Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: cherryteacake
That was quite a reaction from Arnav, hope Pankaj takes the joke seriously and steps aside. Can't wait to see the fireworks between Khushi and Arnav continue😃! Thank you for the update, looking forward to the next one xx

Thanks for reading and your perceptive comment😃 I am happy you are enjoying the story.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Awesome update
couldn't stop laughing
after seeing Pankaj plight 🤣

Aww! thank you so much for enjoying the update! 😃😃 And tahnks for your support.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
😊 Nice update Arnav was awesome Typical ASR and his STYLE.

Ha ha! thank you very much for liking ASR's style! 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: kushigowda
poor pwnkaj

So true😃 thanks for reading.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: sanjanasree
Nice update

Thanks a tonne😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Arshifflover
Awww that's was so cute and hai allah arnav saying sorry thank you and apologising woh toh theek hai naa something's going on but I loved this update jaldi update keejiai na please

Ha ha! Yes something is definitely wrong with Arnav! Maybe he is in love😉 I haven't started writing the next chapter😳 But I will start soon. I am a late latif you know😳 Thanks for your sweet comment😃

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Looks like that Pankaj guy fell for Khushi after seeing her for the first time. Well Khushi is such a person whom you would like instantly.

Arnav following and tracking down Khushi and then punching Pankaj was too good. Looks like Pankaj is more worried of his job than anything else including Khushi.😆

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Wiwy I was literally hanging at the edge of my seat impatient to know what happens after each line ..

How do you think of such stories pileej tell tell?

"Sahab ko kya hua! Unhoney mujhe thank you kaha!!

"Aur mujhe sorry!! (And sorry to me!!)" 🤣 🤣

I will surely miss the next flight too, he thought! 🤣 🤣 🤣

Sorry , thank you all in one day.. really what has happened to ASR? who is this girl jiske baare mein he keeps thinking.. And she all alive the instant his voice hits her starving senses.. Uff iss pyar ko kya naam doon? Nice touch that he lost control and hit Pankaj but immediately calmed down and took charge. And still scared him off too in the end. This possessive Arnav is irresistible. Tragic situation but you added in the right dose of comedy to it. I am humming the lines from the new song "Banke musibat peeche pari hai..ye comedy hai..ya tragedy hai..na hona tha kyu ho gaya..locha e ulfat ho gaya..".. Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter Wiwy.