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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all congratulations on ur new string added to this life of MKM-2

Why always this happens to their life..
wen they are close enough tht looks not evn air can have a space..
dey drift apart like two poles north-south..

I was earlier happy dey ll be having a good tym. aftr a wndrful noon.. bt here all went in drain just coz of some insecurities..
A person' mere presence created large problems btwn.. the pair..

I dnt consider Rishabh here responsible.. with his presence.

bt its Arnav's insecurities which is taking these turns in their life.

Khushi is acting so matured .. inspite of his husband's doubts.. and insecurities which hurt her .. as she gave up herself in this relation still he is insecure can make her create bomb of the situation.. bt she calmly handling all is appreciative on her part.

I beleive her faith and her nature of being calm and tackling the situation with bstest way.. will one day for sure make arnav come out of his insecurities..

He realise she love him.. bt his insecurities and the right ooo only right over her .. turn him to a insecure fool..

Its natural.. no person in a short span of tym can come out of their insecurities... sply those who have a bitter past

such folks need utmost love .. care.. concrn and above all the very prsn.. to hold them in their low..

and i am impressed hw khushi is dealing with situation..
frm Arnav to the surrounding..

Khushi nw also sees the difference wat was their in her crush bt wat she missd ..
And i feel content wen she think and rely only Arnav is the person who can make her heart live.. by the way he is..

He had nt changd himself for her bt made her live.. hw her life can be more beautiful and lovable..

Khushi is also brokn with the fact wat if he rejectd or disapprovd her words..
will she den too can be the same ..

i guess its hard for her..as she gave up entirely to him.. den also if he is insecure then it will be a hard walk for her.


Arnav is a thick brain he need to have a heart nw to his brain.
He is so in his messy world that he miss the feelings of his heart which is affected by evry joy happiness sorrow pain of khushi.

I am really flat the way to take up a story and the way u write.. its just a magic.. ur words create..


Hope khushi confess her love and dey call it a night in one another's arm with love and contentment..


At last bt not the least thanks for the pm...


😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part I love the way you describe small little detail of every scene including background as well. It is amazing how Khushi is growing up every day .From over pampered carefree girl to a very understanding mature woman who is taking care of all the household affairs, two senior citizen and a very complex husband. I see lot of readers did not like the way Arnav behaved in restaurant and getting angry at Khushi but this is real that is how some one like Arnav would react in real life . I am telling you this from my personal experience.This chapter reminded me some old memories.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushan

Amazing part I love the way you describe small little detail of every scene including background as well. It is amazing how Khushi is growing up every day .From over pampered carefree girl to a very understanding mature woman who is taking care of all the household affairs, two senior citizen and a very complex husband. I see lot of readers did not like the way Arnav behaved in restaurant and getting angry at Khushi but this is real that is how some one like Arnav would react in real life . I am telling you this from my personal experience.This chapter reminded me some old memories.


i cant find a smilie to show how i m smiling rt nw.. in understanding, in appreciation .. :) :)
to b able to say wht u did... n a lot of other thgs too :) :) tht i read in this comment .. :) :)

yes u r rt... thts very very natural, normal n real.. the way arnav is n reacts..

n tht is wht mks this story soo special.. inspite of being fiction, n dreamy.. it still is soo real !! ..
it connects soo beautifully coz it is this real :) :) .. amazing story frm a more amazing writer 👏


Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can't wait to find out what Arnav's reaction is going to be and how Khushi is going to handle this! Ahh! I'm so in love with this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Khushi. Arnav can be so difficult ! But to his credit, he always takes out his anger on himself and does not physically hurt Khushi.
I hope Khushi is successful in whatever she is planning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the update gr8 update. its good to see new strong n mature Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too much of insecurity...
Reasons behind Arnav's insecurity is justifiable bt why does he always end up hurting khushi only...gosh! He so cross complicated!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Simply wow! With one evening the complete atmosphere changes! You write beautifully! I'm glad that I'm reading this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it too much
Now Khushi know that Arnav is not jealous of that Rishab but he is truly insecure
Feeling bad for Khushi after a wonderful day she didn't hope for this sad night
Arnav is hell band to ruin everything in his anger
He had to try to understand Khushi atleast
Hope Khushi have strength to make this marriage successful
Waiting for next update
Plz continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭

Now I know, you always wait for me to sleep before you post the chapter 😭

It has happened so many times now that I just wish you never tell us when you are going to post the next update.. at least I will stop refreshing the page like a fool.. (can't call myself a maniac!)


Anyway, coming to the update, it was pretty much like what I thought would happen. I mean I knew and had posted that Arnav would go back to his insecurities again, but didn't think that it will happen the same night..

I had also mentioned earlier that Rishabh would show up on his b'day, but I had thought it would happen in the afternoon..

I pretty much feel like they are back to square one now. But I really liked the way you wrote it.. specially 'in your face Raizada, in you face'.. I actually laughed at that 😆


On one side, if I think from Khushi's perspective, I just hope that he apologizes to Khushi at least this time... how much crap can she take?
But if I think from Arnav's point of view, he seems right too. Knowing that Rishabh loves her, he is bound to feel sad/ angry about Khushi's friendship with him..I'd feel the same I guess

Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 11 years ago

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