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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Awesome yaar. Awwahh a complete different side of Randhir... continue soon xxx

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Sanyukta. Is. Parth's. Girlfraand?????

*Eyes pop out*

Shes not?

She is? She is not?

She is?

*Feels dizzzy, collapses*

My god the update!!

Why is my Randhu baba so adorbs here?

Look Im being mehrbaan by commenting on this chapter -__- Im only doing it for Kriti di <33 But im not giving a longer comment and I swear I will nvr comment on ur works if Im not informed before about ur updating. I swear.

Ipti, we r not in talking terms. you dont comment or unres, thats fine. I do the same xP

But u inform pari ur gonna update and not me?

Thats so NOT fine.

Krittu it ws totally unexpected from u. You've forgotten chotu behna Tanu.

Bye Bye.

PS. Update soon...Altho i wont read if Im not informed earlier!

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Aastha Aggarwal

@aastha3688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

This is exactly how a bigenning should be...The thing which astonished me the most was randhir's behavior...I can never imagine him shying away from girls, not even in my dreams...But anyways, I am glad u've given us something different and unusual...Plz update ASAP...*excited*

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manasi

@lovesandhir25

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

it was really nice...i liked the total opposite randhir...thanks for the pm...update it soon...

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Sumedha

@suumi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Suprb update 😊
Plz cont soon

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Harita

@Harita1309

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

yayayayay!!!! u updated guys...when i saw ur pm.. i jus squealed in happiness😆..dis is tooo gud👏 Randhir's pov not interested in girls😲..this is awesome...hats off!!!!
sanyukta,parths girl frnd😲...Randhir staring at her
actually i guessed it was Randhir when i read d line topping d xam😆
Sahil seems funny n sanyukta's reply,ohhh man🤣
Arpitazzz here tooo!!!!arey Randhir beta koi baat nahi,u can luk at her as much as u want after all shezzz gonna be ur lady luv in d future!!!
guys dis is wonderful..plz plz plz update soon

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angel.thomas

@angel.thomas

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Randhir... a shy guy😳 Cant wait to read more

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Pudding!!! I am bigg wala gussa from you *frowning*😡

Don't you dare ask me the reason! The FF was updated and you didn't informed me! And may I know why??? See, Kriti doesn't know me, but I thought you consider me as your good friend, but I was mistaken *wiping my loads of tears*😭 But to my good luck, I found the FF updated!!!

*No baatein to you until you update the next Chapter of this FF soon*

Hieee Kriti,

I am Sanjana, you can call me Sanju, or whatever you feel like!😆

Well, when the prologue was updated, I had never read your work!But then I searched, and got loads of your work, including Memphis- One of the best FF I have ever read!You have wrote each and every chapter amazingly! But, due to paucity of time, I never got time to comment! But, I promise,from now on I will comment on each of your work!!!

Chapter Zero!!!🤣 Such a Unique thing!xD!

He was rather clumsy and shy and looked as if he'd spent the last ten years of his life locked up in a library - hardly the kind of man any girl your age dreams of

~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

After reading the chapter, I got it that what the lines meant in the Chapter!Such a dumbo I am!😆

FITE even started school for classes 11th and 12th!Is there something suspicious in this!xP

A girl in tears, and the girl shouting, totally broken, and a shy boy! Who are they?I won't assume anything, as I know that you would be the same as my pudding! I assume something in her story, then that something came totally opposite of what I assumed! So its better not to assume!xD

Awww...that boy had a PhD at making a fool of himself, just like me :D :D!

Sanyukta is Parth's girlfriend and Randhir is the Shy boy!!! I would have never assumed that! And who is the girl crying...!

Kriti, maybe you have messed the characters, Randhir, a shy and introvert, and Sanyukta, a typical girl fighting with another girl!

Sanyukta's life is ruined! Like really!!!And she went to Arpita! Ufff!!! The 1st chapter, I mean, the Zero Chapter xP have so many questions to be answered!

Randhir is so studious😳, lunch break mein bhi padhaai! This Randhir is so cuteee! He cared so much about others, especially what girls think about him!

Randhir always been hurt in Love Field!😕 This means, Randhir had loved someone earlier and then got rejected, something like that, or this all can be my stupid imagination! I know, no-one will answer me, as the questions will be answered by the chapter soon!

Kriti, you have penned the Chapter beautifully! Emotions were well written by you!!!Bas, thoda aur bada likhti!

Maybe the next chapter will be updated by Ipti, so Kriti can you please ask my pudding to update soon, as I am not talking to her at all!!!

Love

Sanju❤️

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Kya dhaasun update tha!
U guys aren't a bit late, u are a lot late!
Loved the concept dear..
N here, Randhir is the shy guy n Sanyukta is outgoing!
Woww would love to read more of it asap.
Liked the way you introduced the characters here..
Sanyukta, fevicol's gf???!!!!
Okie lets wait n watch..
Waiting for more asap.
Love,
Nikitha :)

Edited by barauni - 11 years ago

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Awesome update...!!!!
Sorry I know I'm late...!!
But seriously CHAPTER ZERO..!!
anyways... Amazing update..
Sanyuktha shouting and Randhir a shy guy... This is something different.. I loved it...
And Sahil being Randhir first friend... Nice...
Sanyuktha parth's gf...???
Update chapter 1 soon...
Waiting here...
And once again sorry for commenting late...
Lots of love,
Shalini

Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago