SS~Like Knifes~Updated Chapter ZERO-page 23! - Page 17

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

superbbb prologue...but m really xcited to know wts gonna happen next...plzzz update ASAP...n d vocabulary made me luk into d dictionary for some *god knows how many times*...dis is amazing...dying to know wts next...

Originally posted by: Rekha85

My dear sisters!!!!!!!!!!!! Krithi and Ipthi!!!!!!!!!Ur intro...the story intro and the prologue...they were just awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story intro...all the questions written...I always needed the answer for every question written their!!!!!!!!!!!!

All differences...as a teenager I want to knoe it!!!!!!!!!!
The prologue was quite interesting!!!!!!!!!!

just updated upto the prologue...and 16 pages...I thought u updated the story without telling me...

Now u might have understood that hw awesum ur story is!!!!!!!

This seems to be a strong foundation to a Superb ff!!!!!!!!!!

And I am sure the whole story would become a damn hit!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing...Love u both a lots!!!!!!!!
With Love

Rekha!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: moonkmh

this is brilliant..cant believe my lil ipti n kriti writing this..wah..m so so impress n proud of u both. lovely writing..awsome word selection n what a exotic way of writing...superb..love u guys..

Originally posted by: federized2210

I'm ROFL!!
16 pages worth comments for a prologue? Tells u what a start u've made!
Kritz n Ipti, awesome work!!!
Written to perfection! Can't wait to read more!!
Post jaldi plz!
Love much :*
#Anu

Originally posted by: -.QTPie.-

I had read this before but couldnt comment due to some problem
Sorry :P

Yaahhh with the storryy
Im having a great feeling
Im soo soo loving this thing
u people are awesome yaar..
Love this FF
Pls update soon n Pm me as well ;)

Lots of Love
-Surabhi-

Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

lovely start continue soon dear

Originally posted by: --Ari--

Chutkiii see I am finally here.! Yay! Finally!Itna chota chota kyun likhte ho yaar :( Barey hi busy log hai hum! xPYour introduction was fab. you both seem like hero heroine. opposites meant to attract 🤣🤣 Yeah! that's what we are! 😆The introduction was damn interesting. You have this thing about your writing. the more you write the more you make people curious. Gets people hooked almost immediately. I love it. Oye Hoye Muha! Dil khush kar ditta! We are pleased! :)And the title is fab.! Like knives wow.! who could have thought of it.

Ok after reading 4-5 times I realize someone died in the prologue... is it renuka or rd babas gf? kaun kaun? *Ahem* We aren't supposed to leak the story line this soon! But we are touched that you read it so many times James Bond!

and then sanyu neter...weee...the entire prologue was written with such finesse I fell in love with it. But you what I loved the most? the line from twilight you used. I am the biggest phankha and wherever those lines come I go bonkers 😆 Credit To kriti! She is one hell Pankha As well!

On the whole fab read.

update soon :) We shall! :)

Lots of love,

your mohabbat :)
Love ya more!
KriSha!

He was rather clumsy and shy and looked as if he'd spent the last ten years of his life locked up in a library - hardly the kind of man any girl your age dreams of

~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

April 1st, 2012

I was all smiles when I entered the room, my new class of my new school, FITE. FITE was India's best university which had just started school for classes 11^th and 12^th. These classes were started by the school previous year. Till the time I came to know about it, I was late to fill the application form. So, I had to join in 12^th, topping the entrance exam.

"Answer me!!" I heard a girl shout as I stepped in.

Bewildered, I looked at her. A girl was standing in front of her, tears falling from her eyes. The girl, who had shouted, looked broken, too. She shook her head and turned around. That was when our eyes met. She was beautiful, average-heighted, dark complexion with dark brown hair. Her gray orbs were looking into my black ones with a weird expression.

I looked away. It was my first day and I did not want to be tagged as a jerk who ogles at girls or something.

Well, yes, I was one of those shy guys. No, it's not like I'm under-confident or something; I'm confident, intelligent and smart. But I don't trust my luck with girls. It's like I can never be the guy whom a girl can like. I'm the guy who always ends up alone.

And, if by chance, I start liking a girl, I had a PhD at making a complete fool out of myself. I don't know what happens, it's like all my confidence vanishes. I start stammering, for heaven's sake. This is the lone reason why I stay away from girls.

I looked around for an empty seat. When I found none, I went and sat by a boy's side. We introduced. His name was Sahil.

Both the girls had started shouting, again. Okay, I'll be honest; the girl I had looked at was the only one shouting.

"Who's she?" I whispered. I was curious.

"Oh, that's Sanyukta, Parth's girlfriend and the one who is crying..." but Sahil couldn't complete as Parth's girlfriend turned to look towards us. I gulped.

"I'm Not Parth's Girlfriend!!" she shouted on us. We, both, cringed.

"I'm sorry" Sahil apologized, quickly. "By the way, this is Randhir" he said, pointing towards me.

"H-hi!" I stammered. Damn! There goes my first impression.

"Sahil, my life is ruined here and you're introducing me to people? Is this all funny to you?" she shouted at Sahil, completely ignoring me.

Then, she left. She went to a girl, whose name was Arpita according to Sahil, made her stand and walked outside the classroom. I looked at Sahil. He shrugged.

I sat with my physics book in my hand, in the playground of my new school. Sahil, the only friend I had made in one day, came and sat by my side.

"Seriously, dude? It's lunch break, for Christ's sake!" He exclaimed, seeing the book in my hand. I shrugged. He tried snatching the book away from my hand; I fought back.

Fighting with him was when my eyes fell on her. Parth's girlfriend. She was walking from my front.

"She is really beautiful" I thought. Damn! What am I thinking!

Oh crap, she noticed I'm staring. I looked away. "Oh man, now she's gonna think I'm the creepy guy that stares at her" I thought.

I looked back at her, only to make sure that she wasn't looking at me. Good! She was looking ahead, again. Boy, this is embarrassing! And then, I looked away, again. She had turned and looked at me.

"Okay, no more looking at her" I order myself, in my mind.

I tried bargaining with myself. "Leave this, bro. You've always been hurt in this "love" field. No more of this crap. And, anyway, she's Parth's girlfriend"

I opened my book, again.