SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10

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tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

part 3 -

the realisation ??

this triggers my mind n its vividly imagining things which cn nvr happen 😛

sanyu seems to have fallen head over heels for randheer 🤣

"Deep breathes? Seriously? The smell of the formalin is what affected me most...deep breathes my foot! Meri bas chale, toh mask laga ke jaun..." grumbled Sanyukta.

🤣🤣 this irl will get off her knack of bantering ...

...

This time i actually might puke into my lab-partner's coat!!!"

i cnt imagine randheer's expression to she puking on his coat 🤣 dat would be priceless 🤣

"Urs looks like a case of natural death. Mine clearly was suicide...broken neck-bone.."

🤣 is it a thin to discuss ?!?! 🤣🤣

my goodness randheer flaring with anger ...

Randhir Shekhawat'

The folder slipped from her hand and landed with a thud on the table. Sanyukta Agarwal stood numb, her mind blank of all thoughts. He was 'him'...their son...that boy...He was the one she had met 10 years ago.

Randhir Shekhawat.

ohhh ...soo dats the reason for d title ..finally she got to know abt him...goodness i m jst hysterical ...!!

m dummb struck !! sanyu actually met randheer for real ?!?!

"Oye gaon ki gori" he said teasing her, "Yeh do do chotiyaan kisne banaye?"

🤣🤣 he sounds like a road side romeo 🤣🤣

"Delhi ka betaaj badshah, ShahRukh Khan!"

🤣 wonder where did he learn it from ?? renuka aunty taught him this kya 🤣🤣

god ur story binds my mind n heart ...

cnt wait to read further ...part 4 here i come !!

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

part 4 -

aftr realisation cums the discovery ..

is it abt randheer gettin to know sanyukta ??

god u set my mind trigerring n wondering like wat would happen nxt ..

"Am i supposed to feel special?" Ishita asked smiling coyly.

"Special? About?"

"You know...U sharing with me..."

"U are supposed to be my girlfriend, right? Atleast try acting like one..." Randhir teased.

"Supposed to be? Really? U don't think i act like one...Randhir Shekhawat, I take that as a challenge...", replied Ishita feigning hurt.

ok so let me tell u straight ...i tried my level best bt couldnt imagine anybody other dan sanyu with randheer ..the MTB effect u see 😛

GET A ROOM!"

🤣🤣 this seriously cracked me up 🤣🤣

i cant tell u how much i am enjoyin readin this !!

so the realisation was abt the files n the murderer ...

m stuck in this quagmire...who could have it been ?? let see wats the nxt clue dat miht lead to the discovery ...

loved to see sanyu flaring bak at randheer ...this guy needs suh thins to bring down his ego which surpasses the mount everest !!

so part 5 m on my way !!

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

part 5 -

IIT entrance results for MSc...there are 2 possibilities. One I don't make it (which clearly holds the edge) and second I get through! The former calls for 'depression' and the latter for 'celebration'. Both of these will take time...So bear with me!

😆 u seriously know how to add a comic edge to everything u say or u are a PhD in makin ppl smil with wat u write ...

so the longest update ...hmm

lets see what holds in it ..

"If there ever comes a time in your life when the road ahead of you is blurred, then close your eyes, inhale deeply and take a 'leap of faith'!"

how thoughtful of u ...beautifully penned !!

wats wrong with this ishi ?? what are dey hiding ?? were ishi's parents the one's with whom his father had been carryin out all the reasearch ??

were dey sum how responsible for the events dattook place on dat fateful day ??

lets wait n read 😛 aftr all dats all i cn do ...

i have butterflies in my stomach !!

parth seems to have a soft corner for sanyu ...ahem ahem

y do i feel its all bein done to conceal sum major facts from randheer which might disclose on who the murderer is n its his own ppl who have betrayed him...merely a guess ...

how helpful of randheer ...nvr thought he would actually think dat well 😛

"Poor kid...He has to die...just like them."

my heart is thumping !!! wat does dat bloody mean ?!?! its like the hound of the baskervilles ..anybody who would stay at their ancestral home would die bt dat was hypothetically a curse ...bt wats here den ?!?! he has to die ...is anybody doin it jst to inherit the shekkhawat fortune !??!?

the matter seems to have sum grave n untold secrets behind their perfect lives !!

the leap of faith thing was seriously beautiful ...

"If u wanted to do acrobatics, u should have joined the olympics...This is medical college Agarwal...act like a doctor, not like some damned psycho patient..." he whispered, his voice husky , his gaze hard.

🤣🤣 damned pyscho patient 🤣

gosh the precap seems interesting ...sanyu's new avatar ...

cant wait to read it !! ur story isnt letting me part ways with my lapi 😛

PS - how was ur result ??

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tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

part 6 -

the drunken confession ...

i already hv butterflies running throuh my stomach n d name jst adds on to it ...

n by the length it seems to be quite long ...

goodness m not able to type ..i jst waana run n read ur update ...so i follow my heart n take a leave for a nxt few minutes till i meet u bak here 😛

"It's ok to be bad if you can make 'bad' look 'good'!!!!

good one ...i might have already enlightened u on this topic bt yet again i repeat it i luv way u begin ur stories ...its captivating !!

y do i feel this quote has to do sumthing with d confession ...was it cause of a bet or sumthin like dat ..??

lets read ahead ..

Junior Shekhawat takes over the 'Hope Foundation'...Is this a new beginning?"

for sure a new eginning as well as threat to his lyf 😔

Tequila

wowiee ,,,m so damn excited !!

"Blue eyes, hypnotise teri, karti hain meinu..."

god i burst out laughing 🤣🤣 bt think of my plight i had my dad around who jst taunted me abt the tym i have been on lapi so couldnt evn laugh loudly for the fear of etting noticed by him 😛

i thought dat the SRK thing would strike a chord with him leading to the disclosure of fact dat dey hv met be4..

dat was the funniest confession i hv ever seen !!

wonder how will she face him again 😛

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tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

part 7 -

so here i am pacing towards catching up with ur FF ...n finally i jst hv 2 more parts to go ..including this one ...

Dismal Tidings

what could this mean ?? i hv a vague idea bt den lets see how much of my imagination collocates with ur story ..

who is this person ?? he has the fourth installment of the files ...n is it randheer in the pic ?? wait is his uncle the murderer ?? dunno wat made me say dat bt feel it to be ...

y do i think dat he marked all the wrong ans ?? god i fear readin ahead ... i dont wan sanyu to be embarrassed again ...!!

ramu cacha killed ?!!?!

o girl this story gets interesting with ever part !!

wonder which beans was ishita goin to spill out ...

cantw ait to read part 8 ..>!!

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

part 8 -

so i finally commence to the lats part updated !! with all the shocking disclosures i jst cnt wait to read ahead to chk if any more are lined up further ...!!

One step closure

surely means sum vital info being leaked out !! so lets read what it is !!

"They say that nature creates a balance, always.

If there is crime, then there is also justice.

God sees the truth, but waits!

And we are all, but puppets in His hands!"

beautiful !!

she slapped him !?!?! 😃

for the first tym i feel happy dat sumoneios being slapped 🤣🤣

goodness...dat letter ...i guess its a plot to get him killed !! n i guess sanyu reaches out there instead of randheer ?? coz she dare not give him the torn envolope considering the fact thAT out of all the ppl it was she who read it n tried to poke in his personal space which was despiced by him !!

so Anu its the first tym in all my comments dat i m goin to ask u update soon 😛

so Anu i dont now how u update bt i got to noe dat u updated MTB regularly ..so what abt this one ?? do u update it weekly ???

anyways plss update asap !! as i m jst glued to the story n to the aura dat u create with ur story !!!

so jaldi jaldi update it !! cant wait to read more of it !! uhhh !! m getting restless 😛 jst update it ASAP ...Anu jaldi plss plss plss 😛

PS- congo on ur story being the FF of the week !! noticed it a while earlier bt den thought to post it at the last 😛

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tareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

so i take a leave with a hope to come bak here soon (ofcourse to read ur update 😛) n dont be shocked if u find me stalking ur stories as i m in awe of ur writing 😛 so den see u soon ...hope to bring a smile with my comments ...

loads of luv

Aishwarya ❤️

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Anuradha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: tareyfan
so i take a leave with a hope to come bak here soon (ofcourse to read ur update 😛) n dont be shocked if u find me stalking ur stories as i m in awe of ur writing 😛 so den see u soon ...hope to bring a smile with my comments ...

loads of luv

Aishwarya ❤️

Aishwariya,

Once again u've made my day!!!

