Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 2

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

OMG...thats such an amazinggg story...

read all the parts in one go...

enjoyed reading every bit of it...

kindly pm me the future updates...

eagerly waiting 4 the next part...

plxxx continue soon...

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Richa

@richaarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

awww... arnav is so cute

loved it

thanks for the pm

update soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Drunk Arnav is sho cuteee

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Thx for you note!

Enjoying this story very much!

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Wonderful chapter dear...
Lol arnavs baby making lessons were fun :D
So he was an artist...and by the looks of it he is very much talented...so there are much more layers to his character, and a reason for him being like this now... But still that doesn't quite justify the ways he decided for khushi...
Well, waiting for the next part already...
I lovvedd this one!!!

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Arnav is such an enigma. Khushi has a great task ahead of her! Shes made a good start but you never know with arnav!

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

I was waiting for you to write more chapters before reading the ff so that the impact of the story would be maintained...

You have written a very interesting story. Love with the backdrop of politics and power.. cannot ask for more.

The characters are all very well conceived and of course the best one is Khushi. Strength of character, pride, ability to adjust, fair in her judgments and practical. In spite of the tragedy that she has recently experienced she is no bechara. Again her strength makes her such an appealing character. I hope that she will not give into Arnav.too easily...

Arnav a drinking, womanizing politician can anyone have more vices? His only redemptive characteristics is his honesty. Let us wait to see if he has any other qualities. His mysterious past is of course intriguing. He had to give up painting to become a politician. What else was he compelled to give up that he has become so melancholic and has lost all faith in relationships? He still loves his sister and his dadi a lot, and seems to be in a very amicable relationship with Aman. It will be interesting to read about his past and how it has shaped his present.

Akash such a jerk completely different from the original character, but I am sure there is a story behind that too which you will revel when it is appropriate

Felt really bad for Payal

Looking forward for more...

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

nice fun chapter to read...the title is so hilarious...

kushi ki bacchi snooping around u would caught...this soo not good to u...ap ki angry husband dekhatho...instead u can ask daadhi or anjali about arnav...

anjali also she can also tell to kushi about her brother past instead dropping few clues here and there...oh god mad family...

wondering what will next...

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers...

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

What an eye-catching titled, "Let's Make Babies!" I was definitely not thinking that Arnav would continue that spiel in front of his grandmother and at the expense of Khushi's mortification, but it was funny to read about Khushi glaring at her husband, as well as blushing at the thought of making babies with him!!! I know they haven't progressed this far in their relationship yet but at least it's making them both think of this topic.

So Arnav was an artist and he had to give away his life to come take over the political party - what had Akash done that was so irreparable that he couldn't continue with the party and why is being an artist something that has to be hidden like it's a dark secret - I'm guessing there's a lot more to it than what meets the eyes!

Anjali snapping at Khushi was a little uncalled for - maybe she should help Khushi find out more about Arnav instead of just hinting around. It's quite a tricky situation for Khushi to go snooping into Arnav's life, as he's already made it clear that she's not welcome in his secret room. And how did Arnav come back so quickly and that too drunk?? Hope he he was drunk enough that he won't remember Khushi's presence in the study.

Thanks for the PM - looking forward to the next chapter already!