SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly! Congratulations for passing the entrance exam!!!!! And I would have asked for a treat, but you already gave one in form of this chapter!
Vardaan and Randhir equation I am liking! Wanting to know more! And I know (well hope) that you haven't made Vardhaan the baddy

Awesome work Anu!!! I don't really how what to say though!

I love how you portrayed Sanyukta as not needing to change her appearance for others! If she is comfortable, then it works for her! Brilliant!

That drinking scene, well it's pretty realistic, I have seen that happening in almost any party I go to! But the way Parth and Randhir show concern for Sanyukta, makes me go "Naaaw"

That drunken scene though! I was not expecting her to say THAT!!! I thought maybe she will tell him about how she met him when they were younger!!! But that was a bombshell that I really didn't expect!

Though I quite liked this bombshell😳 Now I can't wait for the next update... No scratch that, I CAN NOT wait for the next update... So update sooon!

ROFL: "Blue eyes hypnotise teri karti hai mainu!" I am glad she didn't say, "I swear chotti dress mein bomb lagti mainu"🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

great update yaar...
each and every character posses an unique grey shade...
beautiful potrayal of character's,loved it...
continue soon...


Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusweet

Hey.. M not dt emotional nd dnt belv in love.. Bt ur each n evry writing i read.. Js make me go crazy in love feelng.. U r js owsm writer.. U can manipulat anyone through ur writng... Lv ur wrk... :)


Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

Awesomee update Anu..!!

I loved it soo much as always...

Sandhir scene was superb..

ab aage kya hoga jab Sanyu jagegi..??

eagerly waiting for the nxt part...

pls cont asap..!!

love

Ashka.


Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Thanks for pm
Congrulations for clearing exam 👏
Awesome update 👏
Loved Vardhan sir for helping randhir 😊
Loved Dr dinesh's words randhir is like vardhan 😉
Loved the freshers party
Sanyukta's drunken confession, eager to know randhir's reaction 😉
The press conference was good loved randhir's confidence 😛
Update soon


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M glad u liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpriyu

😭 😭 😭

this is so bad di.
Lemme cry first. I nvr evr tho8 dat i cud miss dis part.. Coz aftr readng d precap i was hell excitd.
Whn i came onl9, i saw 4 pm.
N the moment i read
"along came she updated"
i was really taken aback,
my mouth forming a O shape n
😲
perplexed 4r a moment

bt thn i just opend it,
thinking may b i read smthng wrong.
Bt hell no, u wont believe. My heart shatterd into pieces. Coz i only know, how badly i was waiting 4r dis part...
Well leave, coz i was at d fault.
I dozed off without opning IF
😭
poor me.

Leavng dis crap, coming 2 ur update...

"It's ok to be bad if you can make 'bad' look 'good'!!!!
Di, dnt tke me wrng, i really luv ur starting lines.
Evrytime u cum up wid such mesmerizng quotes.
That ur post bcms
super exciting frm strtng itslf.
Bt d lines which caught my attentn was
a druknen confessn. N u hv mentiond ur name.
XD
wat do u mean by dat.
Can u plz elaborate.
XD
rofl'ed
(kiddng ok)

So nice of vardhan sir, hez alwaz thr 2 hlp studnts...
He persuaded randhir indirectly.
Randhir managed everythng so perfectly. M loving his charactr.
Parth is actualy a carng frnd. Til now hez d only guy frm thr gang who cmpletly undrstnd hm.
Moving 2 d freshers party

😳
actualy sanyu is really a simple grl.
Oops 2 b more precise, she is simply beauty wid brains. 😊
chalo randhir at least notice toh krta h use,
when she enterd his gaze movd 2wrds hr. N he noticd hr.
😉
ishita mai tjhe chodungi nhi. I'll nt leave u grl.
😡
bt koi ni, shez unknowngly hlpng sandhir... 😉
well aftr dat shots, whn sanyu tuk d mike,
i was like
"ab maza ayega, lgta h sanyukta ab ishita ko sabak sikhayegi"
bt hell no.
U alwaz surprize us.
She wantd 2 dance
XD
di now wtevr m gonna say, it will sound funny bt still i cudnt stop myslf thnkng dat.

