SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete| - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow

this part was brilliant

totally loved it

Randhir sure had a wild dream

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part!!!!!
His fantasies are just oh-so hot!!!! Stripping of kurtis' to passionate kissing!!!!

And then proposing... GOD! He basically lived half of his life in that one dream...

Conti soon!!!

PS: Tum maa bane wali ho??? 😆
PPS: How apt is this title girl!!!☢️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tu Maa ban gayi. Kisske saath ki tune aisii sharamnaak harkat? 14 ki age pe. Kaun hai voh ladka (who's probably gay)? Bol Ana, chup chap blush mar karti jaa. -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Randhir's weird dreams lol..!!!:D
Update next part ASAP...!!!
Love
Shalini
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Tu Maa ban gayi. Kisske saath ki tune aisii sharamnaak harkat? 14 ki age pe. Kaun hai voh ladka (who's probably gay)? Bol Ana, chup chap blush mar karti jaa. -_-



wahi toh ! belajja! samaaj ki laaj aur sharam ka to dhyaan hi nahi hai .
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice... continue n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was hawt ahhh the way he just couldnt think of anything else but SaRth
And the dream first fighting then nearly totally kissing around and that was really hawt
Meri Beti u still wanna say ur innocent?
And then proposing ahhh so much of SanDhir kisses
Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

Ananya tu maa banne waali hai :' )
Sab kripya Ananya ke liye badhaiyaan zaroor likhe apne comments mein ,
Dhanyawaad :')

Duuude, I will kill you.
Seriously -_______________________-
I am not even 15 -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Res!

I cant believe I missed the first spot! Darn it! You didn't. Arpi's mad -_-
But my dear Mirror, I promise to give you the longest and best comment <33 Aww, you always do <3
Oyyee!! You dedicated this to mee <3 And tabhi i had to comment second -_- Baba, chill :)
Unres tom..I am overwhelmed...this was too good. MS Word ka ek ya do page toh type karna padega as a comment xP Accha? :P
-----Unres------
Mirror Mirror!
How do you do? I'm good.
Tell me who is the best writer of all? Kutti.
Bitch! Bitch! Bitch! No, Kutti ^_^
Oops! ^^ Sorry for that xP
I meant, Ananya! Ananya! Ananya! Tanya, Tanya, Tanya
I am so sorry Mirror, for unresing so late. Sorry yaar...bahut tadpaaya tujhe :/ It's okay. I know why na :)
I loved this update(altho i dere r any updates i have NOT loved xP) Awww <3
But srsly I love u for dedicating this particular update to me! Accha? Aisa kyun? 😆
Nuaghty Naughty genre is just what I needed ystday to chill my mood and u heeded to my request! Aaww...I so love you <33 I love youuu tooo <3 I did because I love my Mirror <3
The dream!! Randhir! Too much Ahem Ahem content, have u been watching...in ur dreams? xP Nooo, I just had a dream like that today 🤣
Gosh...the dialogues. I tell you, its Mirror Power. Seriously? :O
Your writing style, the length of the updates, ur dialogues, sense of humour all have coubled and reached perfection! Its my influence too xP This is perfect? 🤢 Sure it's better because of you 😆
Okay its not, but its my confidence and faith in you! I love you for that <3
Randhir pointed out the mistake and said, "Farzi, I don't act like a know-it-all, I am one. You should learn how to understand that."
This is a pretty simple line but I dont know why, I liked it the most. I was quite proud of it 😆
And lol the white wife-beat shirt xP Rofl..ur funny language xD Funny nahi, that's a type of vest 😆
And the proposal and public kissing...AAH!!
*Enters Dreamland*
And Ananya..Thank you again. For updating this hot stuff wen i wntd it. Anytime <3
Love you always,
Teri Kutti<3 Love you too,
Teri Bitch <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

res!

I don't believe that you Told about it to me this late!😡 Haww :(
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*UNRES*
The passion, the sensuality, the burning aura of SanDhir! Aah! Thank you <3
Though I prefer the real SanDhir more that the surreal dreamy one, but girl, you just nailed it!! My burning has set the duo on fire and it's a brilliant piece! I heart you lady!! Alluring work!! Now this is one of the most sensually apt work, that too coming from such a young writer! Incredible! AHHH, means a lot Flames, it really does. I can't, I just CAN'T write sensual scenes so it means a lot <3
Love ya
Flames!😳

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