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Posted: 11 years ago
Is there a new link??? Missing this story so much and to think I read it on one go ...luckily the arhi consummatipn chap was the first part I read n got hooked enuf to read from the start
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Posted: 10 years ago

First OF all Bravo Swetha Ji. Excellent work. Me personally happy that I started to read this story late coz I really can't wait to read the next chapter but do Feel or other readers.

Akash is a scum and coward in every way. Yeah yeah whatever happen to him and with him was not right. And yes he has sacrificed a lot but he should have found a better way to handle things. Yes he got responsibilities in very young age but he didn't carry on them right, did he? His want things in his way fast and quick that he forgot to stay still for a minute and see what he was doing and didn't realise that he was doing everything wrong. Now he is so blind of jealous that he was ready to kill his own brother. Maybe all this because he didn't have any good guides or a good friend just like Aman.

Payal in way have engorged Akash by staying with him for this long. But better late than never.

I can truly say that I am in love with Aman here.

Aman lost priya? When? How?

He and Arnav have one thing in common and that is running away from their past or won't let it go and scared of new feelings.

What did happen between Aman and Ajali?

Arnav is very lucky to have Friend like Aman who will even give up his life without thinking or asking anything in return.

Just hope that Aman will say something and come clean about his feelings for Anjali. The poor girl is ready to get married for all wrong reason.

What can I say about our favourite Jodi?

Their physically chemistry is beyond awesome.

But still I am not sure about if khushi did the right decision by saying yes to Arnav. He did tell her that he can give her anything but love, the most important thing for her and her marriage. Just hope that Arnav doesn't let her down. But she needs to fight for her marriage just hope that she is doing the right thing.

Arnav is right; khushi is pure and unique but also very brave. She has seen lot in her young age but if Arnav let her down then that will be the last straw for her.

No one can resist Arnavs Charm so no wonder that khushi feel for him but again he is a good person.

Arnav also have no control over his feelings for khushi and she does look him through doesn't she.

"Come on Khushi, let's make babies" I laugh so hard for this. How easy he said this. Only our CM can do that.

Arnav was an Artist? He was a different person back then but why did he change so? And who is this burgundy curls girl with that bright sunny smile? Some love of Arnav is life?

Bhagoria festival chapter was my favourite.

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am done with thread 2. Akash tried to kill his own brother 😡 I loved the way Payal showed the right place to Akash . I am happy that Arnav and Khushi consummated their marriage and leading a happy married life , Lets see what is stored for them in the future.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 24... hahahahah first i should stop my laughing heart.. i never read this side of Arnav.. this was seriously unexpected and superb.. i really enjoyed reading his flirty side

Arnav was really embarrassing Khushi.. poor girl how hardly managed to stand there.. bt i must say.. Arnav really has the guts to melt glaciers .. and sply a girl called Khushi.. who always lose the battle when the opponent is ASR..

Wow man .. So our Arnavji was or i say is an artist.. i guess he must still be painting .. as just a feeling came out.

so khushi could get the chance to check on that room and i must say u have really written an very line about his artistic field.. that was really so clear and gave us an insight and very close view to his past related to his passion about painting..

And it was good.. that he was drunk and she was able to escape from his room... and she is now seeking for the man who has lost himself in the politics.. where he never wished to be...


really amazingly written update.. and mow i am lost of words about you.. u are a genius and u know ur updates show how keenly u write ur story and how much hard work u put to pen them such they come out so natural and realistic.. hats off...

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 25..

So mrs. raizada on full mission to know about the mysterious man ASR.. who is all covered with a political mask.. but internally is an artist whose only passion was art..

how his family and conditions forced him to accept something which he never want to be a part of.. but i guess he proved himself here in this field too...


i dunno wat could i say about Arnav .. bt as much as i read him .. he is just amazing and a man whom i adore not only for the charm his loks hold but for the man he is by nature and the straight forwardness... its explicitly outstanding..

u ahve really put the best of Arnav..
if Khushi is melting for this man.. then i guess its right as .. his personality can effect a common person.. she is his wife..

hope she get success in breaking the walls that Arnav has build Around him and make him live his life again that he has lost years back..

wow so aman and Anjali are now in .. to bring this couple together.. hope with that they too sort out their differences and stand as a couple..

So khushi want him to use her.. poor girl how hard is for her to say sometimes .. thats she end up in such odd situations..

and shweta its really tremendous how u write about each and every small thing..



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Posted: 10 years ago
part 26.. again a masterpiece. i am totally impressed with Arnav and you..
Arnav for what he is.. and how he act and how he side his wife every time... thats really appreciative.

So finally Khushi is accompanying him for his campaigning and will get enough time to be with him..

I must say u have written a good dose of politics here .. and u i really enjoyed reading this update evn it was about politics.. coz.. ur words bound me with such spell that i always feel ur updates to be best way to gain peace ..

And Yashoda's hatred is really getting much and much more with passing tym as she is seeing her gaining more success and always getting the place and rights which can be holded only by them.

Anjali.. her character is really a great support for Khushi ...



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Posted: 10 years ago
part 27... again i will say a very goo dose of political phases and dramas and how all things come up in politics and how every political party needs to be prepared with all its weapons to fight for the elections and its so well put by you regarding the campaigning and its structure..

you have shown a very close view of real political state and of media.. who can turn up things in na unexpected way... like how it did with Khushi's silence...

Khushi is overwhelmed by all this as it was all new for her and that painted her all in silence and media took it as her haplessness...

And as Khushi is so naive and a girl who always had seen people helping and serving each other for good in simple ways.. was now effected how her husband did same but that was not she thought of .. and ow it came out.. that effected her state of mind and to accept this became hard for her..

hope she get in this campaigning and leran more about her husband.

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 28 , 29 and 30.. were just amazing .. i really like how Arnav is taking care of Payal and how he side her... without giving any damn to other things..
i like how he roar as a lion and all go in silence hearing him..

Before i forget .. let me say it.. i feel in past Arnav loved someone and the sketch that khushi saw in his room wer of same girl.. coz.. wen evr i read that he back off from her .. it just strikes my mind.. may be it is possible ...

Arnav and Khushi spending some good tym in Ujjain and in village where they played the game of Baghori... was really good and nice.. one.. u have written it amazingly..

I am just scared to se how will the chapter of Arnav's past will be opened.. but up to now i will say .. his character is so vivacious that its coming hard to still decide where he stand.. but i really impressed with him..

Payal.. aww she is really a smart girl who took a step for Arnav .. just to see him win .. as he did a lot for her... she is taking tym to file a case against Akash..

When Arnav shared the part of Akash and his past with Khushi.. i for a moment felt pity for Akash.. but same tym i feel .. wat evt his past was.. bt that doesn't give him the right to take his hand on his wife.. that showed his weakness... and i think...he is totally wrong here.. hope tym make him realize his mistakes..

Arnav's role as a son as a husband and as a BIL and as a politician is just outstanding.. he can melt evn stones ... he has a great personality and i appreciate how well u have explored his character..


Nk is also a great man.. and i liked his character and his sensibility same tym his naughtiness..

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 31.. m totally stunned.. have no words to say for the beauty that u penned in this update.. marvelous.


i really fyd Arnav a different guy.. i may not be able to judge him right or wrong but yaa..i knw he willnever let Khushi down..in any manner . so m happy that evn though he said he dnt believe in love.. bt i know tym na d Closeness with kHushi will make him realize the weird feeling he feel when he is near her..

Khushi.. i just hope when she said she agree.. she should really give in to that and have the patience to deal with his pig headed hubby.. who is a mystery.
and shweta u are just brilliant and a marvelous writer who knew the best of beauty and how to pen it..
the beauty of lake as u explained was really wonderful..

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 32..
damn firstly i will say.. i love ur long updates . in fact they are like a treat .. so no worry for long updates ..

and this updates was as sensual and hot as the previous. and this tym the desires in Khushi were more evident then Arnav.. so calculative the fire on both ends is equal while Khushi know she is in love.. he is yet clueless of the feeling..

So Arnav is drawing her these days... and wat about that mage that he drew ealier who is she?? m still curious to know her .. and his past??

so he was known well for sketching nude portraits and man i love dthe thought that he never wanted her to be portrayed nude..
but i wish some day she herself ask him to pen her so.. may be i sound foolish .. bt that will be really a art to see that her husband penned her beauty in best way..

but anyways it was really a outstanding chapter...



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