SS~Like Knifes~Updated Chapter ZERO-page 23! - Page 16

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

OMG!! So this is what happens when two geniuses collide...
A great start by introduction of the two great writers. I loved this part...

The prologue is a master-piece of sheer finery with the quotes at its best.
The back-drop of the story is greatly enticing and interesting.
The questions quoted in the prologue made me ponder a while and yet I couldn't find answer to one. It has upgraded my curiosity level...
The phrases used are magnificent and have a mesmeric effect on their own accord.
The ironical and contrasting issues that tend that tend to collaborate, left me spell-bound even before the actual story started.
Well if a prologue can render me speechless then no doubt, I won't be able to pen down a single bit of comment when the story begins.
I'm already in love with the story and really hope that you guys bring out the best of it..

My curiosity is taking away the best of me and making me insane.
Please update the first part of the story soon and satite my hungry mind..

--With love
Kajal

Originally posted by: DushtDanaf.

WoOwww..!..

i just LOVE hate stories Ipti..!!...

and i can honestly, seriously, say that i am excited to see an ff unfold for the first time. please update soon ! i wanna see if the object of the leads hatred, hates him with equally as much dedication. 😆 side note: how come you never mention any names whenever you start you ff's ? its so hard to place the characters ! i had to decide 2-3 times whether to call the narrator Randhir or not. 😆😆

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

Thnx 4 d pm

Frankly, when i 1st read it i didn't understand it, i ve a poor vocabulary 😆 then i took a dictionary n read it...ii ws thn i realized hw nicely u have expressed every emotion...prologue ws mind blowing...bt still i m in a little doubt 😆

Do updt soon

Love,

Shefali

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Baba! Sorry I am late! Awesome prologue though!!!!

Your portrayal of their contrasting emotions is just beyond perfect!!!! Awesome stuff lady!

The story seems really intriguing! Wanting to read more!!!

Both of you, get cracking on the first part 😈

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking

I Told You! * Rolls Eyes *

When Two Of You Will Meet, Sparks are Gonna Fly!

Take My Word Krisha, Brilliant stuff You Have Written. Very Very Catchy.

And The Language, The way you have presented it, It was Brilliant.

I hope the story unfolds soon.

Love,

Sweta.

Originally posted by: -dosy_devil-

KriSha... beautiful name, sweeties(instantly after seeing this word I thought it was Kriya+Sharon😆)

Hmmm the pro is like a roller-coaster ride, for me...!!!!

was excited reading it and is now more excited to read the actual part of it(the story..!)

Good Luck both of you.. Am sure you both together will create wonders here with this FF..! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

I guess the 16 pages tell you how awesome you guys are.

Looking forward to reading your stuff Kriti and Flames, I love you girl <3

You guys have written it so well.

The choice of words is brilliant and the prologue is very intriguing.

I really can't wait to read more.

Another thing, I love how you guys haven't used their names anywhere. It's a hard thing to write without the use of names and with only pronouns.

Great job both of you <3

Also, please do PM/Scrap me and continue as soon as you can! :)

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

This prologue! Haaye! The adjectives! The overview! The last few lines! I'm getting a feeling that they're from the Twilight series xP

Kritisha (I hope no one has coined you guys that yet xP), you are going to do wonders with this story! Can't wait to read more of it! :D

PS. Please update JALDI! xP

Originally posted by: Dancindoll8

Res...

Unres...

Sorry to have kept you waiting so long..

What can I say?

This is Wonderful...

I love how you have captured the animosity and frustration in this...

I especially heart the way you construct the lines and the passage...

You guys make sure that the content shines through and that the flow is not broken..

This is a masterpiece...

I just loved the last lines - very delicately and beautifully crafted..

This is going to be a dark ff which will pierce through our hearts like knives...

In the end I just want to say that this ff will wreak havoc in our hearts and mind and also this forum...

Update soon or I'm gonna kick your ass...