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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Switching on the TV, she sits in the couch, folding her legs on the couch she changed the channels and then she hears the news that a murderer has escaped from the prison and the police have message to the peoples o keep their doors lock. She hearing the news she screams.

"Sharon!" she screams her sister name who is making coffee inside the kitchen.

She came hurriedly hearing her sister scream and sees her, sitting in the couch, squeezing the cushion tightly and looking at the screen of the TV, she then looks at the news and finds what actually happened, her sister is scared of this so called cruelty around her. And the most she is scared of murderers, criminals and spirits. She immediately goes and sits in the couch.

"kriya...kuch nahi hoga...main hun na.. yahan...sshh chup ho ja" she says stroking Kriya's hair.

Kriya in a jerk hug Sharon and sobs. Sharon strokes her hair, consoling her. Sharon and Kriya are twins but they are totally different from each other in behavior. Sharon sometime gets silent and Kriya sometime gets hyper. Both handle each other always. Whenever Kriya get hyper Sharon is the one to get Kriya back from her hyper mood and Kriya is the one to get Sharon back from her silent mood. But they have in common is their attitude and they are known as the Diva.

The cruelest situation in their life was when their parents died in an accident. Though it's called as an accident but both the sister didn't believe it to be as an accident. More was Kriya not to believe it. She feel that her parents are killed, actually she feel they are been murder. And whom she has been suspect was free as there were no proofs of it.

After their parents death, both are the supports of each other, they did share everything with each other. They could sense each other feelings even before speaking about it to each other.

Both are having tears, remembering their parents' death, when they heard some sound coming from the kitchen, they break the hug.

"kriya...main dekhti hun..." Sharon said and gets up.

"Main bhi chalungi" Kriya said holding Sharon's wrist when she turns back.

Sharon shakes her head and both goes taking slow steps towards the kitchen. As they both live alone in the house, they somehow feel scared, if a silly sound in the house would also disturb them. Walking slowly they reach at the kitchen's door, when the window stammers, speed, wind blows fast; they feel themselves up in the air.

Kriya looks at Sharon and shocked looking her moving in the air and vice versa with Sharon, they looks down and finds they are in the ceiling of the roof and they can actually see their house floor. They shout in scream, both tries to hold each other hand but they are not so close that their tip of finger also couldn't reach to touch each other. They flutter their legs but it was of no use as they are clinging to the ceiling. They shouts loud but no one came, they have tears in their eyes, they have now believed that they will now no more going to alive, as once they will fall on the ground their eyes will be closed forever.

"Sharon!" she speaks in a low voice, tears escaping from her eyes.

"Kriya! darr mat main hoon naa..." she said, but she too know the fact that she can't do anything.

The fear can be visible in the eyes of two sisters, the only thing going on in their mind that may someone come and help them, which they called as shining knight in the rumor. They closed their eyes as they felt; they are slowly slipping out from the ceiling, and now they have hoped their eyes will be closed forever. And in a sec they slip, closing their eyes.

Feeling something smooth they open their eyes and find themselves in their bed, they get up in a jerk, looked each other and find they are sweating badly. Sharon sees the clock, its 6: am. She removed her blanket and rush to the wash room, without even wishing morning to Kriya.

Kriya was surprised at the sudden change behavior of her; she thought may be both of them dreamt the same, so Sharon behaves weird. Shaking her head, she goes down to other washroom. After some time they came out and both sits in the couch sipping their coffee. They thought of talking about the dream to each other.

"main janti hun tu kya bolne wali hai" both split out at the same time.

So there's no need to discuss now, they both know about both of their dream to be same. They keep their coffee mug in the nearby table and then they came out with their luggage, and sits in the couch waiting.

"tune kaha to than a use?" kriya asked confirming whether Sharon had told or not.

"haan Kriya maine kaha tha...bas ate hi honge sab" Sharon says, looking at the door.

And then they heard the horn, Sharon goes to see and there's her friends in the car, she sees a guy waving his hand to come. She signals him showing her palm to wait; she goes and tells Kriya that they have come. Both locked the door and then they reach to the car holding the luggage. Kriya sees the person sitting in the driver seat and passenger seat and a smile crept on her lips. She keeps the luggage at the back of the car and then took the back seat of the car; Sharon too comes and sits near her.

"swayam itna late kyun?" Kriya asked him who is sitting in the passenger seat.

"are ye hai na... mera late latif bhai" he says beating the one sitting in the driver seat. "Mr. Rey"

"aah" Rey caress his head in his hand.

"ab chalein Rey...warna Raat ko pahanchenge" Sharon said.

And then he droves the car, four are the best buddies. Kriyam shares a beautiful bonding, they used to fight in silly thing but as they are bff, they laughs at their silliness, Sharey always used to argue but they are bff so they sometime talks emotionally.

The journey they are heading is to reach Krisha's new house, Reyam and all the gangs are welcomed to spend some time with them, but when they looked the photo copy of the house they all decided to live with them, and as it was far from the city and Krisha may not get communication to come to the college, they decided to stay with them. The gang is coming behind them in another car. To reach the house it takes at least 1 hour, the journey was silent.

When he sees her in the rare view mirror, trying to catch some glimpse of her, she is enjoying the journey cuddling herself due to cold weather passing, a smile on her face make him feel goose bumps. Her big brown eyes, which tells each and every emotion is way too lovable. His though is disturbed by sudden coughing of Swayam, and he looks at Swayam and in a return get's a look of concentrate on road from him. So he again concentrates in driving.

They then reach their house, they are still sitting when the watchman open the gate,


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it's like a big mansion, they enter and kept their car in the parking area, some men came to take out their luggage, they are supposed to be the servants. They stand before the entrance of the mansion.

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The gangs including Reyam are standing in o face, in disbelief. They enter in to the hall and finds it is being two sided.

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They then headed to the back of the mansion where they finds staircase descended to a big pool, having some chairs near by.

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They return inside and goes to the direction they sees light entering inside and finds a door and opened it and they smiles looking at it.

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Neha loves cooking so she tried to find the kitchen and she finds it.


It was more amazing then she had imagined of any kitchen ever.

They now need to finds their bed rooms so they goes upstairs and finds the most beautiful bedrooms ever they have seen their life.




A balcony is attached to it.

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Two of them share one room, keeping their stuffs they then go downstairs. As they were hungry so they all headed to the dining hall and are amazed.

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In between their eat, Vicky tease Krisha that both of them had bring all to a sahi darbar type house, at which every one laughs. After their lunch, all were heading when they sees some chairs and a big TV infront of them, they felt like is this house made for them that the chairs are also exactly in number they are.

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Girls then goes to take rest when, the boys are wandering and then they finds a door and they enter inside and are surprised and happy with no tomorrow.

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Vicky said that really Krisha have brought them to a darbar which is more feel like a hotel.

Aab ayega asli horror, jab Krisha ke ghar me honge dost aur karenge hungama tab hoga aisa jo na kisi ne hoga dekha aur suna.

So kaisa hai???????? haan agar kisiko nahi dikh raha then see that I have kept both the sharons. Surprise mat hona I love Tanha so I did it. Do like and comment please. It's means a lot. (bada bada comment haan😉) for PMs send me buddy request and hit like in the PM list of first page. Thank you

Lots of Love

Aish 😊

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
first of all i could not like the update for some reason...
but i loved the update ...!
love their new it is so amazing ... just like a palace
can't wait to see what happens in the next update,
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
The concept is Awesome didi.👏
I loved the first chappy.❤️
Sorry 4 short comment.😳
Please update soon.😊
PS: I love horror things.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome update loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
aishu,,,,,,superb dear

just amazing..

loved it

pls update it soon


with love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Supab update love it god that dream m was reall scare but i though reyam will come but nai wo to sapna nikala dil ke araman aasuo me beh gaye n then house description was good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Amazing!!!
D start itself was smthng lyk nt scary bt ya mysterious!!!
Bt y did dey have such dreams??
Is it lyk a shock of der parents death n fear lying in a small corner of der brains???
N OMG!!!!! D pics r superb!!!!
I wosh mere paas bhi hota esa ghar!! Naah...dats a palace!!!
Bt d ending lines were hinting to d nxt update!!!
So horror starts from d 2nd update itself!!! Nyc!!!
D pics were amazing!!!
Nxt part soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
awesome update...

loved krisha bonding
pics are really beautiful...

superb..
asli story to next update se start hogi...

so just waiting..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome update
loved it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
finally finish read your first chapter was wonderful... the mansion picture were wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome... the chapter 1 was superb... both the sister are scare of see the criminal
scene and get scare off and both are know there strong ness and weakness...
and both had a nightmare of dream becuase of which they decided to leave this house...
and their gang member of friends are join in and are happy and fun and excited see the mansion... do continue soon and pm me

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