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Posted: 11 years ago
Darlings KriSha,
The idea of a chapter ZERO is possible only when two such unique minds come together and how well you two have begun. If I may say so, your Randhir reminds me of Deep, the protagonist in Hold My Hand by Durjoy Dutta! The similarities are too palpable to miss!

Your Sanyu is as fiery as fiery can get! And how well you two have brought out those differences in them! All in all, loved this baby chappie! Can't wait for more! :D

CARLOS RUIZ ZAFON? WHERE WERE YOU TWO ALL MY LIFE???
Are you both fans? Which books have y'all read? #FangirlingMode xD

Always, through and through,
Arushi :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari

EDITED!


The starting quote was brilliant and after reading the update, it fitted in just aptly! Thank you so much!!

"I'm the guy who always ends up alone!" Naaw! That line was provoking! I didn't know it was Randhir at this stage, so I concluded "him" to be Parth! Lolwa!!

Why is Sanyukta shouting?! Arpita?! Sooo many questions... We Know 😉

Randhir has a different personality?? Shy, introverted types?? Oooh! This is going to be interesting😃 Yes, Its a fic inspired by a real life ashiqui after all xD

'You have always been "hurt" in this love field' << Oooh! A past in Randhir's life this time?! 😉 😉

Amazing chapter Kriti! You pen down internal emotions exceptionally! Thank you so much, Pari !!

Brilliant update! Definitely going to leave me speculating for a looong time😆 Thanks!!

Update sooon! Pleaseee! Otherwise I am going to die out of speculating 😆 We'll Try !!

Pari


Love
KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊...GOOD GOING...😊

sorry for commenting late.
hooked up with all school crap!!!!!!!

wow ur story is awesome.
just the very first chapter looks too good .really a gud start.

0 chapter? really nothing is better than this to give a good fine start.
the way u have named it is really different and never hear someone doing that before.love this idea yaar!!!!!!
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Randhir shy guy?interesting.
too studious i guess!
arre lunch mein bhi books? :)
very first day started feeling different towards her. really that thing was lovely.

and F.I.T.E have even started 11th and 12th class?funny.
really yaar imagine if u have Vardhaan at ur back and giving u loads of task and not allowing to
enjoy your school life?

bt. y is Sanyuktha behaving like this?and that tot she's Parth's gf and
Apitaa too is there.
anyways hope u'll provide the sol. fast .

and sure not to forget ur writing skills are awesome
hope to read sanyuktha and randhir's actual speaking.
more SanDhir encounters and moments!!!!

like this new way of approach to this story.
and duo - so expecting a lot from u both.
and sure since u both are very talented i know u'll never let our hopes down.

hey stupid crap with this like hit button.
donno when it works.
so please add me to ur pm list.
please please please plzzz.

and one more please dear - update the next one soon.

with love
#Niru

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Pari! x(
RES.

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#fff00">Unres.</font>
<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#fff00">You know why I am writing with this terrible color? Because you did not tell me over scrap that you're updating. :P
Anyway, yea chhota thha lekin I liked it. I'm a fan of yours now. And do PM when you update! :D</font>



This Really Was A Terrible Color :P

Thank you so much! Bigger updates coming soon !

Love ya
KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Res
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">-------edited------</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Kriti di and Iptie!!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Awesome beginning!!!👏</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">CHAPTER ZERO HA!!!😃</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Nice concept!😊</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">So Randhir is new-comer</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">And WTH!!!😡 Parth and Sanyukta are BF-GF???</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">What is wrong with Sanyu????</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Why is she behaving lik this???😕</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">I HOPE THIS TIME WE WILL GET AN UPDATE VERY JALDIII!!!!!!!</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">-In Hope Of Loads Of Update😉</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">and Love</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">-Prachi😊</font>



When Did we say that Sanyu and Parth are gf bf? Thats what Sahil says! *evil grin*

Thank you so much for reading Prachi! Means a lot!

All questions will be answered soon (uh, not really 😉 )

Love ya,

KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: So_Naley

I really like the idea of Update Zero! It new to me!
Coming to the chappy,it was really cool!
Randhir the new guy,the one currently in his shell,frazzled by the new environment and dazzled by our very own Agarwal!
Haha!Did you see what I did there!It rhymed!
Whereas Sanyukta the carefree,and obviously expressive person who was upset for some reason I am yet to discover!

Its a great concept...Polar personalities who complement or collide with each other!
Would be fun to see which way this relationship goes!

Since you promised early updates,I am holding you to your words!
Do update soon!
😊

Hi Sonali (I'm hoping that's your name) Thank you so much for reading! Means a lot ! Your reviews are always so special !! Love ya KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: G.R.

Hey...

loved d quote...
nd superb update...
both d leads vary frm wat v see in show
Nxt update soon



Thank you so much for reading! Means a lot !!

Love ya
KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Nice update..loved it!!
It was amazing..bt thoda confusing tha parth gf kon hai?
Arpita yaa sanyu!!
😉 😆



Hum kyu btaye ? 😉 😛

Thanks for reading ! Means a lot !!

Love ya
KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome start👏
At first I thought the person can't be randhir, but it turns out different😲
The characters are not similar to serial , randhir introvert & sanyuka full of energy😉
It is very interesting concept😊
Update soon



Thank you so much!! Means a lot !!

Iptie will Update sooon-ish (Naw, just kiddin')

Love ya
KriSha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautifully written
congrats girl



Thank you for reading ! Means a lot !!

Love ya
KriSha ❤️

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