SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gooddeedss

<font color="#0000ff">Anu this was phenomenal! :D</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Starting with the Quote. Did you write it?</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Randhir's confidence, Man how can someone be so calm and composed inspite of the inner turmoil?</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Wish I could learn that from him! :)</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Sanyukta is a stunner. Randhir noticed her! *Jumps with Excitement*</font>
<font color="#0000ff">And,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">That dance!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">And,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Him saving her.</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Again! :D</font>
<font color="#0000ff">And,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Finally,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">The Confession!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Ufff I could see visuals of it. Like the whole thing was happening in front of me.</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Love the way my Ranyukta are progressing! :D</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Wonder what will happen next!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Update Soonish whenever time permits! :)</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Love,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Your Biggest Fan,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Aditi</font>



Ninnu,
The quote is my watsapp status...'i wanna be bad and make bad look so good'!!
I edited it a bit to fit this update!!!
Aww thanks for ur compliments!!
U spoil me!
Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u loads :-*
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was soo good! 🤗
wait.. she CONFESSED! God! kya hoga ab uska!
Mention- *Sanyu's dance catching attention of lustful eyes*
And congo for getin' thru the entrance!
Update next part soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">RES!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yay this time I am first! *dancing*</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">----------edited----------</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">First thing AAPKE chapters ke name are very </font><font color="#ff0099">CAPTIVATING!</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Vardhan counselled Randhir!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">So nice of Dr.Dinesh Shekhawat to ask Vardhaan to guide Randhir!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">Di yeh Ishita ka naam sunte hi </font><font color="#ff0099">GHUSSA</font><font color="#3300ff"> aajaata hain😡</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Aur baaki ke sab bhi😡 excluding Parth of course!😊</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">Randhir ka short speech to media was </font><font color="#ff0099">PHENOMENAL!</font><font color="#3300ff">👏👏👏</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">Randhir's attire for press meeting was </font><font color="#ff0099">UNIQUE!</font><font color="#3300ff">👏👏👏</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">Sanyukta watching Randhir LIVE on TV </font><font color="#ff0099">GOOD!</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#3300ff">So the idiot Ishita gives challenge to Sanyukta!</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#ff0099">NOT BAD!😆</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Waise bhi use aage bohot mehnat karni padegi!!!😆😆</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">(Sanyukta ko future challenge mein haraane ke liye!)😆😆</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Ishita trying to impress Randhir from her outfit!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">(Kya isse koi kaam nahi hain???😆)</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Iss Ishita ki bachhi ko toh mein nahi chodungi!😡😡</font>
<font color="#3300ff"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Waise chhod dungi😆(but last time)because Sanyukta confesses her love to Randhir because of</font>ISHITA!!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Randhir was speechless when he heard what Sanyukta said!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Delhi ke betaaj badshaah (nice line)</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Par Sanyukta kyaal rakho apna agli baar aisa mat bolna AGAR Ishita ne sunliya toh problem hi problem!😆</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Thoda aur badaa update chahiye tha</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">Randhir ka reaction jo dekhna tha!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3300ff">
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<font color="#3300ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Par koi baat nahi</font>
<font color="#3300ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hope to hv badaawaala update nxt time!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#6600cc">NOW UPDATE ASAP!😊😊😊</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#6600cc">Will be waiting</font>
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Prachi,
Yay! U first!!!
Btw thanks for being such a loyal stalker :p
Thanks a lot! M glad u liked it!!
Means so much!
Love u<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UnnatiArjuhi

Res
Unres..

Firstly congratulation for your selection . 😛
My teachers say "College matters , but the thing that matters most is your hard work ." So just work hard .
And you are gonna get IIT ... so you should be happy (even my dream , but i am not at all studious 😭 ) . If i would get through entrance , then i would be dancing ...

Ok so coming to the update . I thought you wouldnt be updating today , coz of celebratipn of your result . But you gave me a pleasant surprise ...

Starting with update ... i am really confused about D.S. initially i really doubted him , but now i am not sure .
Vardhaan sir is the best . Atleast there is one person i am sure about .
Loved how confident Randhir was (or atleast pretented to be) .

And yes freshers party ... i loved it .
Ishita is disgusting . How fake can one be ?
😡

Love Sanyukta . I loved the fact that she dressed up simply . Simplicity is the best policy .
Randhir has started noticing Sanyukta . He was standing with his so called girlfriend , and was staring at Sanyukta .
And the challenge , Sanyukta nailed it .

Randhir lied to his frnds and gf , for Sanyukta . 😳 😳 i loved it .
These two have surely grown an unknown bond .
And the convo ... i am dreading its outcome .
" Delhi ke bejaat badshah SRK " what is he gonna do ? ( love SRK) .


Two ques
Whats the meaning of 'bejaat' ?
Is Sanyukta really in love with Randhir , or is it just attraction ?

Flawless work .
Update soon



Hey!!
Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u:*
PS: it's betaaj not bejaat!
Betaaj means a ruler without the throne!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Oh my my, lines of the day.. delhi ka betaaj badshah SRK, Murder na kardun tera🤣

Randhir has taken over the position. Hope he gets to know thw truth about his fake friends.

First he takes her saying he'll teach her a lesson but where was the lesson dear Randhir... instead you heard parsings from a girl who manages to catch your attention. .

Awwahh Sanyu finally confessed... kisi ne sahi kaha hai, nashe me insan har baat 100% sachi kehta hai.

Ab kese muh dekhaye gi Randhir ko kal subah... can't even imagin haha

Please update soon. In updates ko parh ke mere liye din raat katna mushkil ho jatey hain...

xxx



Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u:*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shiya1206

Hey... Amazing update...
Confidence.. Innocence.. Seduction... Trust.. All in one...
Party scene was nice!! And surprising too...
Hehe... I know you said no "leaps" with Parth.. ut i wwant to see Sanyukta and Parth being friends... True.. Pure.. Platonic... I guess... She needs a friend like him... And he can maybe play cupid ;-)
Okay... Confession scene was.. Hilarious.. And shocking.. Kya "leap" liya hai.. :-D hila diya..

Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon..
Congo on the entrance clearance :-)


Shiya!!!!

Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u:*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Delhi ka Betaaj baadshaw ShahRukh Khan😳Oh So LOVE this line🤣& it's perfectly fitted for Randhir😆</font>

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Coming to this FF; wow I just loved it; the way you described Sanyu in freshers party! Was hell amazing... She is simple yet she is elegant... She is ordinary & yet she is a diva... 👏</font>

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">What can I say about HIM; he is like an Adonis for me! Greek God...❤️</font>

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">What I loved the most was their conversation... It was hilarious... Blue eyes,hypnotized🤣🤣</font>

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">She poured her heart out... But didn't get any response from HIM...😭 She have to wait till the truth to be revel...</font>

<font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">The full chapter was amazing👍🏼Except those silly gang😡</font>



Hey!

Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u:*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ari--

With this I finally end my rant

I am so sorry for spamming your ff with so many comments and such long ones

I just couldn't help it

you have written everything to perfection. The plot..the characterization..the backstory...I am just in love with this one...definitely one of my most fav ff;s on the forum...you have truly woven magic with your words...I love this story...

you have officially gained a phan and a stalker :D


Love,

ari.


thanks a lot for the awesome read. It was such a treat reading you story till now. waiting for it to unfold further :)


p.s u;ve written the medical details so intricately and with such finesse that even I thought u were a medical student until u specified otherwise. great job buddy 👏



Ari,
I am giving a single reply to all ur 7 or 8 posts!!!
I'm overwhelmed, numbed and rendered dumbfounded!!!
Did u reall type all that for me?! My god!!!
For any author, it's the feedbacks that mean the most! And I just received the most amazing review ever...from u!!!
Really I dnt hv words to say right now!!!
Ofcourse I will say thank u! But will that suffice? Surely no!!!
I woke up in the morning and the first thing I did was read ur replies!! And I started the day with a huge smile on my face! I thought of replying when free!!!! Because I genuinely wanted to thank u from the core of my heart!
So thank u ..for reading & commenting!!!
It really means a lot to me!!
Love u for this!!
-Anu <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
am sooo sorry... 😭 i didnt comment here at all... I did saw your pms didu.. but some vaccation hush kept me away from reading this.. now sure i will read t.. and let you knw the comments ... happy that you came up with a new story ... mwaah!! tc 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow!
treat toh bht he vadiya thi anu ❤️

gussa mat hona mgr merko ye chotu update laga 😆
but but , it was flawless..
umm lagta hai dr.dinesh reallys cares for Rd.

n vardhan -rd convo was extremely good..glad that koi toh hai randhir k liye sache dil say wahan.
n freshers party was bang on!! sanyu in full form ahaan! hate that ishita-THE dayan
samjti kya hai woh khud ko..

sanyu was simple yet elegant,loved this fact

n confession was hilarious 🤣
eagerly waiting for next part

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