ARSHI FF: PAYBACK ~ THREAD 4 ~ Part 23 (11/04)

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

beautifully written very emotional update

he tried his best to make her comfortable but their rough start he may didn't remember but she suffered so its not easy for her to forgive n forget but on the other hand she has good chance to spend her life with her baby he is going to make thing all good between them also so she'll going to have love of her husband with the baby

oh boy that is best twist one can be save so he choose khushi over baby this can be game changer decision now everyone knew who is more important to him hope for khushi n baby safe n sound

this was the best chap of this ff so far

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Aaaw I knew it that this would happen. I was just waiting for this!! and yayy what I am imagined was true.

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Touching update..
Arnav chose Khushi over baby...

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

hope both will be see the world once again... and everything will be fine

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

so emotional...aww cute and touchy scenes between arnav and khushi..

i know baby will gonna be fine...update soon dear...good job buddy

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Awesome update
Loved it
Hope khushi and d baby would be fine
Pls update next part soon

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

So... Now Arnav starting to understand what he is making Khushi go thru in the name of his payback... Risking Khushi's life...along with the baby's... I know this might happen even in Normal delivery... But then ... Just the thought that he forced her to go thru it when she was not ready mentally n physically...must make him go thru HELL... Yet is it enough...compared to what Khushi went thru ...

Just hope the baby n Khushi would be safe...

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Loved d update... It was superbly written.
I hope khushi gives arnav a chance without any prejudice.

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Awesome update n loved it!

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#400

I loved it. Good that Arnav cleared his intentions to Kushi before the delivery. It was needed, otherwise she would have been in more struggle.

But I wish he had talked it out with her than taking the decision. Yes he can decide to not let Kushi go, but give Kushi the freedom to decide her part rather than he doing it high handedly, no matter how good his intentions are.

I would say Prachi is selfish for sure. If it was Kushi in her place, Kushi would have gone to share her sister's happiness and give her moral support no matter what way her own life is. But Prachi left Kushi to strangers even though they were in same state.

Shashi too, whatever his reasons, he should have remembered that his first responsibility is to his kids and he should be there for them in their times of need. He was there only to interfere in their lives at unwanted times and never when they actually needed him. Prachi is goingthrough difficult phase and Kushi through an important phase. How can he be so irresponsible???

Last scene was something I expected. If the baby dies, then Arnav will have nothing to hold onto her and make her stay.

I thought there will be some women who will talk ill during godbharai etc.

Di, NK MUST divorce Prachi for sure. Such a selfish woman. She doesn't deserve such a life.