SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 105

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sparky!!!!
Itna lamba comment???
*Delightful cry*
Thank u thnk u thank u!!!
Me trying to make it as mysterious as possible😆
Update tonight ok?
Love ya❤️
PS : when's ur FF coming out??
Me waiting!!!!

hehe... making you delight and happy with comments.. that's my aim.. 😃
Will be waiting for the update.. but plss if possible make it little early..
I am working on it yaar.. I think it will take another one or two weeks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
UNRES At Page 131!!!!Have a look soon!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krisrock

**RESERVED FOR 10 CHAPTER**

**UNRES**

I am so sorry!!!! Actually I was avoiding to comment on your FF!!!
Right now you must be thinking that the girl who wrote such a biggg comment on your FF, actually flattered you, is avoiding to comment!!!😕 Well, yes!!! The reason is your brilliant caliber!!!xD! Actually your updates always amuses me, so I need to fine free time separately, for commenting on your update only!!!
So, enough of my bak-bak, finally coming to your update!!!
Next chapter in a new thread!!! I am excited!xD!


The Lull Before The Storm

"You never know when your perfect life may fall apart like a pack of cards. So hold on to your dear ones for as long as you can. Life is a gamble...Some days you win, while other days u lose!"


The Lull Before The Storm!!!
Your titles actually gave a rough figure of the chapter ahead!!!And after reading the chapter, I realized that the Title along with the lines are so apt!!!
Those lines are so True!!! I swear,if I were in my school days again, I would have said your lines in the Morning Assembly and my Princy and English teacher would have amused by me!!!😆😆

So finally Randhir blurt the Truth of his Parents death!
Thank God Anu, you weren't Swayed by the emotional fight between Sandhir!!! You paid nice attention to the small things! For example, when Randhir yelled, you didn't made the doctor invisible!!! Actually, I am a minute reader, though I can't write stories like you, but I pay good attention to small things!!! 😉

Randhir's emotions and feelings were so well Written!!! Though he was angry on Sanyukta for barging into his personal stuffs, but still, when she tried to stand, he was THERE!!!
How I wished Randhir to be a little more understanding, I mean he actually didn't cared when he saw the Gates of Hostel closed!!!!
Sanyukta was so great, how politely she said everything to him, woh bhi bina ehsaan jataye! Mein uski jagah hoti toh kabka bol diya hota ki mein sirf tumhari wajah se gayi thi, aur sirf tumhari wajah se mein marne wali thi xP!!!!

Randhir was so mean, how can he even afford to talk to Sanyukta like that, there she risked her life for him, and here he was loathing her! Anu, you made me hate Randhir so much!xP!
What the hell!!! Anu why didn't you let Sanyukta tell him that what Harsh and Renuka meant to her! But, I know you will disclose it at right time!!! You are such a sweet cliff-hanger!!! 😛

Her words hit him deep down. He looked up and met her gaze. Her eyes were glassy with tears. And Randhir felt guilty of venting out all his frustration on her. He had a sudden flashback of her drunken confession. He knew the girl was in love with him...and he was hurting her.
This Para made me fall in love with my Randhir again!!!

He knew what he was about to say next would shatter her, but he had to. He had to prevent Sanyukta Agarwal from garnering false hopes about someday making Randhir Shekhawat fall for her.

I was so hell shocked after reading this!!! For 5 seconds I was continuously thinking that what might be he is going to do !!
And then finally He said" I know you need money"!!!
Though I was angry on Randhir being so mean to her, but then I knew it very well, he was doing all this for HER only!!! I toh got very emotional reading their only emotion HURT!!!😭

Smriti's mom and all of them are doing the Autopsy! May I know why???I supposed they were somewhat related to this Murder!!! And she need a Coded Book!!! Anu, you are such a suspense creator!
HElll!!! Now what was that Ishita's mom saying! They won't find it!!
I so knew it, I knew it that Ishita's dad was involved in Sanyukta being shot!Anu, maybe we are soul sisters xD!!!

I agree with Sanyukta, even how I wish if Randhir was like Parth! But then Randhir has his own charm in the sotry!

I thought that Sanyukta would be so glad to get a call from her Mom! But, you always surprise me Anu! Sanyukta's daddy met an accident!
Sanyukta thought to take help from Jiggy as well from Parth, but not from Randhir!!!
But then when Randhir said that he can help, it actually soothed me! But let's see if it does the same to Sanyukta!

I don't know Anu if the chapter was biggg or small, I know only one thing, I wanted to read some more! Waise, no need to take tension, tum jitna bhi bada update do, I will always feel the same!!!xP
Anu you always writes like you have never wrote and I have never read!!! Though I am so much in love with My Ipti duhling, but I can't help to have a crush on you!!!
Today is 30th, and you have update on 26th, hope you are gonna update soon!!!!😃
Love
Sanju😳

Sanjana,
I'm honoured!
thank u so much!!!
Your review was so detailed! Loved it!
Yep, even I pay attention to minute details...
And this is a murder mystery...so...!
I won't update tonight...I'm not in the right frame of mind..
Tomorrow pakka!!!
Love u loads!Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey anu just saw ur edited title... u r not posting today. But why?
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHY ????😭😭😭
AAPKE UPDATE KE LIYE JAGE HAI DI
PLS UPDATE NA

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Posted: 11 years ago
😔 but y ??
u must b busy..par waada kia tha na...😔

r u alright ? theeek toh ho na ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just to tell you that Moi online aa gayi hoon and I'm typing your comment. 🤣 🤣
Advance mein sowwwiee for late Unres!!
🤣
Edited:
Jus saw the comments here...people are commenting to ask about update and I'm commenting for apologizing my late unres. Bwahaha!! They must be wondering how am I unresing when there is no update...M Unique na??? 🤣
Edited again:
Finally I unresed on Pg 129 :)
Edited for the 3rd time:
Are the pics visible?? If not tell me...that's the main part of my comment.
Edited:
I got to know that pics aren't visible...Anu di...my comment is under renovation...uska reply mat dena abhi...ruk jao.
Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHY??😡
You said u'd do it for me 😭😭
Busy with something? Toh fir take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat the hell anu di. 😭 how cud u? Acha ok. Pakka kuch urgnt kaam hoga or i guess u might b busy. Gn. Tc.
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaar u r awsm i jst love ur updates...plz update soon cant wait to read...

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