Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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tina

@cpervaiz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

ohh noo, i thought that was too short but worth it, it's always a treat to read about Arnav's green eyed monster,
can't wait to read more
- your new reader

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr
hey thanks for the pm,loved d update fantastic. well written enjoyed evrry bit of it. arnav was like a mad man possesed. arnav shooed of pankaj lovelyy. update soon

Thanks a tonne for your sweet comment. ha ha yes Arnav shooed him away😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: lovebarun...
oh!! such a beautiful update.. these two fight very beautifully...😆

Well said!!!⭐️ they fight beautifully😃

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

A Jealous Arnav! Loved the update.👍🏼

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

I'm reading on my phone. So can't give you detailed comment.
As usual loved it. Specially the punch on pankaj.how dare he tried to snatch his girl!

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ForLoveofBarun

@ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

👍🏼 For Arnav and his stance to go after the maiden he loves

Loved Khushi's feisty phone conversation

Poor Pankaj, has still not gotten the message. If he pins his hopes on Khushi, he is going to be disillusioned. What will Arnav do next. He sent the wannabe groom packing, but will he don the garb of a groom himself? 👏 Wiwy.

Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 11 years ago

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

a possessive and a jealous arnav...liked that one

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

i loved pankaj... that scene in the car, he and khushi. khushi morose and demure, then khushi ignited and sparkling... pankaj making up his mind... too good.

and this asr is a real asr bhi na. snoring away while his heart throb is leaving home. cute. so he'll be waiting. haw.
read two chapters, giggled madly. thanks, sir.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago