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ipktouch

@ipktouch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: IPK007

I had conceived the idea of writing a contemporary romance with both protagonists doctors, a long time back..while I was still writing ALS. At that time, I had no plans of including Kashmir or saffron in the story, but then, during thanksgiving break, over a dish of delicious saffron scented biryani cooked by my sister and a conversation on saffron initiated by my hubby( who's an encyclopedia of obscure trivia), I suddenly developed an interest in Kashmir and saffron farming...Read up on it and got the idea of adding it to the other story :)

We'll know all about Lavanya very soon..

wow u amazed me..great to knw this piece of information and that was the reason for including saffron field in this beautiful love story...u r writers encyclopedia dear..waiting eagerly for ur updates..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1032

part 10
awesome dear...
nice one...
Arnav told Khushi about his life...
but still till hes completely free from his marriage nothing can be done...

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1033

awesome update
loved it
waiting to see in which direction arshi r going
hope for best

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1034

Just came across this story and oh my!!! ...fell in love... Instantly...red it all t one go and waiting for ur updates:)

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1035

Really really amazing story and I actually cried along with arshi

And the song at the end with Arnav thought toward khushi got me so emotional

I just felt sorry for both of them

Can't believe I cried :(

Plz plz continue soon it.

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1036

OMG I knew something was up with you angsty-Arnav.. but I didn't know that he was married! Whattay!!!! :)

I love your Khushi.. so honest with herself, Aman ["Is there someone else? "No..", Khushi had said, before adding, "I mean...I don't know..."] and Arnav.. I love this Khushi..I think, by far, this is the best FF-Khushi I have encountered. Not to say that I hate other Khushis.. There is a serene-naivete about how she approaches matters of her heart.. that child-like optimism "Are words even necessary"..But I sense a foreboding here.. she will have to get through this heartache and will probably grow a cloak around her heart.. :(

Wow.. I have a lot more to say, but I am impatient to get back to your story and read the rest of the chapters as I wait for my heart to break alongside Khushi's. :(

--MB

Edited by Mirabell - 11 years ago

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1037

Just finished reading upto chapter 7. Finally! You are the mistress of place, Jen- you have not just such a strong sense of it but also the ability to create it for your readers. That's amazing given that you've never been there!

Both Khushi and Arnav are strong. I love the way you depicted their responses to each other.
The comment on the pressure desi children feel in the US was done very nicely on the conversation between Aman and Khushi's sister.

The end of chapter 8 came as a big shock- what a twist! Arnav married! hmmm ab to aage ka chapters urgently padhne ka padi!
I love the titles to each of the chapters, they're so beautifully apt!

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago