SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 82

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yipee made it on 1st page

Unres

Finally u updated . Am dancing... πŸ˜›
Update was awesome .

Bye.

Don't be happy , thinkung that i am not gonna bore you with my comment .
Actually i have a test tomorrow ( pata hai ki meri harkato se lag nayi raha hai ki test hai) and so i will be commenting tomorrow . πŸ˜‰

Love youfor such a long and awesome update .
Edited by UnnatiArjuhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so Anu ...
this is undoubtedly the longest A/N i hav read by far πŸ˜› πŸ˜†

n den i find my name in it

TaReyFan

i was awe-struck ...such bug smile plastered to my face --->πŸ˜ƒ

n den i read this !

I'm dedicating this part to you!!

n my glee knew no bounds !! i was literally dancin at heart ...πŸ˜› n i am damn sure dat my brother thought me to be a gone case 🀣 u noe wat he said

" di , aapko ranbir kapoor ne I luv u bheja hai kya ?" 🀣🀣 its den i realised dat i have been smiling for the past 10 minutes starin at my cell !! πŸ˜›πŸ˜›


n jst luv u Anu πŸ€—


FATE BECKONS


how do u manage to think of such captivating titles ...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†


n those lines...wow girl ...along with a novelist u also make of a gud poetress πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

m serious !! n the lines seem like a gist to ur part ...jst fit there aptly !!


time to hold my breath n read !!πŸ˜›

Because 'Masjid Road' is home to criminals, drug mafias, human-traffickers, smugglers and what not...Are you saying your relatives fall in any of those categories?


🀣🀣 how do u manage to blend all emotions so perfectly !!?!?! a minute ago my heart was thumping n now i find myself giggling πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


"As you say...There is nothing to be ashamed of...Being poor...We are in the same boat...But see where that boat has landed us...FMC!"


Vidhushi sounding sweet n understanding πŸ˜› dats a rare phenomenon πŸ˜†

"Because you want to know the 'truth' ...Because you are foolish enough to believe in things like 'true-love'...Because, face the truth, you would take a bullet for him if need be..."

seriously girl u hv badly fallen for thay guy !!πŸ˜› i wish randheer would reciprocate πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

But the look she received in return zipped her mouth.

πŸ˜† i was tryin to imagine the look n it turned out really funny 🀣



The deeper she went, the more scared she was. Suddenly her 'plan' didn't seem so full-proof afterall!


luv seriously gives u the courage to do things which u woudnt evn hv thought otherwise !! girl ur quest begins !!

Yes, but the book isn't in my hands right now..."


was it the book or those reports dat cost Mr n Mrs Shekhawat their life !?!?

He had a kindly face and wore spectacles...hmm dat makes me don my sherlok holmes hat πŸ˜›

kindly face = Parth

kindly face + spectacles = middle aged kind man = parth's dad 🀣

is it ?!?! πŸ˜›

They seem harmless. They are doctors. Maybe I should go inside and tell them I'm here instead of randhir...Or maybe...I could just..."


are you out of ur mind girl ?!?! goin in would be gifting dem ur lyf !!



Randhir Shekhawat's murder should afterall attract a lot of attention.The sound of shattered glass filled the warehouse. And Sanyukta Agarwal was exposed.


my heart is beatin at a rate of 100 mph !! run girl run !! run for ur lyf !! i dont get it y are dey hell bent on killin randheer ?!?! is it merely professional rivalry ...na ...if it were for the book n reports den y was randheer being targeted ?? he had nothing to do with it !! there's much more to it dan wat meets the eye !!
some grave n untold mystery !!

where does this parth go every friday ..?!?! wait wait wait parth not in the college n a kind faced guy in the ware house = parth in the warehouse ?? 😲 no he cant !!


y on earth has he to tell everythin to dat ishita girl ?!?! πŸ˜›


"Dad, it's an emergency. Where are u? What's all that noise?"
"Ishita I'm outside. What do u want?"
And Ishita told her father everything Randhir told her. Dr. Mittal heard it all patiently and replied, "Calm down. But make sure he finds the letter."
"Ok dad...I will..We'll search again tomorrow..." replied Ishita.


noise = market =masjid road ?!?!?
make sure he finds the letter so dat their trial for randheer continues ?!?! now i wonder who planted dat letter ?? was it the members of the board who arrived prior to him !?!?


wait wait wait wat is parth doin in dat bus ?!?!


They actually shot a gun...They meant to kill me...I could have been dead...Oh God!!! How could I be so irrational and go to some unknown place all alone like that??..."

exactly from where on earth did she get dt courage !??! wait i hope dat ppl didnt get a glimpse of sanyu's face or girl dangers awaiting u ...!! n i recollect sanyu saw the face of one of those ppl so if it is any one of the board she'll recognise him in the nxt press meet right !?!?


After what seemed like ages, he hugged her back. Her sobs echoed into the night as he held her and traced soothing cirlces in her back.


aaww atleast he did !!

only if randheer gets to noe wat she had gone through jst for him..>!!

Trying to what??? What if it got u killed?? What if u died?? What would I answer??"

he was actually worried abt her πŸ˜ƒ

so finally he revealed it to her ...i jst hope dey continue their quest together 😳😳


saturday or sunday ...plsss update it on sat na ... cnt wait for the nxt part !!


loads of luv
Aishwarya ❀️
Edited by tareyfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu update !!!
It's eight .. :p
M dying of curiosity ..I was seriously devoid of this feeling before :P n now m enjoying it ...:P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anu<3
Well that message was so sweet... yea recent whatsapp buddy and also definately still waiting for the song!!!!!
So the update finally came...and you noe what i was out in CCD with my friends and when u mentioned to me that its updated i rushed to check the update...!!! 🀣 🀣 🀣 and den after a while my friends took away my fone...!!! as i was grinning like an idiot!!!!
this chappy was the much needed chappie like u already sed..the involvement of Sanyu was finally shown...!!!
you make Sandhir look so realistic and not to mention beautiful that i imagine it happening in front of me..its not always that i do such a thing but with some writers it natural for me...!!!
Sanyukta going to any extent to protect Randhir...!!! that is sumthing i really wish to see eva in Sadda Haq whoeva cliche nyone would think it is...!!! and finaallly would like paarth to get his ass kicked!! 🀣 🀣 *sry looks innocent*
Our lioness went without any hesitation just the tots that randhir was in danger or a secert that made her so curious that she went...what ever the reason mayb that made me so happy the lines explaining the dept of her feelings!!!
Randhir: the guy who always puts the hard front out to the others...but den actually cares to much!!!!
Parth: i would have killed u if i had read the update today coz of the massive sarth today but u made the scene clear enough where Sanyukta doesnt give a damn about parth but Randhir affects her...how i wish i could have seen it in the show...!!*pouts*
overall such a brilliant job done..!!! its so beautifully written like i mention nothing to actually hate in it..!!!
update soon
regards
safrena
P.S: since u like the above two words the most 🀣 🀣

Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you anu
I have read the chapter Anu and let me come out of the shock you gave me with this chapter then only I will be able to say my comments.
Edited by sparkling_gems - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res..unresing. .
what a beautiful update..
mind blowing hats off to u..u deserve more than this..

btw the story is getting thicker here and in my head too.
I suspect mostly on ishita's father...
what a concern yaar... both parth and randhir.
I bet parth has already fallen for sanyukta...

eagerly waiting for the next chapter. ..
update soon.waiting. ..

Edited by anyania - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res...
UNRES...
OMG di...am overwhelmed di...thank you so much ...for mentioning my name...
well coming to the ff...
the lines in the beginning were tremendous..just loved them...it depicts the whole update...
it was stupendous as always...
sanyu hurt...😭
she did that for randhir...how sweet of her...
randhir helped her..am glad... and the ending was like i was laughing...means how randhir said to her by seeing her anger...
parth being helpful helped her...
how u r unfolding the mystery is just marvelous and fabulous...
the goons didn't catch her...am happy...
now am feeling that ishitaand her parents involved...again u will prove my wrong*sighs*
overall an amzing and superb ...awwesome update...
well this is a short update..I want a long one...update soon...
love,harika...keep smiling...
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyaaa anu dii 😊
i am sonakshi
i was a silent reader of dis forum until ur ff ALONG SHE CAME made me go crazyyy to be a part of this awesome ff discussions... u write sooo well that i dont have words to describe my feelings...❀️ u r a GREAT WRITER...
u actually give us goosebumpps by ur ff... and i knw im commentin so late on ur ff ..i knw im so stupid...
bt was busy with my stuff...
everytym i open dis forum jst go to search buttn and type ur ff name only and do 10 seconds dancin by seein ur update...πŸ‘
even u made me so spell bounded by ur ff that im nt able to concentrate on my exams 😭
cant help it...
plzzz jaldii update kia karoooπŸ˜›
i knw mai bht faltu bltii rhungii so let me jst stop my blaa blaa and finish my comment jst by sayin ur really the bestπŸ‘πŸΌ and grt writer keep updatin and feel proud coz by ur writin i became a member of dis forum from a silent readerπŸ˜‰ u r actually makin dis forum popularπŸ˜‰
luv
sonakshi❀️
and sorry agr kisi ke place pe likha ho toh coz im new here so kch pta nahi hai mjh
Edited by sachdevasona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res shit i am late
just read AN only...ooo emmm jeee u mentioned my name ?? ..THE anu mentioned my name with those wonderful people..u like really ,,mentioned my name with samaira,arushi,tanya,appy harika nn all of those lovely people..aur kya chahiye kisiko? 😳...*starts doing a happy dance after reading an only*
ab chappy padh k kya hoga mera ?

now let me read πŸ˜†
EDITED--
"She followed her heart and lost her way,

She tried to escape before they could make her pay;

Fear gripped her soul, as fatigue took its toll,

But 'he' caught her, before she could fall;

She looked at his face and turned away,

You aren't the one, was all she wanted to say.

She needed a hand, a hand to hold;

And there 'HE' was, her beacon of hope.

She reached for him and ran into his arms,

He held her tight and made her feel warm.

Silence engulfed them as they spoke no words,

'She' was 'his' and 'he' was 'hers'!

-Anuradha
So,what do i say about these lines? ..itna nasha chadd gaya muje inn lines ka ki kal padhi hain aur aaj hosh aya hai..πŸ˜‰...o these lines just describe the chappy perfectly..i so love these eternal kinda llove stories..these lines gave a gudgudi in my stomach and make me senti senti at the same timeπŸ˜†..these are simply MAGICAL!!
oh em jeee!! sanyu is such a sherni..is she a leo ??πŸ˜‰

she is so much in love with him man..she seriously would take a bullet for him...awww😳


jahan sanyu dil jeet leti hai,wahan par woh ishita,,the so called gf of randhir khoon ubaal deti hai gussay say...eeehhh she is not at all trustworthy..aur mera bechara randhir sab kuch bata deta hai usko😑
actually apne baap pe gayi hai woh ...🀒

i just loved the way shoowed such action bhara dhamakedar scene...sanyu ki toh daad deni padegi...ye sab toh docters k naam pe kalank hai kalank...bloody blackspots😑😑..

aur ye kya ganday khayal arai hain merai mann main...iss parth involved ?? is vardhan involved..nah nah nah...aisa nai karna kabi anu...πŸ˜•...baki sab to hai he ghatiya..ye log nai..

aur sandhir hugged in ua ff also..haayeee😳

i so love these breakdown walay hugs...kuch alag he nashaay walay hote hain..just like ua ffπŸ˜†


aur em wating for next update ,,aisa bolna padega kya ??..u know it πŸ˜‰

saturday tak...ummm i'll try n wait patiently...πŸ˜†
tab tak k liye..take care.
love ya❀️
Edited by nafees5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sachdevasona

heyaaa anu dii 😊

i am sonakshi
i was a silent reader of dis forum until ur ff ALONG SHE CAME made me go crazyyy to be a part of this awesome ff discussions... u write sooo well that i dont have words to describe my feelings...❀️ u r a GREAT WRITER...
u actually give us goosebumpps by ur ff... and i knw im commentin so late on ur ff ..i knw im so stupid...
bt was busy with my stuff...
everytym i open dis forum jst go to search buttn and type ur ff name only and do 10 seconds dancin by seein ur update...πŸ‘
even u made me so spell bounded by ur ff that im nt able to concentrate on my exams 😭
cant help it...
plzzz jaldii update kia karoooπŸ˜›
i knw mai bht faltu bltii rhungii so let me jst stop my blaa blaa and finish my comment jst by sayin ur really the bestπŸ‘πŸΌ and grt writer keep updatin and feel proud coz by ur writin i became a member of dis forum from a silent readerπŸ˜‰ u r actually makin dis forum popularπŸ˜‰
luv
sonakshi❀️
and sorry agr kisi ke place pe likha ho toh coz im new here so kch pta nahi hai mjh

hi sonakshi!!!!
I'm sorry...I took as many names as possible today...Had I known u before, I would have taken ur name as well!!!
I'm so glad u joined the forum. It has got some amazing writers. u should go through the other stories as well!!!!
thank u so much!
Love u too❀️

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