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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
fabulous update!
very interesting...enjoyed reading it!
do continue soon...
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#42
its just simply tooo gud and awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Tat was relly awesome...!!! Jz penned t so wel...waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

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---------------UNRES----------
YAY I AM FIRST*dancing*
Itna bada update!😊
Dil khush hogaya!😊😊😃
Sanyukta is getting so tensed
Randhir aur Kashish ko kisne dekha hug karte hue?
Vardhan or Sanyukta????
Clear the misunderstanding between them(between SANDHIR)
NOW UPDATE ASAP!

As long as u guys like it I don't mind writing such looong updates😊 Lets c hopefully the ranchi sequence will clear things between sandhir.
As to who witnessed the hug u'll have to wait and watch.
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Varshaā­ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
thank u so much 4 dedicating this to me varsha...
thank u so much 4 updating
wow
superb
awesome upt
loved it
today i loved the upt from starting to end
loved randhir's concern
i think vardhan might have heard it...
Does vardhan know about randhir-mithun???
once again thank u so much...love u
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

thank u so much 4 dedicating this to me varsha...
thank u so much 4 updating
wow
superb
awesome upt
loved it
today i loved the upt from starting to end
loved randhir's concern
i think vardhan might have heard it...
Does vardhan know about randhir-mithun???
once again thank u so much...love u
cont soon


Awww!
Don't thank me stupid, its all of ur encoragement that makes people like me wanna write, so as long as you like my work, what else would I want <3
😳
Vardhan...hmmm... I don't knw, maybE he does or on second thought maybe not :p
Well what I can tell you is there are lot of untold truth that ranchi sequence will bring to "light"; and along with truth it will also bring loads of relations to "life"!!!
Keep your love going Sri 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshificat


Awww!
Don't thank me stupid, its all of ur encoragement that makes people like me wanna write, so as long as you like my work, what else would I want <3
😳
Vardhan...hmmm... I don't knw, maybE he does or on second thought maybe not :p
Well what I can tell you is there are lot of untold truth that ranchi sequence will bring to "light"; and along with truth it will also bring loads of relations to "life"!!!
Keep your love going Sri 😳
Regards
Varsha ā­ļø




i dont want Vardhan or Sanyukta to find about their relation so soon...
because jealousy can be very interesting when it comes 4m Sanyu & vardhan...just my idea...
i dont get any Sandhir scenes in the show...atleast i can get it 4m from u & relish their memories
eagerly waiting 4 ur upt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashred12

interesting...very interesting...

Ha ha hašŸ˜†
Do i like "this" line or whatšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

its just simply tooo gud and awesome

AWWW!!! thank you😳
There is loads more to come...
So stay tummed to "messsenger of love"
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Messenger Of Love

Chapter 5

Kashish stood their allowing herself to look weak and guarded by Randhir's arms for god knows how long, the fact was she dint care she was tired, tired o being...no no pretending to be strong. When Randhir took her in a embrace and patted her head lovingly it was as if her lost love that her parents had given her and her lost life were back, she felt as if it was not Randhir but her mother herself was there giving her strength to lead her life, For a minute Mithun had forgotten the fact that she was older; not Randhir, but instead it was Randhir who supported her...

And Randhir... Randhir was not even aware of the fact that he was capable comforting someone until...

Randhir's POV

After sometime i felt Mithun's breathing becoming stable, which meant she had stopped crying.

But i still continued patting her head, after some time I could feel her move and so i eased my grip on Mithun's shoulder.

(Not once letting his protective arms let go of Mithun. Only when he had sensed Mithun wanting to look up at him had he let go of her having felt she might want to say something...)

I released my right hand from Mithun's shoulder and the left from above her head, she looked up at me and when my eyes met hers...

Even if the pain hadn't completely vanished from those big almond eyes, they were at solace and that's what mattered the most to me at present.

Author's POV

Mithun took both of Randhir's hand in hers and smiled at him, this time from her heart. Randhir was not unknown to the cruelty life had put Mithun through and so he tightened his grip on Mithun's hand and with no words(silently) he promised her that he wouldn't let her suffer anymore.

