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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: raddhi
Resss
Hahahahaha I Luv rey he is such a
b*** I Luv him yaar he shld
Try acting superb actor Sharon said
Thank u I was laughing like mad person
Tht time 🤣 n my bro he will send me
Hospital one day pakka all coz of you anyways
Thank god this four ppl got out of hotel luvly
Hmmm I really want improvement in taarey
Ration I mean name both idiot serious spl rey
Anyways thanks for PM n do show dress pic thanks for PM

glad you liked it dear

hm.. improvement..actually you have to see the further story..I am not going to reveal anything now😉

so stay tuned😛

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: deepthi261
res!
un res
firstly i like your concept
mind blowing 😃😛
i like the swayam and sharon scenes

superb acting by taani through your writing skill!

rey is cool dude..😳😳😳 we all love him but when comes to taani, it is different , some times a kid, best friend, protector, bed mate

one problem in your story according to me is story is going around taarey, i mean we need the taarey the most. i feel that connection is go on and off sometimes. too much interference by others!
i hope you didn't feel bad okay sweety 😊 it is only my opinion.

thanks dear :)

glad you liked it

I got your point. But that's what the story is dear. In this story taarey are still not in love so the connection thing is not started yet. The on off connection is deliberate. I am trying to show their mood swings, how they don't stay at a thing..you know like usual youngsters. Actually the real connection is yet to start when you can actually say that TAAREY STORY is now here. Interference is shown because all characters you think now are sidelines will have a important place in future and so their place needs to be defined. Plus in this ff there are many strings attaching many people together its not just taarey its all other people..everyone has some connection they don't want to admit and so the whole thing comes out as no strings attached. Its not just taarey journey its the journey of all the people from being immature to a mature person. However I understand the lack of taarey scenes but you have to wait sweetie! the track will move with its own pace. I can't help it.

I hope you got it :)

Thanks for your opinion btw!

It really matters a lot to me :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali
superb update
thank god all got out from tthe motel
and taani was not caught by rajeev
update soon

thanks :)

glad you liked it dear

updating soon

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha
WOW! thank god...bach gaye ye log...
mera to sans hi attak gayi thi...
waise rey ne kya acting ki,manna padega,talent hai bande mein...
kut kut ke talent bhada hai...
rey is all set to make his day...
per kisne 'wait' kaha???
ye kya taani hai???

thanks :)

glad you liked it

ye wait wala chakkar bhi soon khulega, updating soon :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: dasv
Awesome chappy.
Finally they escaped phewww.
Now they r in goa lots of fun...
But who stopped rey??????
Eagerly waiting to know

Update soon

thanks dear :)

glad you liked it

updating soon :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya
once again nice hilarious update , loved swerey reaction n there way to take taani n Sharon out , thankgod rajeev ne nahi dekha , per loved the scene where rey mentally hugged sharon , now rey wants to go to see gils n hope ki taani kuch na bole, ab pata hoga ki kitne strings attached hain , update soon

thanks dear :)

glad you liked it

updating soon :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome update

thanks aimee :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: Lazygal_Taarey
Superb
Finally they succeed in getting out of d room
Taani already knows rajeev
Bechare reyam Baal Baal bache
Who stoped rey
Waiting

thanks dear :)

glad you liked it

taani just doubted that she know the person (rajeev) she didn't saw the face so she don't have a clue about it. and other than that rey and swaron never met rajeev so they don't know him either.

updating soon :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Humzy
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue

thanks :)

glad you liked it

updating soon :D

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: amrit2000
Reswaa/ unres
Oh my god! What an update!
This was just so amazing.
I loved it so very much.
Boys. Stupid asses.
Innocent girls.
Thank god! bach gaye.
I thought they all are gone.
What an escape plan!
Poor manager. He must have had a mini heart-attack,
On the other hand, Rey! How can someone lie so fluently?
First to manager. Second to girls.
Yeah, Swayam needs lessons.
Started to their destination.
Finally, GOA!
I tell you these boys. EP! *idiots*
Sharon is such a sweet heart.
Taani toh hai hi.
Anyway, next what?
Amazingly written.
I loved the update.
Sorry for being late. I really forgot about this res.
SORRY!
👏