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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Khushi is rescued by a Doctor , atleast she is in safe hands ... Tarang seems to be a warm person , what business deal he is likely to talk ?
the extent of hurt Arnav has caused to khushi reflects in the last line
"I may be a wh*re Tarang Ji, but I really don't want to sleep around for business."

Tarang will play a major role in khushi's life here after ...

AWESOME

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#462

awesome twist in the tale - glad khushi will get the help she so badly needs. Her DM has finally answered her call. Her last sentence was just so poignant of the extent of the devastation she has suffered mentally - let's see if Dr Tarang get her out of this and make her a stronger person.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

I am glad she has found someone who is willing to be the balm to her aching heart and mind...

The extent of damage done by Arnav is reflected in her last setence.. poor Khushi!

I do hope Arnav rots in hell!

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

This part show hw khushi broken frm insiee that she nt able to trust anybody

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

the amount of destruction caused by arnav to khushi can be seen here because now she even believes herself to be a wh*re. Poor poor soul.
But the phoenix will rise from the ashes and with the help of Tarang, I am sure. He is what she needs at the moment ... to reestablish her beliefs and self confidence in herself and men in the society. And when it all ends I hope she walks away with Tarang leaving Arnav and the Raizadas behind.

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Khushi has completely become mentally unstable. She called herself wh**e in front of a stranger, even before hearing him out, what he is offering her.

This is the kind of place I wanted Khushi to be in. Away from all the horrors, where someone would put up a little attempt to understand her, care for her. I'm glad that it's someone of the opposite sex, not because of the chance of love because though it will difficult for her to take help and have faith in this man, but he can definitely change her view about the opposite sex, tell her that all men are not as pathetic as Arnav, Chetan and Shyam.

As for Arnav I will just say whatever he did to Khushi was wrong, whatever be the reasons even if she was trying to ruin his Di's marriage he had no right to treat a woman with so much cruelity.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

,loved d update. Fantastic

so well written. Khushi feels evry man on earth will treat her as dirt. Tarang was king enuf to help khushi. Update soon

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

thank god
a psychiatrist save her
actually she need it...

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Finally khushi is out of hell.

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

Such a wonderful chapter as always.

Khushi has gone through so much pain, so much destruction that it makes you realise just how much damage words can do.

You managed to show her helplessness wonderfully in this chapter and I i'll say it again, your writing is amazing. The effortless way you have put the story together and manage to make your readers feel nothing but pain for Khushi and anger towards Arnav is brilliant.

You. Are. Fantastic.

I hope Khushi finally gets the help she needs and I can't wait to see her strength return to her.

Waiting for the next chapter.

😃

Edited by Skyfall - 11 years ago