Mithun knew that Randhir assurance of her happiness was true, but she still did not dare to thank him coz she knew, Randhir would no less then kill her if she did.

Randhir freed his hands from Mithun's and wiped Mithun's tear stricken face, he brought himself closer to Mithun to have eye contact with Mithun effortlessly (but considering the fact that Mithun was not really the shortest person in the world it dint have to take much effort)...

With that a smiling and light hearted Kashish was back to packing her things she suddenly felt someone else except for either of them's presence there and she was right, there was also noise of something falling as well... since Randhir stood closer to the door he went to check

When Randhir returned he signalled Kashish saying there was no one there.

Well maybe i was wrong it must be the wind said Kashish assuming it might have been so

Randhir :(observing Mithun said)

Mithun...

Kashish: (encouraging him to speak and continuing her packing said)

hmmm...

Randhir: Mithun tum na kabhi rona math...woh kya hai jab tum rothi ho,

tumhare yeh jo badi badi khoobsurat aankhen hain na,

they get swollen and "u" my dear end up looking like an...

...

"ullu" says a Randhir breaking into fits of laughter... Also running away from the place for his life.

Hawww!!! Said a Kashish looking offended... but Kashish was "Kashish" she knew that whatever Randhir wanted to say wasn't for the good so, she prepared herself and beforehand. Before Randhir could go an inch forward she caught hold of his ear twisting it

[And a secret about guys (boys) is they hate "it". (Hate somebody catching hold of their ears) coz apparently it hurt like hell.]

Ouch! screamed Randhir

Randhir: Okay okaaay, u win

Kashish: that's better(said Kashish letting go of his ears) abh sare samaan utao aur gaadi mein rakho... said a Kashish keeping her head high up in fake pride, Randhir smiled at her antics.

At least she was happy thought Randhir, escorting "her highness" to the royal vehicle.

He warned her before letting her leave for the night, that she couldn't be this careless next time, she needed to be responsible and reach home on time, and also that today was the first and last time she was going home this late.

After Randhir was done with his mini speech Kashish said...

Kashish: Okay amma ji,said (Kashish sitting in the car)

Chalti hoon (mocking Randhir's over protectiveness)

Randhir: Bye! (said a grinning Randhir closing the car door for Mithun.)

[Sorry guy's can't tell you who witnessed the hug. šŸ˜›]

----*----*----

It was another day at F.I.T.E. (well! Not for certain people) Sayukta was already annoyed with kostugi's point less rootna-manana with jiggy and on top of that the first class of the day was pkc's "Can you belive it!"

Parth also wouldn't grace us with his presence because he was busy with lab work...(but i guess we all know what the real reason for sayukta's bad mood is! ;) )

It was Vardhan sir's class after break and every single person was present except for his highness af-course thought Sayukta.

(when i said "not for certain people" it was inclusive of Vardhan coz not only had Kashish managed to get the train tickets, she also was over enthusiastically doing all of today's work after he had so rudely put her of the previous day and above all that, PKC was so busy drooling over Kashish that for the first time ever in Indian history "pkc" can u believe "pck" forgot to take credit for what he "had" done)

In short Vardhan was not exactly in a great mood

Thinking about this entire thing he entered the class...

Good morning students (said Vardhan entering the class)

Okay guys so today we study about the future generatio... (with a absurd stop in between his words noticing...)

Where the hell is Randhir? Dint his break finish yet? (He questioned the class not so lovingly)

Out of all the people i don't expect the dream team to be so irresponsible, agar tum log hi aise behave karoge, what examples will you set for the others?

This is unbelievable!

Suddenly everybody's attention shift's from Vardhan to the door and as always the source of distraction was Kashish

Kashish knocked the door seeking permission to enter Vardhan's class

Kashish: May i come in? (Kashish who miraculously manages to calm Vardhan down by her appearance)

Vardhan: Yes chash... i mean miss Rathore you may

What is the matter?(asks a teeny bit smitten Vardhan)

Kashish: (seeing vardhan fumble Kashish smirks) i apologise for having interrupted your class but actually i felt the need to inform yo..

(Suddenly from behind Kashish Randhir entered the class...)

(This no doubt made Sayukta...let's say uncomfortable)

Kashish continued... you that u'r student mr. Randhir was with me as the dean had requested to discuss over the report for the next task.

Vardhan: (to which Vardhan very calmly replied) i understand that miss Kashish, but what you need to realise is that for matters such as this, you cannot take "my" students away without "my" permission in "my" period.

Kashish: (not at all taken back by Vardhan's comments in fact expecting it; with a smile Kashish answered) i wouldn't have done such a thing Mr. Vardhan. But the dean had requested the discussion to take place in front of him immediately. So...

If i have made myself clear would you excuse me Mr. Vardhan.

Saying this Kashish left behind a dumbstruck Vardhan, jealous Sayun confused Randhir and an entire class in awe.

There was no limit to Sayukta's fury what the hell does Randhir "do" spending so much time with Miss Kashish, for god's sake he doesn't even turn up in the canteen these days. Just then the bell rang and Sayukta stormed out of the class stamping Randhir's leg and not even waiting for Kostugi.

What the hell! Wincing in pain and rubbing his foot.

To which Sayukta dints even bother looking back at, coz her fury was at its height.(and we all know why šŸ˜‰)

----*----*----

After class Vardhan left straight to his cabin and he closed the door shut and stood there leaning on the wall, One leg pulled behind placed on the wall, the other straight, helping him stand.

His hand ruffled past his brown hair in frustration.

He removed his spectacles in frustration.

DAMMIT! He cursed for letting Mithun play with his head, but the question was...why was Mithun's presence bothering him so much?

He almost called her, her...her...

...

...

..."Her" CHASHMISH kyun chashmish kyun? Kyun aayi ho wapas? jab meri zindagi mein kisi ke liye jagah nahi hai ...not even for my "Best friend"...

With that his mind reeled past his memories of Kashish and it stopped at the first memory he had of her.

***flashback***

What was the matter with these guys thought a Vardhan a 3rd year mechanical engineering student, he stood tall at 6.1 and muscular body girls loved him but the only difference was unlike him, his equally good buddy "Kabir" showed off a bit too much never the less his fan following was still great and there goes target no. 342 thought Vardhan looking at another girl "hanging out" with Kabir!

Kabir joined him vaise hot gossip goin around in the campus pata chala?

To which Vardhan gave a puzzled look.

(Vardhan had noticed the unusual murmuring going on though)

Kabir: i knew it, as usual mr. Vardhan ko kuch nahi pata

Anyways guess what? Dean ki banjhi aa rahi hai NRI u see

All the way from "Dubai"

Mathlab kamal hi hogi na miss dubai return maza aa jayega

(at this comment Vardhan rolled his eyes)

Vardhan: classes ka waqt ho gaya chalen, aur vaise bhi aaj...(just when Kabir was about to join Vardhan target no. 139 passed by so no doubt Kabir was bound to be "engaged")

Just when Vardhan was about to exit the place he saw a girl talking ...no...no...quarelling with the rikshaw driver at the campus gate

Girl: nahi bhaiya, main aapko koi zyaada paise nahi doongi, ithne hi paise lagte hai airport se yahan aane keliye

Driver: par..

The girl without even taking a look back at the driver walked past the campus gates but Vardhan couldn't see the girls face coz it was almost time for the break to finish so students were retiring to their classes...

What he could see was...

Black silky hair which where curled up @ the ends, when the girl extended her hand to look at the time he could see her wearing florescent top with kadai work done on it, he could see her wearing metallic...silver maybe he guessed when somebody called out her name,she turned and went to talk to that person, the person was none other than the dean he assumed it must be the girl Kabir had mentioned earlier...

