Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 2 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai, jo update tumse mangta hai ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i just checking ...and waiting...

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cheers..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Felt very happy after reading this Fan Fiction. Please continue, you write very good.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am loving the pace you maintaining for this story. It's progressing with each update and you are doing a good job of keeping the readers engaged and entertained.

Okay, now let's make some comments.

"Let's make babies" this has to be the best title so far and soon I hope we see a title "We made babies".

And we have Khushi bounce back. She is still mad at Arnav and upset with him, for what he said to her but deep down she does appreciate his honesty. She is not a brooding kind, she pulled herself together and not losing focus or sight of NGO and other responsibilities as a daughter in law. The scene at breakfast table made it clear that she will not forget or forgive easily and on the other hand Arnav is trying to make things as normal as possible.

Anjali's outburst may be misplaced but she was not wrong in what she said. She was being a doting sister who has seen the best of her brother and then saw him crushing his dreams and passion to save the family. She probably lost her cool, because she thought Khushi has given up on Arnav and with that her hopes of seeing her brother happy again sank.

As much as they want, I don't think it's Anjali, dadi or Aman's or anybody's prerogative to share Arnav's past. They all know that Arnav wants to stay far away from his past and bringing it up with only cause him pain. So, they are just respecting him and don't want to hurt him in anyway. However these three will always push Khushi in the right direction, by giving her pointers. End of the day its Khushi who has to do the digging or make Arnav share it with her.

Khushi strongly believes in facts. She is not somebody who is going to take things on face value. She might be getting tidbits about her husband from others but she will not rest until she finds out on her own who the real person is behind the kurta clad chikna neta.

Khushi going into Arnav's secret room was very brave. This shows how determined she is to find out more about Arnav and also that she isn't afraid of the consequences. If she was, after what happened last time she wouldn't even dare think about entering the secret room. It was also symbolic. Just like how she reached the secret place of her husband, that nobody has access to she will reach his heart too that cannot be penetrated by anybody.

In a way she has some success. On couple of occasions Arnav did drop his guards with her and was himself. He never misses a chance to tease her or flirt with her in a subtle way. He isn't this way with others.

So, Arnav is an artist and that too an exceptional and outstanding one. Creativity is the best way to express human emotions of any kind. And if you make it your passion nothing like it. Leaving behind what you love doing the most and doing what you never wanted to do in life is one of the hardest choices to make and live with. The girl in the portrait did catch my attention and I think there is more to it.

I had a blast reading the "making babies" scene. Arnav was at his charming best and I was floored to see him have baby making conversation in front of his dadi, like he was talking about tossing eggs and making omelets. Wonder how long Khushi can stay immune to his enigmatic charm.

Arnav probably drinks everyday wonder why he went overboard this time. Well, it's a blessing in disguise for Khushi. Their sofa scene wasn't intimate; it felt like a step towards their relationship. Khushi wasn't disgusted with Arnav's drunken state and didn't resist when Arnav pulled her. She has started accepting him with his imperfections. It also showed that Arnav is affected by Khushi's beauty and deep down he is probably upset that Khushi is mad at him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Congratulations on the new thread ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update...Anjali gave a hint to Khushi nd whole convo between her nd Khushi shows how much she concerned abt her brother nd her hope towards Khushi to bring some happiness in her brother life...Dadi is too sweat ...nd the whole convo abt making baby...god it was too cute nd hilarious i can only imagine Khushi flashed face nd her embarresment infrnt of Dadi...Once again Khushi went to that secret room...so Arnav was an artist nd he had to sacrfies her passion to save his family tradition nd pride...i know it is a little bit secret of Arnav past the whole truth yet to be come nd for that we have to wait for ur update so here m waiting...
Edited by seema13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was great seeing a side of Arnav that we haven't seen earlier in this story ...

a carefree ... teasing ... I suppose being in politics has made him curb and hide
all his natural feelings ...
so seeing him teasing Khushi no end that too in front of his dadi was fun ...
"Exactly Daadi, since she is SO innocent I am ready to give her lessons on how to make babies." 🤣
and how he is a master in practical lessons on the subject ...
Khushi's conversation with Anjali was an eye opener for her ...
she realised that Arnav had a side to him that he does not let anyone else peek
into ... he seems quite a loner ...
so the detective Khushi ended up in his sudy and saw all his paintings ... realising that her dear husband is quite an artist ... and God alone knows what all he had to give up to get into Politics for his family ...
ends up seeing her husband all sloshed and quite serious about the idea about
making babies !!! 🤣
Thanks Shweta ...
Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
When are they going to start work at mzking babies?
Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Shwetaji...bas ab aur intezaar mat karao! 😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iwycoX_aHmc[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why can't all real life politicians be hot and give saucy replies?
Why do we get babies like Rahul G in AD ?
Edited by MsDroolKanthan - 11 years ago

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