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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Arnav should have investigated earlier , its too late now . Shashi Gupta's miraculous recovery was needed for Arnav's redemption . Each & every ill words he spoke to khushi is twisting his heart like a knife . Simply crying will not make things right . Khushi should not come back to him anytime soon .

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Fabulous update love how u explained the way Arnav gathered the evidence for Khushi and then how u described his pain at the end

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Lindi

@Lindi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Wow another update.

Well he now knows the truth, pity he didn't do this before could have saved so much heartbreak.

He knows the damage he has done to the innocent women and also that,she will hide somewhere where she can not be found, but I hope he tries and his guilt builds with every day that she is missing and lost to him. This will give Khushi time to heal and recover. What will he now do about Shyam, after learning what he is capable of he will know his sister could now be in danger.

Will the rest of the family be told what has happened to Khushi or will he not be able to admit his guilt in the matter and confront the vile man who helped him to destroy her.

Thank you again

Lindi xx

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Goshhh Zee ! I have no words. Simply speechless.

What happened in this chapter was what i...and i guess everyone was waiting for from quite a long time and now it finally happened.

It was so so splendidly written...

I loved how Shashi calmly told the truth to Arnav.

And then how Arnav went in search of evidence , still hanging to the hope that he might be right..huh !! The way you portrayed , first the shock , then the denial and finally when he came in face to face with the truth , his pain and breaking down. Marvelous !

But i now realize that i was wrong about one thing - No matter how much...how ever much i hate or loath this Arnav , i couldn't feel happy at his breakdown.

So now the tables turn. Its now Arnav Singh Raizada's turn to feel hurt.

And i want him to suffer. To feel the pain and more of what he made Khushi feel. He deserves it all.

The way he brutally murdered the innocent soul , he should be punished for it.

I absolutely loved the chapter.

Brilliantly done !!

Will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly :)

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 11 years ago

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

he deserves the pain .its nothing compared to the womans suffering. his accusations words he used were beyond redemption.i never thought i could hate arnav this much.please dont bring khushi back soon.let her live her life for a while.

the update was heart touching .you are brilliant

Edited by bhagyathara - 11 years ago

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shah.1234

@shah.1234

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

I was waiting for this update
finally he knows truth
and I wish he remembers NY night too
so every doubt clears too

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

You don't even have the slightest hint how much that update has soothed me down!

But I wanted to feel the Gush of wind before the storm first ..

I wanted to grasp the hatred , the sufferings that khushi went through before reading down the redemption track .
That's the reason I read all the chaps again in the last two days .And I m hell freshen up and a little Naa -Aaa ! more angry on arnav .He was getting on my nerves everytime I read it . And believe me, Crying feels good ! Again I knew about the Future chaps , still tears found a way down my cheeks !

this Update is really the start of the epic Redemption Track!!
This is just the start ..

I really want more redemption ..thats not at all enough! He really needs to work a lot !
Thanks for such a beautiful story 😳

P.S-
~Continue with due respect
~Cheers for the PM

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

loved the update...
lets see how arnav repent his misdeeds...
continue soon..

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Awesome...arnav's turmoil was described so brilliantly... intense update...waiting for arnav's redemption..marvelously written zee...thanks for updating..