A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON) - Page 40

Originally posted by: krisrock

Hey May!!!xD

So finally I am commenting! Hopefully you are not angry on me for commenting so late!

I am so impressed by you! You are only 15 and still you are so good with words and phrases! It's such a beautiful and amusing concept on which you are writing! Such amazing dialogues!You portrayed each and everything in an appealing manner!A round of applause from me👏! Keep writing like this! I am totally in love with such enthralling FF!!!

Love

Sanju😳

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Ye bohot'i zyada achha hain. Finally tuney update kiya. :P
I read this in the evening itself. But phone se comment post hi nahin hua. :/
I hope you're out of your writer's block rey! Itni deri hum aur nahin seh sakte. :P Chapter 8 bhi jaldi update karna. And yea, there is no reason for any of us to not like this because this is absolutely what we, at least, I wanted to read. :D

Originally posted by: xxMaYxx

OMG! That's sooo beautiful!!!

Thank u sooo much!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: xxMaYxx

OH. MI. GAWD!!

Hey!!

Thank u sooo much!!! 😃

Im glad u found it hilarious!!!! 😆

Well she is.. m pretty sure every pregnant teenage girl is.

Well she kindda blurted it out when she thought randhir was checking out the girls!

I really dont know what's wrong with jiggy.. havent figured out yet.😕

Thank u again! your comment was so nice and fun to read! 😳

Im so glad u liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Happy Birthday (in advance)... hahahahah "I have ordered 5 books for myself" I hope you devour those boooks!😃

Coming to the update,

I loved it!

The concern, the protectiveness and the care that Randhir is showing is too good to be true😳... So everyone knows about Sanyukta being preggers... It had to come eventually anyways!

I love the way you have captured teenage pregnancy... A lot of pregnant teenagers would be worried about weight and all... Also Sanyukta's concern for her dad was realistically portrayed!

hahahahah! The names... I was crying of laughter when Randhir said, "I hate it"😆 I noticed another Friends moment... Remember when Ross suggested the name Ruth when Rachel was pregnant and Rachel is like, "I am not giving birth to a 80 year old lady"🤣... I thought the Khyati moment was similar😆

Loved the update! Continue sooon!

Your writer's block can gooo to yeaaah😆

Love,

Pari

Originally posted by: ...mishti...

It is wonderful awesome

Love it

Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon

Originally posted by: Mandira17

hi may!!

i loved this chapter! It was beautifully penned down and a lot of dialogues were really funny!

Loved the name fight, sayukta's confession and randhir's words!

U have a great talent of writing. Never give up.

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz

May where were u all this while no reply no scrap ok fine i agree that even i didnt tried to talk but...chhodo here ur new update was fab that the fighing and the babies name giving was like 😆 hehehehe