How very kind of u to do this!!!

I'm speechless! A total of 35 comments in 3 days!!!

Just...😳🤗

Btw u asked why Dehradun...Umm...U a 'TaRey' fan right?

Well I like Tani too...But I was always a die-hard Shakti Mohan fan right from DID days.

And Kriya was from Dehradun...small-town girl who made it large! That's why I chose it!!😊

U also made predictions...Well, those I won't reveal those of course!!😆

And about my result, I did make the cut-off...Rest, let's see!😊

Yes I did update MTB regularly! But this one I'm updating every 2 to 3 days...

Exam season...hence the delay!

I'm so glad u love my works.

I love ur reviews!!!

Thank u sooo much!

Love u loads❤️

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Anuradha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

This is going to be the short, minuscule comment. My sincerest apologies in advance 😆

SHE SLAPPED HIM!

That scene is so absolutely freaking brilliant Even though she kind of deflated in the end I don't care. She asked Vardhaan to change her partner and then she slapped him. Atta girl!

Now Sanyukta's going to play Bond isn't it? 🤔 I'm a little bit scared and a little bit anxious to see what happens 😛 Which is precisely what you aim for 😆

Congrats on the double sixer btw! 🤗 Very well deserved :)

Sanchari,

Thanks a lot!!!

I'm so glad u liked it!

Btw, I should be thanking u for being so kind and giving me not 1 but 2 awards the same week!!

thank u!!!

Love ya❤️

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Anuradha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti
Hey Anu Di..!!!
Amazing update..!!
You know what Di...??? I survived two Days without India-forums. Because I lost my net connection and that net excecutive said it would take two days... Uff..! I wonder how I managed..!!!
But today I finally got it back..!! I when I logged in I first checked whether u updated or no..?? Then I found ur pm... Immediately opened... And wht I saw Made my jump in happiness.. The title of ur ff..!! Waha par fanfic of the week tha..!! Firstly congratulations..!!! Fanfic of the week..!!! Seriously ur ff really deserves it..!!! Okay now I will give reviews of last two chapter here itself..!!!
Firstly thank you do much that u dedicated chapter 7 for us... It's really so sweet of u..!! Joh Kuch bhi mein kiya sandhir ko gifts bhejna n all.. It wouldn't be possible if I didn't have ur support or appreciation and ur help..!!! Thank you much Di... Love you forever... Finally I couriered them...!!! Hmm.. Okay now coming to the update...
It was just amazing...
In lack of words to describe...
Anu Di... How do you write so fantastically I mean.. The way you write oh my god..!! U know I went my sisters house and there I got to open IF once and I saw tht dedication wala n showed my sister... And I told to read ur ff..!!! She read the chapter 7 with me.. And she was like shalu seriously yaar she's amazing... It was like I'm reading a novel written by a famous writer... Actually my sister loves reading books n fan fics..!!! Di seriously u will one day become a famous writer. I can see that potential, talent and that skill in you..!! And I really love ur status too.. IF wala..:p

Chapter 8: wow..!!! Simply wow..!!! The starting...
"They say that nature creates a balance, always.
If there is crime, then there is also justice.
God sees the truth, but waits!
And we are all, but puppets in His hands!"

It's so true...!! You have written it wow..!! Always whenever u update the starting lines are so true... Wow..!! Those lines which you write before every update amazing...!!!!
Woah..!! I cried when Randhir was broken knowing that Ramu chacha is no more... And what a note..!!! To Randhir shekawath... Tht too he found in Ramu chacha's pocket...and sanyuktha slapped him... OMG...!!!!! She slapped him... She slapped him... Oh god..!!!! And woh finally woh note sanyuktha ne pehle padh le... Next update is going to be very very interesting...
Jaldi se update Karo Di..!!
I'm waiting eagerly as always..!!
Lots n lots of love,
Shalini:D

PS: this is the biggest comment I ever gave..!!!:P