Oh! And her name was...hmm..haan Kashish...kashish naam hai ... YUP and just then Kabir interrupted him from the girl saying ek cheez hai jisme ladkiyan hume kabhi math nahin de sakti

Vardhan's expression clearly question "what"?(when he again looked around to find the girl but she apparently must have already left coz she wasn't visible at the gates)

Kabir: Are baba "Height", they can't beat our height. I'm six 2 and tu bhi teekh takh hai say 5:10 and Vardhan glared at him

Okay! Six(Vardhan still glared at him)

Okay okay fine! 6:1

And a girl can never be as tall as that.

And just after having this conversation Vardhan along with Kabir were returning to class somebody dashed right into Vardhan and so hard that Vardhan saw starts in day light. He fell down to the ground on his bum, and the person who dashed into also fell to the ground but on the opposite side.

Ouch! Said the person and it sounded as if it were a girl.

And Kabir being the jerk he was instead of giving Vardhan a hand asked the girl...

Kabir: Are you okay Miss?

And both the girl and Vardhan got up rubbing their heads

Just when Vardhan was about to open his mouth

The girl said im sorry...im so sorry woh kya hai i dint c you. Im sorry again, you okay na? Asked the girl sounding genuinely concerned?

When Vardhan looked up to reply to the girl he was left in awe of her bold features.

She looked...

Well... her hair was long black and curled from the end, which was very clumsily platted as her hair was coming out from every possible side of her plat.

She had dusky skin, which indeed was as smooth and shinny as pearl.

And her fingers where quite long which caught my attention coz she moved the a lot while speaking.

She had pink plump lips and round big brown eyes with long lashes which swayed up and down whenever she spoke. And now back to her most prominent feature "her eye" which by the way was very conveniently covered in her big square shaped goggles. (The goggle was outlined in black.)

Her florescent top and silver watch made Vardhan realise that this was the same girl as before.

Kabir: (cutting in between Vardhan's thought said) dedi math said Kabir

...i mean height mein...

Damn she is almost as tall as us and that too without a heel whispered Kabir to Vardhan.

Vardhan: (Vardhan then realised that for the first time he wasn't looking down at a girl, he was talking to a girl "face to face" QUITE LITERALLY!

And did i forget to mention her long navy blue skirt out lined in silver band complimented her curvy figure and her height pretty well.

The girl continued her apology blabber and the first thing that escaped from Vardhan's mouth after having met the girl was...

Vardhan: "Chashmish"

Girl: kya?!

Vardhan: "CHASHMISH"!!!

(Unknown to the fact that she would become his...his BEST FRIEND in the near future)

-----*------*-----

Vardhan still stood in the same position in his cabin

Cursing his life for having brought him to such a place, to where he had already locked all the doors.

Vardhan questioned...

Kyun aayi Chashmish...kyun. Why now! when neither my heart,nor my mind has any place for emotions of any sort.

Yeh jaante hue bhi ke main tumhe uss baath ki saaza de raha hoon, jisme tumhari koi galti nahi . Tum kyun mere kareeb aati ho,kyun sehti ho tum yeh sab chashmish , WHY DAMMIT!!!

***Scene 3***

Here Sayukta just stormed out of the class, she just was tooo mad!

She imitated Randhir on her way to the canteen saying...

Oh! Miss Kashish aapke books bohoth bhari hai main uta loon

OMG! Break time hai main yahan kya kar raha hoo i should spend all my time with miss Kashish, how stupid of me...

Oho! Miss Kashish aap tired ho gayi hongi main aapke haath dabado(Sayukta in her mind aur main tumhara gala dabadu mr. Randhir!!)

Uski tho main...

Wait a minute "muhje" ithna farak kyun pad raha hai. I officially declared him the villain of my life, then why am i so worried about his "Love-life"...

LOVE-LIFE!!! Wait a minute where the HELL did love-life come from, gross what am i...

Just then something else caught her attention it was the whole dream team which was right now submitting the NOC at the reception for the ranchi trip.

Shit! In all the Randhir "drama" i completely forgot about the NOC, how on earth do i get the NOC when the submission deadline is 2 hours away, knowing dad i'm pretty sure he wouldn't give me permission to go to ranchi (then something struck Sayukta) Well in that case...only one person can be of use...

After 45min. Sayukta called up her brother

*On call*

Brother: (annoyed questioned coz he was at work) kya hai?

Sayun: kaise ho aur mummy papa kaise hai, papa ki tabyath kaise hai?

Brother: Sayun tujhe sirf kaam ka waqt miltha hai kya apni bug-bug karne ke liye, aur haan sab teekh hain,lekin kya pata tu agli koi kaand karde aur papa ki tabyath wapas kharaab ho jaye?

Sayun: ho gaya bhai, zaroori tha isliye call kiya. Actually mere collage se ranchi ke liye trip keliye jaa rahen hain aur since main dream main hoon mera jaana zaroori hai tho...

I need to get permission from my parents ya guardian tho main soch...

Brother: sochna bhi math! Papa ne ithne dinno baad abhi mujhse seedhe mooh baath ki hai agar iss baar koi gadbad hui woh muhje maar hi dalenge, issliye naa hi main kuch karoonga na tum

Sayun: ok toh teekh hai main papa ko bol dethi hoon kit um samir aur unke ghar walon ki baath taal rahe ho

Brother: kya mathlab?

Sayun: bhai maine already sameer ke boldiya that mere collage se we are going to ranchi aur use koi problem nahi hai, abh agar tumhe problem ho raha hai tho...

Brother: nahin tho muhje kya problem hoga bhala jab khudh sameer maan gaya hai...

(if Sayukta did something obliging to her future in laws house papa would no doubt be happy and if this was so just because of "him" meaning his advise wouldn't it be better he would even get all the credit...so he agreed)

Sayun: tho bhai aap NOC sign karke fax kar denge, ABHI!

Brother: teekh hai chal bye

Sayun: (grinning like an idiot) bye!!

[Well! Well! Sayukta's happiness had no bounds af-course, but it was no joke when she said she spoke to Sameer, to "avail" as they say "permission" from him. She really had called him; she also got him to agree for the trip okayyy! Maybe having said some teeny-weeny lies. OKAY FINE! Major ones, like they get to learn home science in this trip and that it would be really helpful for post-marriage chores and also that there were mostly girls in this trip, what was the harm she at least got him to say yes! Tht's all that matters.]

I know guys there is not much in the chapter but that's all that i can give you in this chapter.

Though there is...no...No...There "are" major bombs to explode in the coming updates, SERIOUSLY guys trust me when i say MAJOR bombs.

So here goes the promo guys!!!

>>Promo part1<<

Vardhan comes walking in the hallway...

Just when he is about to pass by Kashish's cabin...

Vardhan: (utters... Randhir!) What is he doing in Kashish's cabin.

<<Promo part2>>

Sayukta: haan haan pata hai sabko, How "pure" and "right" ur relationship is with miss Kashish is.

And before Sayukta could utter a word further Randhir had pinned her to the wall and not simply pinned her, he had caught hold of her hands in a bone crushing grip.

Randhir: (his fury having no heights vented on Sayukta) main kuch nahi bol raha iska yeh mathlab nahi ke tum kuch bhi bakthi jao gi samjhi (he shook her questioning her)

Aur khabar dhar jo mere Mithun ke bare mein kuch bhi kaha tho, unke khilaf mein ek word bhi nahi sunoonga samjhi tum!(and this time going deadly close to Sayukta)

Saukta just listened to what Randhir said coz quite frankly she dint have the strength to speak coz randhir's hold on her arm was so tight that she felt paralysed due to pain...

So guys,

How was the update?

By the way i have one more thing to tell u people that either the next update will be short or it will take more time whatever it maybe, I promise it will be good!

Don't forget to give me your valuable comments and likes

Regards

Varshaā­ļø

Edited by varshificat - 11 years ago

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