Whn sanyu was dancng, i was actually predicting abt d songs.
N d songs which were reflectng in my mind were
1. Baby doll
XD
2. Tumhi ho bandhu from cocktail XD
3. Muskane jhuti h from talaash XD

Lol.
Sounds funny.
😆

goshhh
randhir hlpng sanyukta.
😳 😳

n he himslf came forward 2 hlp hr...
(ye toh kuch nhi ishita, aage aage dekh hota h kya)
XD XD
omg r u kiddng me she was singing blue eyes song. XD
rofl'd. I clutchd my stomach in pain while laughng.

"delhi ke betaaj badshah Shahrukh Khan"
di i wantd u, to mentn dis smwhr in d cming parts so that, randhir ko bhi reality ka pta chale.
Ab bs mujhe toh intezar h

"Gaon ki gori, Phoolan devi"
line ka. XD XD

N thn
o.O
"i love u"
freak. She said dat. 😲
it scard d shit out of me...
Yr ye sanyu toh kuch zada hi aage bdhti ja rahi h.
Wt d hell is wrng wid her.
-_-
Chalo koi ni di she likes randhir, toh its obvious ki wo drunk h toh ye sb toh hona hi tha.
M loving dis ff.
Aj hi nxt part post krna.

P.s m really feelng bad. Ye res wale game me mai bhi part lena chahti thi.
Bt ab koi umeed nhi dikhti.

😕

bt i loved dis part.
Wil b waiting for nxt1.
Luv u anu di
😳
N ya mere post ki length par mt jana, i really write frm d core of my heart.
😳
lots of luv

n ya big
*congo*
n
*hug*
4r ur result...

*PRIYANKA*



Priyu!
Omg!!!! U rock babes!!!
Btw I wrote my name coz that quote was mine!!! :p
Nice choice of songs!
Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Hey anu di...

awesome updates ..i just loved it...
the previous one was like shocked...
randhir friends..how disgusting they r...except parth...I hopw he is good from inside...
and sanyu falll...and randhir catch..wow!!! loved it...
mystery is beginning to unfold...
the way u r unfolding the story is marvelous...
saanyu ignoring randhir haan...
and next update di...damn good...i loved it...
freshers part...and sanyu dance...
sanyu confession...wow!!!! amazing di...
randhir taking her...OMG me not dreaming na!!!!
and randhir confident and calm...Loved his interview...
him and vardhan was also good...and the way u present quotes at the start is just fabulous...
they are so true and they match with story...
so sad of ishita...😆sanyu proved herself...
parth is nice...taking good care of sanyu...
smriti and karan same as before...
dr.dinesh saying randhir is same like u...vardhan😉
really vardhan also agreed for it...
what will happen when sanyu will get to know...really eager...
randhir delhi ke SRK...cool...
and randhir's shirt question authority🤣
and overalll a stupendous,marvelous,fantastic...so on...
thanks for the pm!!!
love,harika..keep smiling...and congrats...🤗❤️


Harika,
Thank u sis!!!!
Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="3">Firstly! Congratulations for passing the entrance exam!!!!! And I would have asked for a treat, but you already gave one in form of this chapter!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Vardaan and Randhir equation I am liking! Wanting to know more! And I know (well hope) that you haven't made Vardhaan the baddy
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Awesome work Anu!!! I don't really how what to say though!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">I love how you portrayed Sanyukta as not needing to change her appearance for others! If she is comfortable, then it works for her! Brilliant!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">That drinking scene, well it's pretty realistic, I have seen that happening in almost any party I go to! But the way Parth and Randhir show concern for Sanyukta, makes me go "Naaaw"</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">That drunken scene though! I was not expecting her to say THAT!!! I thought maybe she will tell him about how she met him when they were younger!!! But that was a bombshell that I really didn't expect!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Though I quite liked this bombshell😳Now I can't wait for the next update... No scratch that, I CAN NOT wait for the next update... So update sooon!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">ROFL: "Blue eyes hypnotise teri karti hai mainu!" I am glad she didn't say, "I swear chotti dress mein bomb lagti mainu"🤣</font>




