SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete|

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Noo , update 13 page par kariyo na , its shubh dude !

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Burning: Part-3

Not wanting to go back to the party again, Randhir headed back to his room. His footsteps were the only source of noise and corridor was as silent as could be. It almost gave a haunted feel to it and suddenly, Randhir picked up pace and walked quickly into the room, bolting the door shut behind him.

He tried to remain awake and study for sometime but all he could hear in his mind was about Sanyukta and Parth. Sighing at his failed effort, he decided to doze off and clear his mind.

He quickly removed his shirt and changed into a black pair of shorts and a white wife-beater. As soon as he hit the bed, his eyes drooped and soon enough, he was asleep. But even then he did not achieve the peace he was hoping for as it was Sanyukta who managed to grace his dreams with her presence.

His dream started off as usual, with their fights.

"Randhir, stop acting like you're a know-it-all and suck it up. This design is perfectly fine the way it is," Sanyukta told him in a frustrated tone as always.

Randhir pointed out the mistake and said, "Farzi, I don't act like a know-it-all, I am one. You should learn how to understand that."

"I don't need to understand MCPs like you. I've met enough of them for a lifetime." Sanyukta told him and left the place.

His dream suddenly shifted to his dorm. He was frantically removing her clothes while she was patiently opening the buttons on his shirt. She was kissing him back with the same urgency he knew he was kissing her with. He wanted to stop the kiss but he still couldn't. He understood that it was a dream but he wasn't able to control his actions or wake up.

Unable to get a grip on himself, Randhir stripped off her kurti and started kissing her to which Sanyukta replied by moaning. He began by kissing her earlobe and slowly traced her jawline. Deciding to tease her, his lips went straight to her chin and down her throat when she suddenly pulled him closer by the neck and kissed him.

It changed once again.

He was proposing to her in a small restaurant this time which had two or three more couples other than them. As she said yes, the waiters and all others present there started clapping cheerfully and Randhir slowly leaned in kissed her slowly and soon broke the kiss since they were in a public place.

Startled, Randhir woke up after the very weird dream which he recollected very clearly but wanted to forget.

'What the heck was that?' he thought to himself and got up to get a glass of water.

I'm proud of this update and that happens rarely.

This is dedicated to my Mirror <3

Do leave your comments behind! :)

Love,

Ananya

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Ananya tu maa banne waali hai :' )
Sab kripya Ananya ke liye badhaiyaan zaroor likhe apne comments mein ,
Dhanyawaad :')

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Tanya

@TashaForever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Res!

I cant believe I missed the first spot! Darn it!

But my dear Mirror, I promise to give you the longest and best comment <33

Oyyee!! You dedicated this to mee <3 And tabhi i had to comment second -_-

Unres tom..I am overwhelmed...this was too good. MS Word ka ek ya do page toh type karna padega as a comment xP

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Mirror Mirror!

How do you do?

Tell me who is the best writer of all?

Bitch! Bitch! Bitch!

Oops! ^^ Sorry for that xP

I meant, Ananya! Ananya! Ananya!

I am so sorry Mirror, for unresing so late. Sorry yaar...bahut tadpaaya tujhe :/

I loved this update(altho i dere r any updates i have NOT loved xP)

But srsly I love u for dedicating this particular update to me!

Nuaghty Naughty genre is just what I needed ystday to chill my mood and u heeded to my request! Aaww...I so love you <33

The dream!! Randhir! Too much Ahem Ahem content, have u been watching...in ur dreams? xP

Gosh...the dialogues. I tell you, its Mirror Power.

Your writing style, the length of the updates, ur dialogues, sense of humour all have coubled and reached perfection! Its my influence too xP

Okay its not, but its my confidence and faith in you!

Randhir pointed out the mistake and said, "Farzi, I don't act like a know-it-all, I am one. You should learn how to understand that."

This is a pretty simple line but I dont know why, I liked it the most.

And lol the white wife-beat shirt xP Rofl..ur funny language xD

And the proposal and public kissing...AAH!!

*Enters Dreamland*

And Ananya..Thank you again. For updating this hot stuff wen i wntd it.

Love you always,

Teri Kutti<3

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

res!

I don't believe that you Told about it to me this late!😡

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*UNRES*

The passion, the sensuality, the burning aura of SanDhir! Aah!

Though I prefer the real SanDhir more that the surreal dreamy one, but girl, you just nailed it!! My burning has set the duo on fire and it's a brilliant piece! I heart you lady!! Alluring work!! Now this is one of the most sensually apt work, that too coming from such a young writer! Incredible!

Love ya

Flames!😳

Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago

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Payal

@Grenade

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

RES

(lambaaa review coming after Exams) 😉

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

this is going awsome..plz update asap...i loving it..

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arvifan1

@arvifan1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Awesome update plz do continue soon 😊

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Omg randhir aise aise dreams bhi dekhta hai

So naughty

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@-Cascade-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

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Wow!! This is what I call a chapter... Full on dhamaka...!
The more I read this SS, the more I fall in love with it. It's drug to which I'm addicted.
I'm so happy that you've given us a long chapter. I'm not joking...
Can this update be any hotter...hell no!
Ah! I'm still in SanDhir dreamland, specially Randhir's.

This update was worth everything. I'm so glad to be a reader of this finest piece of work.
Every word is woven with so much finery that it has to have a direct imapact on the reader.
Gods I want this Randhir in the show as well.
Huh!!!! Randhir having wet dreams about Sanyukta!!!! OMG!I'm blushing like hell...
Kya dream sequence tha...specially that make out scene. My mind is revolving around it again and again...

Uff!! Ananya yaar thoda sa dimaag mujhe bhi de do na...
Do update the next part soon buddy..

--With love
Kajal

Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago