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taj2012

@taj2012

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Hope Khushi survives and she and Arnav sort out their misunderstanding and differences.

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

A Big hearty Thanks for your Comment ..

Thank God atleast there is you who is with me when it comes to Rishabh!

Or else I myself was doubting on Whether I m truthfully following this story or not!

I m loving Rishabh! As an individual as well as a Lover .
But that wont change the fact that I hated him earlier .So What If Her Limp affected him .
But His love proved to be what I would like to call the Thin end of the wedge !

His love prospered ! Thats what matters !

How can we forget that Arnav too was a goof one time !He too didn't care about Khushi Long back .! How can We forget that .
Still Khushi went for him,didnt she?!!

Everyone has glitches .But all that doesnt matter anymore When you learn to overcome them.

Rishabh obviously did change himself. Yaa It wont be wrong to say that He did watch Arnav behind Khushi but still chose silence. But Hey ! Wake Up Thats called Jealousy.
I think even Arnav could have done something sort of that or even worse If he was Rishabh .Because Hell We cant deny the fact that He is abominably Red Headed !He matches the Likes of Volcano or even a Tornado!

Rishabh might not be truthfully called The Dog in the Manger !

So as of for Rishabh I would say , I loved his Development in terms of Love!

Now for Arnav-

Obviously, I would say Rishabh ain't the perfect Helpmate for khushi too Not because I doubt his love but because Love can't be single-sided.In this case, its crystal clear Khushi loves Arnav despite of Him acting a complete Jerk..

I mean that Mr.Arnav out there is not a Gift either!
Hello He deserted her for 4 Days! Chose to stay aloof despite of knowing how would Khushi feel.

What was her fault . Oh Or is that her "Cute Love Confession" so fake ,he couldnt get his Heart to accept the fact that He unconditionally and desperately Loves her !

And of course, it all boils down to the fact that he keeps treating her like a Thing he can boss around ,who deliberately and manipulatively chose to stay numb when he knew that would butcher Khushi's feelings!

Arnav needs work if he's ultimately going to be the guy she chooses!

His acts, his actions were all wet!

He is such a Hip-Shooter! All this thing wouldnt have happened If he listened to her in the 1st place!

He just needs to Listen to Khushi and stop acting like Her Boss.Its good to be authoritative but bad to be over-controlling !

As far as Khushi is concerned -

I respect her !
She knew she would be hurting her Friend as well as herself by rejecting the proposal but still she went on with her decision firmly for Arnav's sake !

For that Man who cared least to call her , to tell her how much he loves her .In this case Khushi turned out to be the Person who always keeps everyone happy and always cares for everyone but still at the end of the day is the Most lonely Person!

Sincerely If I have had been in place of Khsuhi , I would have surely doubted Arnav's Love.

And Now I surely do want the accident thing to be True! Hell I know its completely true ! No doubt its Khushi . Hell I want it to be Khushi ! I know It would be partial on Khushi's side , but atleast SomeOne would understand that She is not a Thing to be taken for granted everytime!

I dont know how Arnav is gonna tie up all the loose ends , but one thing is sure He needs to toil harder ..

Much said , I m waiting for the next installment with bated breathe .
To see how Arnav-Khushi love Story progresses!

P.S-

~Certainly , Rishabh is not "The Guy" for Khushi (as i already stated it why) , but I might want to see him with some other Girl instead in the near future though .

Perhaps its all upto you though as to how to mould this wonderful tale of twists and turns!

P.P.S-
~Nice choice of song .Its my favorite .Bobby really added the much needed savour to it !

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angelasweety

@angelasweety

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Thanks for the note dear😊

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

I knew it I knew that something wrong was going to happen so I delayed reading the chapter...Becoz this way I have to wait for less days befor the new update comes.
Finally matter with Rishabh is sorted out somehow and while trying to sort it out Khushi has entangled herself in a much more bigger mess..
I felt some twinge in heart for Raichand lad while reading his thoughts about his lady love...But I wanted to just punch him with full force when Arnavji heard of Khushi's last lines...
Khushi was trying to not hurt him in order to make him move on from the point...But ArnavJi n his timing...
I do not want to blame Arnav..He reacted in his natural way...N I do not want to blame Khushi too...They both have no fault but the circumstances they are being pushed into are wrong...And these are like difficulties from which they will emerge with their relationship more strong...and they will find themselves understanding other at more higher level..*optimistic in me speaking*
*after reaiing ur note*
OMG Arnav pushed her...
*gasps*
Khushi had blind trust that Arnav will never harm her...N Now Arnav Knows that she knws About his mother,,He was angry..Angry that she had found his weak spot..His embarrasment n feeling of shame about his mother's actions...All these combined into raging fire and his temper got out of control...Arnav n his trust issues...
All these things explained but they can never justify what he did on road..
P.S these two coming towards road and having heated arguement there was making me uneasy...n then the ending explained the uneasy feeling...
Anony why U do this...I read the update in Uni bus so I culdnt cry while reading it...
P.P.S Anony U have to give us 50 chapters of this story Now...
BAS KEH DIYA SO KEH DIYA..*amitabh bacchan in kabhi khushi kabhi gham style*

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samarablog

@samarablog

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

wow..u have taken so much efforts to clear out readers doubts!

its as good as a chapter! (no, i did not just say that :P I want chapter, soonish, like everyone else, of course! but yes, it was clearly stating the points)

although I did not raise some questions, at the back of mind, I still had some things, am sure.

So after reading your note, I guess I kind of understand the situation more, more for the fact where how Khushi is thinking of her life..

I also like the fact, that you have used really APT words for each characters quality, and loved Khushi's most, for the reason, I did not think on those lines of LIFE and RATIONAL thinking for Khushi's part, but I guess thats the APT way to describe her character (well, you are the author, you have to have idea..hehe). That is where I was really impressed about the description, cause for Arnav and Rishabh, I can imagine the words that describe their personality. :D

Wow!

Thanks!

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Hello again dear Author and lovely readers out here,

I never knew that my musing would warranty such a reaction. I humbly thank my fellow invested readers and author who considered this comment worth a second glance. I am glad to read author's explanation note too. It puts a few things in perspective. Every new read of the same chapter provokes a different reaction. If a character given their mindset behaves perfectly within the bounds of their understanding, we would not be having this discussion. Because they falter and fall, make bad judgement calls is the reason we all discuss and debate so. The original serial had that ingrained quality too, where we neither on his camp completely nor hers. The author has knowingly or unknowingly incorporated this flavour in her work, which makes us coming back for more.

Our thoughts will never converge for basically we are different individuals experiencing different things in life, understanding hard truths and ever changing individuals around us. Remember Jarod from The Pretender (TV series), the child prodigy isolated in think tank in formative years having knowledge of outside world through books and TV, having his brains picked on by a psychiatrist. He understood the concept, but could not fully relate to it either, thereby retaining a childlike perceptions even in his adulthood.Our daily life and impression gathered right from childhood to our current stage in life play a vital in our understanding process, even when we try to decrypt a character that we come across. Daily life and current happening in our life reflect on the way we perceive things. I happen to go through a phase where trying to please others leads to heartache all around where neither party is happy. I happen to see the recent movie Highway and I wholeheartedly agree with the message that politeness is stifling at times, a facade under which true emotions shimmer, we end up saying and doing what is politically correct and make a mess for not just ourselves but others too. It is not like others will not give what you want, they also have your best intentions at heart, but you end up convincing them that, that is what you wanted all along. You stifle your own right to make a choice with your deluded sense integrity.

A feminist point of view is in other words being biased towards other gender. The irony of her innocence being her downfall is not lost on us. A presence of argument will give rise to a solution, a solution being a progress, a path away from the source/origin of argument. All three need to exists for any movement which applies to fanfic also. I cry foul not because of the argument, but because I want to see it, a little point, being addressed too is all 😆 My cousin[a new mother], once cried foul and wrote a long article on her blog, when her office going friend on his day- off from work, casually stated that he was babysitting his young kid. That inconsequential word, which would have missed by me, lost in daily humdrum, was picked on by her, reason she was a new mother. Argument - Is spending time with your kid now a taxing activity, a JOB to be done? Her - 'A father looking after his kids is called being a DAD' made me smile.

That whole point of this exercise is each individual reacts differently not because they do not get it, as per me, its their life till now and their current situation which reflects in their words. I have been contemplating a lot about 'politeness' as a whole these few days, hence the rant 😊 If I happen to offend anyone with my view, I sincerely apologize.

Lastly I do not know whether this is allowed, but I take this platform to ask readers and author alike to read - We, the people by RockBarbie. It hits you on so many levels. Its raw and a gritty storyline. I happen to read this just a few days back. I appeal to you to read it for I have seen people discuss and debate so much on this thread, if you take out an equation of family and put our country as a whole in it you will get out so much more. You take something away for it that is for sure and give it a chance, you won't regret it.

Happy reading mates..!

regards,

MoonlightAura

Edited by MoonlightAura - 11 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Shree, woman I love the way you have expressed yourself here in reply to my comment that is!!! At some parts we may think differently but I can totally appreciate and understand your point as well specially with the way you have justified your view about hating Rishabh for the reason that you do and the bold parts made me smile. I actually agree with you as well!

Don't get me wrong I am usually an Arshi shipper as well almost all the time but the emotional feminist in me takes over at times and I cannot accept the treatment that an innocent and simple minded woman like Khushi receives from her Husband who almost always wants to take, it is always about him and never about the opposite party. In all situations I feel like he only analyses how certain things impact him. he almost never reflects upon his own absurd behaviour and it's harmful impact on Khushi's emotional state. Apart from that one time when he actually constantly tried to reassure Khushi that he likes her, when it comes to their fights he has been an obnoxious and a selfish jerk and I get that it is the walls he has build around himself, his anger and his insecurity talking but as you quite nicely put it, for how long can we forgive him for his horrible past. He surely knows his wife by now and how she has constantly tried to fulfill his demands, submitting her mind, body and soul to him.

Totally with you about Khushi too. I might feel like protecting her but She is too much of a selfless people pleaser too. You cannot always stay in everyone's good books but then again it is a Real portrayal Shree. I admire A, for creating these real characters! I used to be just like Khushi once upon a time always ready to sacrifice my own wishes just so I can please everyone around me until I grew up and realized that people are taking advantage and it is not always good to be super nice to everyone at all times. And so I hope that the Khushi here can SHOCK Arnav into realising his feelings by giving him that COLD shoulder that he has deserved for a while now. I am quite positive that A will make everything ok in Arshi land in the end meanwhile Arnav needs to realise he can't take Khushi for granted all the time and hurt her with his angry outbursts.

I am curious to see what happens after this because Arnav's parting words were quite serious and hard to digest! :-)

I would totally love it Mini if Khushi at this point ditches both Arnav ad Rishabh and goes with NK! Wait is there NK in this story?😕

How abt NK being a handsome, very good natured doc who will treat Khushi ?? 😆

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: shree10

I would totally love it Mini if Khushi at this point ditches both Arnav ad Rishabh and goes with NK! Wait is there NK in this story?😕

How abt NK being a handsome, very good natured doc who will treat Khushi ?? 😆

NK happens to be married to lavanya, I love this solution too much! 😆

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: shruti46
this letter is to dreaded ,manhoos NGO OFFICE..
jab dekho tab pange hote rhte h vaha..:P:P

NGO OFFICE BUILDING
MKM-2
Famously Anony_mous
India Forums

Dear Mr.BUilding,

How are you ?maza aa rha hoga,chaa gye last update main toh...basking in lime light!!!😃
kutte,kamine, dont you have any shame..
seruisly what's your problem...saare fasaad ki jar tum i ho...arnav khushi k lives ki😡
every time. everytime arnav comes there disaster happens..

you are like like speed breakers on road...they take two romantic steps you come suddenly and they have to put the breaks ooh..

or you are like dhakka in Indian buses,koi bhi kahi se bhi de deta hai...

haaye, husband log when goes to there wife 's office surprising their wives, there should be some romance, fun , or anon's language bone melting kisses..
first time that hug,,now this stupid revelation.
but tumhare building main ...duh...
always ladai jhagda...!!!!!!
pleasant surprise k bajay shocking surprise milte hai...
i toh thnk your office is like earth..ghum phir k vahi vapas aana parta hai...
kitne bhi effort daal do...🥱

tell me one thing which cement was used during your construction??
birla ?
acc?
ultra tech??

no...
i know i know now...
AMBUJA CEMENT,..why??
havent you seen that ad??

"are yeh diwar tut ti kyu nai??"

same way, arnav khushi ki bich ki diwar tuti kyu nai ??
moreover that damned wall is increasing day - by -day...
and you are also responsible...

i was thinking that rishabh ko chunwa doon tumhari diwaal main, anarkali ki tarah.. bada aya majnu...huh
but anon loves him...
read her latest note yar...so i dropped the idea..
never mind phir kabhi...

anyways , i m warning you..dont come in between them next time.
are create some good kisses filled,hug filled...ahem ahem may be more...filled memories...in your building...=> between Arshi!!

YUor wellwisher😡
Shruti

🤣 wah wah! kya baat hai!
Manhoos building! Lage haath main bhi 2-4 g$%li de hi dun! Lagata hai Vastu badlani padegi kam se kam buliding ka entarnce agar Anonymous todne ke liye razi na ho toh!

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: shree10

I would totally love it Mini if Khushi at this point ditches both Arnav ad Rishabh and goes with NK! Wait is there NK in this story?😕

How abt NK being a handsome, very good natured doc who will treat Khushi ?? 😆

oops I totally forgot! Then PK, GK koi bhi chalega Or Akash.. I mean good Akash..
ya Dr Rudra Pratap Ranawat! 😆