Pari!!!
Haye! I'm floored!!!
Thank u so much!
M glad u liked it!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu this was phenomenal! :D
Starting with the Quote. Did you write it?
Randhir's confidence, Man how can someone be so calm and composed inspite of the inner turmoil?
Wish I could learn that from him! :)
Sanyukta is a stunner. Randhir noticed her! *Jumps with Excitement*
And,
That dance!
And,
Him saving her.
Again! :D
And,
Finally,
The Confession!
Ufff I could see visuals of it. Like the whole thing was happening in front of me.
Love the way my Ranyukta are progressing! :D
Wonder what will happen next!
Update Soonish whenever time permits! :)
Love,
Your Biggest Fan,
Aditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Congratulations diii🤗
n yippieee u updated for u it might nt be dat long break..but for us it almost seems like a year😆
"The Drunken Confession"...it made me hell tensed 😕..ask y??? i know dat d diva n victim of d freshers party is always sanyukta🤣 but a little change d person who victimized her was dat **** not Randhir😡 ...soo m tensed wt will be d consequences of her drunken behavior...diii we will talk about d end later..first lets talk abt d amazing start, u r becoming a philosopher😉...dat phrase is beautiful👏...y is dis Vardhan not saying anything when a lot of things r going on here...😕
coz he knows its not some stupid freak accident🤔..soo i believe he must hav found out some things abt their murder,coz "not time for vengeance"..his words clearly mean dat he knows Randhir wants to avenge his parents murder,so how could Vardhan Suryavanshi stay quiet instead of helping Randhir😲...finally d world is gonna know who is Randhir Shekhawat n i m very confident they will lso know what he can do when he takes over d foundation😊...a jeans n t shirt!!!! "question authority"🤣..hezz gonna be a sensation👍🏼...n wow!!!! he sooo composed n confident😛...well turns out dat hezz not dat confident😕...okay diii here goes all my curses n hatred😡...n sanyu..come out of ur fantasy baby..jus wake up,u can nly see d paparazzi around him but for once luk at him...how much hezz gng through n what other plans d fate has for himcoz of dat stupid press meet😡i hope dis new responsibility doesn't get him into more trouble😒
Smriti trying to impress Karan😆..make dat idiot understand dat Karan will drool over any other girl who dresses in a knee length dress...coz his character is dat cheap👎🏼 n ohhh dat ***** bitch dressed in blue...ewww dats all i can say..n smoking hot my foot...i can envisage her wid two horns on her head n a crooked tooth..then how d hell is she gonna be hot😡
n Kaustuki always first in getting dressed😆...n sanyu dats like my girl.. i like her dis way nly dii
call it undressed,silly anything shezzz always d diva n a mere stupid dress could never change dat😡...ofc Randhir will notice coz deep down he knows dat dis girl is nt like others😉
ufff dis ****** couldn't she jus keep her mouth shut...but no probs she must know how confident our tigress is 😃...sooo let her do watever she wants coz in d end all those challenges make sanyu a little more stronger👍🏼...awww i like dat dancing part😳...sooo sanyukta Agarwal has created an identity for herself in dis college...🥳
n Parth...hezzz very sweet n helpful (i know dats wat i always say..but he is sweet wt can i do!!!)
"I ll take her"...omg!!!!! now d qstn is y did he do it...?????😉 coz dat stupid reason he gave to dat ***** definitely not...then y?????😆 "right thing to dooo"...y is it d R-I-G-H-T thing to dooo???🤣...ohhhkie his instincts told him carry her to her room even though d thought of "not knowing where her room is" didn't hit him..i think its written...Randhir carrying her Sanyu confessing...!!!!
umn diii plz dnt shout at me coz honestly i feel very very very tensed coz of her confession ofc she confessed n its gud but Randhir u know wt hezz like😕...but apart frm dat consequences thing...i was literally jumping on my bed...ask yyy???? coz i got up jus now n i started reading seeing ur text😆..."blue eyes"...awww Randhir be careful dis Sanyukta is a mind reader!!!
she can easily tell wt ur feelings r...let it be d way u feel abt urself or for others😉
sooo finally SRK came out huh...but wt is dis diii it didn't bring out any realization in Randhir ofc he must have forgotten cozzz he has got more imp things to deal wid in his childhood😭
but i m very sure Randhir will confront her abt it...n "I LOVE YOU"...ohhh my god
diii i was like "what???? she confessed???? jus like dat!!!!☺️"
i m eagerly waiting for next part...i m dying to know wt happens to sanyu next morning...😉
diii plz update ASAP...*makes a puppy dog face* coz i dnt wanna die wid tension😳




Harita!!!
Hw swt r u!!!!! Omg!!!! I love u baby <3

i can envisage her wid two horns on her head n a crooked tooth.
^^^^^ bwahahahahahaha!!! Omfg!! Haye!!!
U really hate that 'bitch', don't u? Aww!
And shocked that sanyu confessed? I wanted to make it like that...not like any conventional love story!! This is our spicy SanDhir!!!
Agey agey dekho what happens!
Thanks a lot!
Means so much!
Love u baby!! :*

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