Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 2 - Page 101

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Posted: 11 years ago
Shwetaji, thanks for the lovely note. Am so looking forward to the rest of the story. I can't thank Anu enough for introducing me to your story. I would have really missed an amazing story.

I had always wanted to read a political thriller based on ArHi & you have done a marvelous job at it. I love how your characters are flawed, it is what makes them so real & therefore endearing. We feel their joys & sorrows, like our own. The minute details in your story makes it all the more authentic & an exciting story to read. Speaks volumes for your dedication to your writing. Keep up the good work. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Shweta,
I love this story. I will accept all the flaws but please please no major heart break or damage. Arnav and Khushi are born for each other. Please give a happy ending . They deserve it after this beautiful journey.
Cant take it if anyone comes in between them . It will be too traumatic for all us who just love this story.



Can't take this please... .
Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So much happened in these chapters I missed!
I smelled something when Akash made that mean comment to Arnav. Like you said in the note, I can see all them human and I love them as you portray them :)
I'm glad Payal stood strong but I now fear for her, now that she knows it, will she be in danger? Or will Akash turn the game so that Khushi will be a suspect? After all she wasn't there for the last rally after attending so many of them. He's a bitter person to do that.
I'm waiting... bring it on :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta, where your story is concerned, I've no need to even think of taking off my Louboutins 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
We won't throw Louboutins at you, we'll send them to you as an appreciation for this wonderful story😊

Btw, I remember you mentioning that from chapter 35 on, we will get to know more about Arnav's past. And although you warned up then and now that we might not like it, I'm still looking forward to finding out. What you have presented to us is a flawed man amongst many others who have their own flaws - will try not to judge him as we find out more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi dear .. this is my 1st time that I'm commenting on this story ... I came across this story 2 days ago & read all the chapters ... I'm not a big fan of Politics ... well actually I hate it u can say ... so when I read the 1st 2 parts I wasn't sure how much I'll like this story .. but with each passing chapter I got hooked to this story & now I can say this is one brilliant story ... the way u've sketched all the characters in this story is commendable .. U r one amazing writer ...

With the revelation of Akash being the one behind the attempt murder of Arnav, story is getting very interesting now ... eagerly waiting for the next chapter .. whenever u update next pls do PM me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Shweta,

That note was as humble and simple as you are. It truly shows how much you value your readers and their reactions.👍🏼

Nidhi has put so beautiful, aptly and brilliantly what a talented writer you are and how awesome H and A is. So I would say "Ditto".😳

You my dear have nothing to worry at all, because you have given the best with each and every chapter and I have full faith that you will continue to the same. I never had a dull moment reading H and A, or a flickering thought about inconsistencies in your characters.

The consistency of characters, their growth, closing the loop holes and the pace you maintain deserves many applauds.👏👏👏

This is one of the best stories on IF and my most favorite.😳

Love those lines you quoted from Maya Angelou.

Here is a quote from here that I would like to dedicate to you, because this is so "YOU".

About Louboutin!! Aah!! Who doesn't love shoes!! I love my shoes and never share them but for you I will pack all of them with love and send them to you, for writing and sharing this amazing story.

Here you go sista🤗

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Shwetha!
I just came across this wonderful piece of yours. I still can't believe that I have missed this one all this time😆 I love your way of writing- it has everything it takes to make a good novel..
Waiting to read more from you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hellos, thank you for your kind words. I asked for chappals you gave me bouquets.

Charu I don't mind the good old Sturdy Batas too 😉

In my note I forgot to Mention Akash...

Akash we know, was trained from childhood for the role of SPM head. What Arnav is doing now, is what Akash did when young. He did it for his family, he obeyed and followed...he didn't even begrudge his little brother because he loved him. But after his father died leaving a broken party to lead and uplift, Akash panicked. He was never leader material, he followed and that made him so lousy at his job as a party head.



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Edited by ShwetapS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Hey, sorry to butt in, & Shweta can herself clarify... I couldn't help myself & wanted to clarify the portion in bold above...

But if I remember correctly, Arnav went to meet La not to sleep with her but to tell her in person that they were through for good. It was only a gentlemanly gesture on his part & nothing else. I don't think he ever wanted to continue the relationship after he married Khushi... It was only Aman who thought he was going to continue with the relationship & told Arnav to be careful, which is why Arnav got upset & argued with him about it...

P.S. I could be totally wrong, so I want to apologize up front if I am :(


Yes Geeta ( pixiegirl) you are right and I had clarified that in a note as well. Yes, Arnav went to meet La to officially end the liaison, in a gentlemanly manner. Aman's presumptions and the fact that he was losing all freedom prompted him to display the pretend defiance.

Maybe Anjs wasn't too happy with Arnav's rebellious retort...

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