Swaron Two Shot: Only Just a Dream

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

it was great

loved it

very nicely penned

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Sachi

@sachi123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Superb one Vadhana! Thanx for the Scrap! I wish it wasnt a dream! But loved it as the consequences would be more wonderful! Very well written! Keep Writing More and More :D!
Love,
Sachi!

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice update. A beautiful change up from original track. There were alot of things I liked about this update like how Swayam used to feel Sharon's presence around him, Swayam addressing Ruhi as Tani, clearing of understanding between them and finally the way you used Simmi. I really loved Simmi's part in the update. And Sharon's dance just topped it all along with all the emotions and Swayam's epiphany.

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Really awesome. Beautiful OS.

The SwaRon eye talk in the first chapter was heartwarming

and Sharon cooking and the RH dance was just amazing

Keep writing. Loved it

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome...ruhi apni sahi jagah pahounch gayi

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

amazingg update vandu

the swaron interaction was very well penned

i loved it when swayam made ruhi realise wat she is

all in all a very well formed pleasing read 😛

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

That was written really well :)

It was a dream :O

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Beautifully written
Loved it
Do write more and thanks for pm

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

A really beautiful piece of work. I truly enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the PM

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

The two shot which took me a looking time to type, n u ppl waited for it patiently ^_^ and were gracious enough to leave comments even after the looking gap ^_^

Is it any wonder why I louv u ppl so much? Thank you thank you n thank you for all the support <3