SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

OMG THIS ONE IS JUST AWESOME

i feel so pity for sanyu...


and all the expression which is having on all her friends...


aakhir aisa kya huva tha jo sanyu ne ye step le liya


update soon dear...i love to read more


thank you so much
am glad u liked it
hmm reason bahot chota hai par uskeliye bahot bada
see what happens further
thanks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlight3094

nice start and eagerly waiting for more! [:-D]


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Nice ss harika!
Wanna read more!
Waiting.
Update soon
Ty for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting start of an OS. And you made sure to leave ur readers curious. I am curious to know where is Sanyukta ... why she is away from FITE and her friends. Randhir loves her. It was love declaration from both sides or did Randhir realize after she left. If latter is the reason then can Randhir be reason of her leaving? Pls dont make us wait and update. And pls this time lil longer part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: barauni

Hey! Nice ss harika!
Wanna read more!
Waiting.
Update soon
Ty for the pm!


thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Very interesting start of an OS. And you made sure to leave ur readers curious. I am curious to know where is Sanyukta ... why she is away from FITE and her friends. Randhir loves her. It was love declaration from both sides or did Randhir realize after she left. If latter is the reason then can Randhir be reason of her leaving? Pls dont make us wait and update. And pls this time lil longer part.


thank you so much
am glad u found it interesting...
u will know the reason soon and i thhink the reason will be not that much good but for her it is big
thanks for reading and commenting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing continue soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Sanyukta was sitting in her room and witnessing the sky which is beautiful and the moon .
The moon was a wraith-silver disc hanging in the sky with it friends stars .Stars winked at her from the endless arch of void-black beyond the moon's corona. . Lasers of moonlight, as bright as diamond-flame, turn the sea a-glow like melted platinum. It was as if she was watching a scene from an old fable stepping off the page and she was beguiled by its beauty. The Chinese called the May moon the dragon moon and she could see why. The waves were a-glitter like curved scales and she became lost in the haunting lullaby of their swell and sigh. She went back to her past...
There randhir is thinking the same...

FLASHBACK...

It was the day for the selection of interns...and her dream is not only to become a mechanical engineer but her main dream is to work for her father's company and she always had a dream to do something for her father to work in her father's office and to make it the no.1 and today she got the chance.She want to endeavor .She wants to prove her father that his daughter is capable of doing this and that...

But her brother did not allow her to fulfill her dreams.She was not allowed to give any interview.She felt dejected and she is tired ..she is tired of defending herself to her brother ,father,teachers and randhir...This time she became weak and she is not that strong girl anymore...her dreams are shattered into pieces and she don't know how to replace them and she was helpless ...she never question her abilities but today ???

suddenly someone's words pricked her heart...may be they are true she thought..

"See your own brother doesn't want you to work for his company and now see am selected and am going to work and u are just useless and good for nothing girl and u just have excuses for your failures and lack of success and believe me u should get marry and listen to ur father and should handle house hold chores...as girls are perfect in them ..."

I think so.. u are right randhir and am good for nothing just a loser ...she said that with a choked voice...

She was in the state of whimpering ...she doesn't want him to see her crying and she got her books and she left from there as fast she can with sobbing...

Randhir's P.O.V

am i dreaming...no right?? what happened to this farzi? and she didn't fight with me and argue with me ... and it became a habbit for me to taunt her and to insult but she wouldn't give up and today i saw her pain in her eyes and the tears which were ready to come out at any moment but i don't care...what i said was completely right and she deserves that...and i don't care what she feels or what she goes through and she did not do a right thing by wearing that scarf today ..what she wants to prove haa..??anyways let me get some sleep and he went from there... without knowing what next day had planned for him...

No One's P.O.V.
Today Randhir taunted her because of that scarf she was wearing during the selections...but from heart he didn't want to scold her and he became somewhat soft towards her...don't know why? but he is finding her special ...

Sanyukta went to terrace to find some peace ...her tears dried and but pain in her heart will be forever...

Sanyukta's P.O.V

Today is worst day in my life and this is the day which i have been waiting in my life interns and selections and working in my father company and make him to feel proud but my fate is not with me today i was rejected by my so-called brother and I did not get anyone's support from teacher who declined to support me...today vardhan sir is also not present if he is here and the thing would be different ,Randhir...sanyukta how could you expect him to support you he is just a animal who doesn't care about other's feeling ... and maybe he was right i do not belong here...but why today his words hurt me the most ??? I wish to go somewhere far from all these problems ...i just want to disappear somewhere but not to my home as I don't want to marry... and I know where I should go and I left from there by leaving letters to everyone and she left a small clue with a small hope to meet someone...

BACK TO PRESENT...

Randhir snapped out of this thoughts by kastuki...

Kastuki: Randhir here is the clue...which she left...

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Phew !! am done and i don't know whether i reached to ur expectations and please do comment and like it and silent readers please do comment...

love,harika :)

Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago

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