SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 80

Di

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Di

unres on pg.94

This time my comment is thoda chhotu because I am really tired

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!

for becoming A GOLDIE

CROSSING 100 PAGES

👏

Thank u so much Prachi!!!!

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

RES!

Di u didnt inform me ki aap chap. 8 ke liye res karogi

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Di ur qoutes are sooo GOOD👏👏👏

Randhir is really intelligent

He understood that the work(murder of Ramu chacha) was of a surgeon

Vardhan sir scolded Sanyukta NAHI!!!

Did Sanyukta just slapped Randhir THE RANDHIR!

OMG!!!!!!!!😲

Randhir ka bag gir gaya OMG!😲

Letter Sanyukta ke paas pahochgaya

Kitne saare shock ek chapter mein!😲😲😲

Jo letter mein likha tha na woh padke toh even I shivered

Waiting for ur next update😊

Prachi

PS:SORRY to reply this late😊Was busy

An M cholly
M cho cholly
*does 5 sit-ups*
i seriously wanted to un-res chapter 7 ka comment ASAP. Then i got engrossed into meant to be after which i got busy.
But thats no excuse. I am sorry for it.
*kaan pakad ke*
So i'll comment on both the parts together.
Its 5.20 in the morning. Commenting on your updates at this time has become like a habit for me 🤣
But i just didnt wanna post-pone it any longer.
acha now enough with my blabber. onto the comment
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Firstly. Bohot bohot congratulations and badhaiya for winning ff and os of the week.
you truly deserve it 🤗 My magician of words 😉
You know i am your fan right. No scratch that i am your A.C
With every passing update as the story unfolds people begin taking it for granted and getting too accustomed with it. The fun of it goes away.
But you girl can hold your readers till the last word of the last chapter.
We just keep wanting more and more and its never truly enough. You get us hooked like addicts :P
and also i love how you pack so everything so elegantly into one update.
Your updates are a complete paisa vasool package and i love that about your works 😆
And the best part about this story is it has everything...thriller...romance...suspence...drama...comedy...you have penned it down beautifully.
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chapter 7
Firstly thank you for this one. I was in a really bad mood and reading this chapter cheered me up :) I loves you for that :)
This mystery is getting thicker so is the trap surrounding rd baba. I am so scared for the poor soul 😭 sanyu is the only hope whom he can trust 😳 Hope he realizes that soon.
I loved how rd baba was effected by sanyu and kept thinking of her. Say whatever he might he just cant get her out of his head 😆
I like the change in RD...he doesnt want her around...is irritated by her...still he just keeps searching for her...the way he knew exactly why sanyu hadnt come and how he was searching for her is adorable <3
Among all the group...parth seems the safest bet for me...i feel hes innocent...but then again its the innocent ones who do the most damage...and i dont like parth anyways...i have a feeling it can be him...that traitor...😭
And i have a feeling i know why rd baba is so pissed with sanyu...cause shes not mechanical like that ishi vamp...she consumes his mind and deviates and distracts him from his aim...
The revenge part was such an amazing idea dude :P how do u come up with such stuff?
You take my heart away with each one of your amazing writings girl
but why do you have to make my rd suffer so much 😭 bechara has been through so much already give him a break please.
See ab toh snayu bhi bol rahi hai dont make him suffer 😉 Its ahmazing the love-hate relation u developing between them.
They hate each other but get hurt if the other is hurt.
I love this sandhir.
I love this randhir
I love this sanyukta
On the whole i love this ff 😆
next chapter in next comment :P
I hope i made sense :P too incoherent right now :P

I realize i can never keep it short when i comment on your work :P
CHAPTER 8
You portrayed RD's presence of mind and intelligence to perfection here.
Even in such a bad situation where he was heart broken he didnt lose it.
He was calm composed and got one step closer.
Taaliyan for my intelligent RD 👏
This ishita and parth are seeming very very fishy to me.
ishita toh i dont like anyways.
gandi ladki.
isko villain bana do. meri aadhi tension khatam 🤣 plz anu plz?
But i am thank ful to her for one thing...she blabbered atleast some of RD's truth to sanyu. The girl deffo needs it. I am confused as to why parth stopped her? Just to cover up RD's secret?
I want to bury the one traitor who thought
This is getting messier. The police, the media...How long can we stay out of their radar?"

betraying my rd 🤬

RD ko betray karne walo janta maaf nahi karegi 🤣
She slapped the randhir singh shekhawat the md of the hope foundation 🤣 this girl is on self destruct mode.
bhagwan bachaye ise ab RD baba se. she even took his letter and opened it.
i correct my self ab to isko bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakte
🤣
But i have a feeling sanyukta getting that letter was a part of your plot. She had to get it so that she could help rd and he wouldnt be alone right? So their fate is finally getting entwined with one another. Eager to know what happens next.
"If you want to know the truth about your parents, meet me at 'Masjid Road', tonight at 8PM and come alone."
This one line has raised my curiosity level to the peaks...
who sent it?
why did they send it?
are they planning to kill rd as well?
do they want the folder from him?
how will sanyu save him?
so many questions anu..
only you have the answers
update soon.

p.s you know the way you twist and turn your plots is commendable. Takes lot of dimaag in doing it.
You one of the most intelligent writers of the forum writing such intriguing thriller 👏

Today is wednesday , when are u gonna update ?

Originally posted by: UnnatiArjuhi

Today is wednesday , when are u gonna update ?

By evening :)
Pakka!

Originally posted by: federized2210

By evening :)
Pakka!

Originally posted by: federized2210

By evening :)
Pakka!

I'll be waiting... 😛