SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete|

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..

ur work is always worth all the applause👏👏

Aww <3

I actually went through mere kuch TBP OSes and went, 'what was I thinking?' 🤣

They were that bad 😆

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

Love it! 😆 Thank you! 😆

Specially when he says something really is burning 🤓 Sanyukta kam baat kiya karo tum Ab humare bolne se thodi maante hai yeh dono

The ending <3
Excellent dialogues 😎 Thanks a lot 😃

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bewakoofLadki
aww cute

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5
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Thank youu <3

Glad you liked it :)

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beti here I am!!
Firstly I loved the size of it,small and utilized very well!!
The way she was just done with the girl and the different names she took and our typical Randhir saying how can someone not even remembering a small name

And then the burning part I and Sanyu got a chop when he actually felt something burning!

And then the last part the kiss and the end!!

It was fab Beti short and hawt!!

Write more!!
Love uu

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: --Akshu--
Beti here I am!! Maa <3
Firstly I loved the size of it,small and utilized very well!! Thank you ^.^
The way she was just done with the girl and the different names she took and our typical Randhir saying how can someone not even remembering a small name Of course 😆

And then the burning part I and Sanyu got a chop when he actually felt something burning! Aww Maa 😆

And then the last part the kiss and the end!!

It was fab Beti short and hawt!! Thanks <3

Write more!!
Love uu Love you too <3

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: suumi
Nyc...

Thanks :)

Glad you liked it :D

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow

So nycly written!!

Short as its a drabble bt the extra sweet jealous portrayed is so brilliantly done...!!

Sanyukta was so utterly jealous and reacted lyk the way she would usually do...!!

Damn u should so write more on sandhir...u write so beautifully!! <3

Regards

Safrena!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow

Thanks for the pm

This was brilliant

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed

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Mehreen Bushra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Aww short hai but awesome hai...

Lol sanyukta was jealous...*Lol*

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
Wow

Thanks for the pm Your welcome :)

This was brilliant

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job Thanks <33

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed