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Posted: 11 years ago
Bwahahahaha...can't stop my laughing yet..
This was just superb and splendid..
Aww... bechara Randhir. He shouldn't have played pranks on Sanyukta. Ab bhugto!
This was just lovely and really was alluring...
Update it soon...

--With love
Kajal
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read chp 5 and 6

wow


Loved the whole thing yaar

Brilliant work

I so loved Sandhir

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu updated! Anu updated! Anu updated! YES! YES! YES! YES!
Overly excited I am! So sworry to the people who have to read this post xD
Anu, you eat up (literally, swallow, gulp and digest) my heart each time you write! There is humor, intelligence and something to very fondly remember. What else would one want? :D

Keep writing, bebe! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
I've been on a writing spree lately. I finally reached Burning. One more part to go. (:


Burning: Part 7

"Ra-dhi-," she spoke, discovering that her voice was breaking.

"Lost your voice, have you, Sanyukta?" he asked her, smirking in all his glory.

Unable to find her voice, Sanyukta tried to convey her message to him through actions but failed miserably. Her throat was burning and all she wanted now was to go and eat some ice cream to nullify the pain but before that, she had to tell Randhir.

She removed a book from her bag and removed a piece of paper from inside and started writing on it frantically while Randhir was trying to read what it was that she was scribbling.

She thrust it in his hand and went to the canteen to buy some ice cream and hot water so as to give her throat rest. She ordered a chocolate ice cream, once again by writing it down, when Kaustuki joined her.

"Did you give it to him?" she asked her and was amused when Sanyukta was nodding her head with complete force. Sanyukta suddenly held her neck and cringed, knowing that she had pulled a muscle in her neck. Kaustuki started laughing but turned stern when she saw the ice cream and the hot water.

"Sanyu, you're not having this ice cream." She told her and started having the ice cream herself while she forced Sanyukta to have the hot water.

Sanyukta signaled that she will have to pay for the ice cream with a stern look and Kaustuki acted like her ice cream was the most delicious thing in the world, simply to irritate Sanyukta.

After what seemed like a lifetime of torture for Sanyukta, Kaustuki finally finished her ice cream and then dragged Sanyukta to get her dressed for her big day.

"Kaustuki, do we really have to do this?" she asked her, desperately hoping to change her mind this time around.

"Not we Sanyu, you. You are doing this. I'm not even involved so don't even try." Kaustuki said and began curling Sanyukta's hair with a huge smile on her face.

When they were done, Sanyukta looked at the mirror and sighed in dismay. She couldn't recognize herself and she knew that Randhir would begin taunting her as soon as he saw her about how she was finally turning into a girl' and also how he had always been right.

"Kaustuki, I look awful. Randhir is not going to recognize me in this skirt and top you've put me in. And don't you think the skirt's too bright and so is the top?" she kept pestering Kaustuki but Kaustuki refused to give in and was stubborn that Sanyukta will go to the meeting like this.

Finally, Sanyukta agreed to go with Kaustuki pushing her wherever she refused to move. They finally reached the abandoned gardens and Kaustuki saw the set up area and told Sanyukta to sit there and then went to hide in the bushes, waiting for Randhir to come.

As she saw the watch, Sanyukta knew Randhir had ditched her. She kept asking Kaustuki if they could leave and it was at one of those times that Randhir finally showed up. He spotted her sitting under an umbrella and took a seat opposite to her.
"What was it that you wanted to say which was so important?" he asked her. He had missed his regular boxing session but he knew any momentary fight with Sanyukta would be worth it.

"Randhir, I love you." She said, leaving Randhir shell-shocked.


I should be done with the last part by Monday. Let's see. 😛
Also, if anyone is in the mood to help, please tell everyone who liked the first post here that I updated. xD
Also, thank you for all the comment! <3 I'm not really active right now on IF so I am unable to reply. Keep the love coming. (:

-Ananya


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Posted: 11 years ago

Last part. My first ever complete SS/FF and it is such a good feeling. I'll finally be able to put complete up in that title. Ahhh. :') Thank you everyone for the support. SS of the week tak mila and it wasn't possible without you guys. <3 Mirror, this is you and pure you. <33 And thank you Sanch, Arohi and all others! <3

Burning: Part 8


"You, what?" he spit out the coke and asked with a bewildered look. "What kind of a joke is this Agarwal?"

"Just for the record, this is not a joke so don't go around spreading this news. I have no intentions of becoming the laughing stock of the college." She said and then called out at the bushes, "Let's go Kaustuki." On receiving no reply, she went and peeped in to discover that her best friend had apparently disappeared on Randhir's arrival.

"So, love?" he said, pulling her by the arm.

"Randhir, what are you doing?" she stuttered and tried to free her arm from his.

"This." He said and leaned in, kissing her softly, unlike the time before.

"In case you're still in your farzi mode, I love you too Farzi." He told her and this time, it was she who initiated the kiss.

2 years later. The day of the graduation:

"Randhir, we did it. We actually got through 4 years of college with Vardhan sir always making us do tasks. I cannot even imagine what we were like two years ago, always pulling each other's hair and ready to burn each other.

"You know you loved me back then as well Agarwal," he teased her and winked at her.

"Sanyukta?" she heard someone call out and turned to see her father calling her sweetly for the first time in over four years.

"Papa, you are here?" she stammered and stuttered, completely not knowing what to say. She couldn't make the head, or tail of it and was completely knocked off her feet. She looked at Randhir and saw him giving her a bright smile. She finally understood he did this.

Without any more words, her father gave her a hug while her mother wiped her own tears. Her father then explained what Randhir did and Sanyukta never felt more proud of her choices than she did at that moment.

The time for the graduation was nearing and Sanyukta took her seat in the front row, her surname starting with A' while Randhir was in the end with S'. After a long graduation ceremony, at least it seemed so, they announced the class of 2015 were all officially engineers and all caps were thrown in the air, except for two.

Those two caps were helping in covering the kiss Sanyukta was giving Randhir as a thank you for bringing her father on this special day.

And it all began with a burning passion for machines. Who would have thought?



And that's it. Over. Done.
Also, did anyone notice that every part had something related to burning? 😛

Love,
Ananya

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


😎

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Last part. My first ever complete SS/FF and it is such a good feeling. I'll finally be able to put complete up in that title. Ahhh. :') Thank you everyone for the support. SS of the week tak mila and it wasn't possible without you guys. <3 Mirror, this is you and pure you. <33 And thank you Sanch, Arohi and all others! <3

Mere spamming ke paise? 😛

Burning: Part 8


"You, what?" he spit out the coke and asked with a bewildered look. "What kind of a joke is this Agarwal?"

RANDHIR 🤣🤣 I can see how 'bewildered' his face would have been 🤣

"Just for the record, this is not a joke so don't go around spreading this news. I have no intentions of becoming the laughing stock of the college." She said and then called out at the bushes, "Let's go Kaustuki." On receiving no reply, she went and peeped in to discover that her best friend had apparently disappeared on Randhir's arrival.

Yeh le, aa gayi engineerni wapas 🥱 Good job Kaustu! A good friend always knows kab kat lena hota hain :P

"So, love?" he said, pulling her by the arm.

Haiiiyyye ☺️ 'pulling her by the arm'

"Randhir, what are you doing?" she stuttered and tried to free her arm from his.

Engineerni gayab ☺️

"This." He said and leaned in, kissing her softly, unlike the time before.

☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.

Aww man. He got over the surprise real soon 😆 Jeez <3

"In case you're still in your farzi mode, I love you too Farzi." He told her and this time, it was she who initiated the kiss.

THIS LINE <3

2 years later. The day of the graduation:

"Randhir, we did it. We actually got through 4 years of college with Vardhan sir always making us do tasks. I cannot even imagine what we were like two years ago, always pulling each other's hair and ready to burn each other.

"You know you loved me back then as well Agarwal," he teased her and winked at her.

"Sanyukta?" she heard someone call out and turned to see her father calling her sweetly for the first time in over four years.

"Papa, you are here?" she stammered and stuttered, completely not knowing what to say. She couldn't make the head, or tail of it and was completely knocked off her feet. She looked at Randhir and saw him giving her a bright smile. She finally understood he did this.

Without any more words, her father gave her a hug while her mother wiped her own tears. Her father then explained what Randhir did and Sanyukta never felt more proud of her choices than she did at that moment.

The time for the graduation was nearing and Sanyukta took her seat in the front row, her surname starting with A' while Randhir was in the end with S'. After a long graduation ceremony, at least it seemed so, they announced the class of 2015 were all officially engineers and all caps were thrown in the air, except for two.

Those two caps were helping in covering the kiss Sanyukta was giving Randhir as a thank you for bringing her father on this special day.

And it all began with a burning passion for machines. Who would have thought?


Aww and double Aww man He called her parents <3 And the best part: the reunion ⭐️ So sweet that was! Fyi, even I have my doubts how they'd manage to complete their degree with Vardaan's whimsical timings, except they're brilliant so it's not a problem 😆 AND THE LAST LINE <3 You gotta love it when the last line is just that beautiful <3 Par your update's beautiful upar se neeche tak so the last line's the absolute perfect ending 😳


What can I say? It's a beautiful story <3 It's fun, it's crisp, it's ☺️ (just go with whatever word suits :P) and even though I'd like to say I'm not exactly happy with it ending after 8 parts, kheecha taani se it ruins the crispness .. bole toh .. karakpan 😆

You're SUCH a wonderful writer man <3 And if I don't say this often enough, my bad 😳🤗


And that's it. Over. Done.
Also, did anyone notice that every part had something related to burning? 😛

Love,
Ananya

Edited by .hea. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES. --UNRES-- I still cant believe this! You completed this fic , i mean , it seems so unreal! 😳 why? 🤔 no. I wont comment on your story as yet! Lemme first yell at u! 😡 kyun? Why is everyone suddenly so keen on finishing their fics? 😳 chakkar kya hai? 🤔 anyways , it was a small part but a beautiful one! I liked the ending , like the 2 years leap! Uske baad jo hua that too was really sweet! ^_^ sometimes i feel your sweetness and cuteness in your updates! 😆 Yeah i mean , the story started out with randhir's jealously and ended with SanDhir kissing each other! Aaah...waqt kisika mohotaj nahi , so true! 😃 and i am glad to be connected back to this story again , though i really dont get time to read anyone's fic which makes me really sad! 😭 oh did i mention that sanyukta's dad kind of sounded humanly in your upfate! 🤣 yeah i hope a day comes in the show where he actually adorns his girl and not torture her! 🤔 The story was bitter-sweet and i liked that essence! i lubh u! 🤗
Edited by arshifan2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whoa. Ananya!
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. :')
Damn, this ended! I loved it! :D

And part 7 xD
Oh mayn. xD xD
Please tell me its not my brain going pervert and she actually DID give it to him xD xD
That was hilarious. :P
LOL.

You're an amazing writer.
:')
Edited by Reminiscence - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ananya! My God! Your writing is beautiful!
Continue to bless us with it? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago


Shit I know I was supposed to be doing this today but eh can't History test tomorrow and Hitler's messing up my head sooo i'll do that tomorrow promise 🤗

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