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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti
Awesome update...
Randhir's weird dreams lol..!!!:D
Update next part ASAP...!!!
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Thank you! :D

Weird ya hot? 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

wahi toh ! belajja! samaaj ki laaj aur sharam ka to dhyaan hi nahi hai .

YOUUU -_-

Don't even talk. :|

I feel like maarofying Lily's signature dialogue :/

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
very nice... continue n do pm me...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--
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Bahut jaldi unres kardi 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: snivethitha
If u can pls pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: --Akshu--
It was hawt ahhh the way he just couldnt think of anything else but SaRth They seem to have that effect on him 😆
And the dream first fighting then nearly totally kissing around and that was really hawt Thanks <33
Meri Beti u still wanna say ur innocent? Yes 😎
And then proposing ahhh so much of SanDhir kisses LOL yeah 😆
Loved it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

Please tell me you're updating :P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

I realize it's been long but I hope you guys haven't forgotten me. 😆 Well, another update! Thank you for all those comments to the previous chapters. They mean a lot. <3

Sandhir SS: Burning-Part 4

As he went to take water, he thought he saw a glimpse of Sanyukta down the corridor. Shrugging, he just continued to gulp the water down his throat.

Once again, he saw her, a little closer to his room and heading towards him and then right into the room.

He said to himself, "What is wrong with you Randhir? First the dream and now you're hallucinating too? Way to go dude. What next? You'll go and make those dreams of yours come true?"

"Randhir," she began but was cut off by a laugh which echoed in the room.

"I've really lost it. She's talking too? Good lord!" he spoke aloud and started punching hard. It went close to Sanyukta when she stopped the bag from hitting her, anticipating that it was bound to come next to her anytime now.

"Sanyukta?" he said, his eyes looking like they would pop out any second now.

"Good, I assume you've woken up then?" Sanyukta said and gave him a dead look.

"What are you doing in my room? I know you like being a guy but I don't think you're a full guy yet so you can't be here," Randhir told her, showing her the door.

"Excuse me but I came to take Parth's mobile," she said and went to take the mobile.

Hearing his name ignited a fire in Randhir and he started to punch again but he accidentally hit the wall, hurting his knuckles which started to bleed.

Sanyukta who had turned at the noise saw his knuckles and quickly took the first-aid box in the room, rushing to put the medicine.

She took his hand in hers but he snatched it away.

"Stop it Randhir. Don't behave like a kid. Let me put the antiseptic and you can continue after that." Sanyukta scolded him like a little child.

Randhir reluctantly agreed, realizing she wouldn't let go.

As she dabbed the antiseptic slowly, Randhir hissed and told her, "It's burning. Could you be gentle?"

"It's supposed to burn Mr. Rank 1. Stop throwing tantrums like a baby. You shouldn't have punched the wall if you just wanted to complain," she told him and continued with her work.

'If only you knew Farzi,' Randhir thought to himself.

So, good? Bad? Awful?

Leave your thoughts behind.

They encourage me to write more and faster too. 😆

Love,

Ananya

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

RESERVED FOR MIRROR <3

You have a holiday tom.
Expected a longer update!
*Whines like a kid*
Increase your length yaar varna you'll face the Hitler roop of your mirror!
Coming to the update...I so wish this would be aired.
I mean today's episode was just so damn disheartening!
And ur update is really a treat! First dreaming, now hallucinating xP Rofl!
"Good, I assume you've woken up then?" Sanyukta said and gave him a dead look
^^Sanyu spoke rightly...This line had me in fits of giggles xP
You really know how to bring the humour in ur updates :D
I love the way you portray the feelings...the confusion, the jealousy, the reluctance.
Lawl the end.
Mera pyaala Randhu.
Sanyu, aaraam se antiseptic laga. Aur Randhir, stop behaving like a baby!
Ooh...last line. Randhu? What do u mean by that?
Am eager to know xP

Over all, as usual, a fab update xD
Looking forward to more update and sooner, full of excitement and eagerness xP

With love,
Your Soul Stalker Kutti aka Mirror<33

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago