few moments to quickly comment ...

I just knew that Arnav would witness the whole episode and obviously hell would break loose ...
But I just could envision and step in his shoes and imagine watching the scene unfold where your wife seems to just confess that she liked someone else ... Everyone knows that Arnav has trust issues ... BIG TIME !!
So it wasn't a shocker to me when he reacted the way he did ...

But what truly stunned me was the fact that Khushi met with an accident ... And the worst bit is that it's coz of Arnav ...

I'm so looking forward to see the fold of events ... The guilt and redemption that Arnav would go through is what makes me anticipate the future updates all the more !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow couldn't stop the tears. It was very beautifully written. Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG I'm getting so scared! you say Arnav pushed her to her death? :O is she dying?! Oh no!
I read this chapter a few days ago, but obviously, I was in denial. I absolutely didn't want to believe that happened to Khushi. Being an accident victim, it was honestly a little horrifying to read a very similar scene, apart from the pushing part-nobody pushed me!
I imagine the guilt Arnav is going to feel, and the angst Khushi will be in, knowing that her husband pushed her to her accident. Please don't kill her off or something okay? Also, please don't make her lose her legs or something like that. Im telling you, nothing like that happened to me! So there is no reason for it to happen to her!
I don't mean to tell you what to write, and what not to, but I would really, really, REALLY not like to see any permanent damage to Khushi. As it is, the emotional damage is quite deep, there's no need for some physical damage too right?
I also think that Arnav kind of deserves this guilt right now, because seriously? Who the heck fights with your wife in the middle of a road? Like I don't care how mad you are, or how many issues you have. There is a time and place for everything. He keeps on barking about how immature she is, but he proved that he himself is no great human being! I agree that Khushi should not have told Rishab that she was once in love with him-in doing so, she belittled her declaration of love to Arnav, but Arnav had no right to run out of there like that without listening to her. In the end of the day, each human being has their own faults- we're all imperfect. If, in a relationship, we cannot accept the good with the bad, then there is no meaning of the word marriage. It should not be Khushi compromising at all ends. It doesn't work like that anymore in this day and age. Men and women are both equals in a marriage. She told you she loved you, you told her you don't believe in love. She wanted to go to Mumbai for a month, you emotionally blackmail her by using her love. I really really hated it when he questioned her love for him. It was so demeaning! I feel like both Arnav and Rishab have been manipulating Khushi in this story, and she just plays along. Okay Im done with my rant!
All of that being said, I really do love your story! It's beautiful, and you make a reader so involved in the lives of the characters! That, my friend, marks a great writer! :D xoxo
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for this note
now I'm even more stressed
I secretly hoped that Khushi was not really the person that got injured
Arnav will surely suffer a lot now and feel very guilty

waiting forward to seeing how you manage to make them deal with these changes and their flaws
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg accident
Hope khushi is fine
Update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't know what to comment... I am sad after reading this chapter... I normally read chap twice... but this time I did not want to revisit pain... poor khushi and arnav... I am sure khushi will be saved... worried for their relation...

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