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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey! can u plz pm me when u update
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oh wow and they meet this is seriously so touching and I just cannot wait for the back story...
What exactly happened that they are not together n aryan does randhir know about him

Man you will have to continue this like really soon 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. Such a nice encounter I felt...
Hmm.. Thnq u so much for mentioning my name..
It's jus tht im in love wid ur FF..
I evn Lyk ur writing style dear...:)
So I always keep stalking.., and sometime find u updating...
Awesome update...
Update next part ASAP..
Will be eagerly waiting..!!:)
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wow daam good dear

seriously make me to glue to it



both emotions by personal and professional way describe s well

i just love to read this
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awsme part yar... they meet each other awsme...
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Loads of suspense. Cant wait...😊
Tuesday seems so far off😭
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Pari...that was a very lovely update!!!!!!!
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Sorry all I am not replying to comments today... I need some 🥱 🥱.. I just got back from university (it's 9pm here in Melbourne😭)... My fridays are just crazy... But I have managed to write the next part... Lectures can be pretty boring everyone and there weren't even any exotic distractions 😉😃 😆... Next part in 2 mins😃
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Yo... Sooo, I did say no updates till Tuesday, but I was falling asleep during chem & biol lecture, so I decided to write the next part... I was being productive... Also, I am sucker for comments and this morning I really had a goofy smile on my face, because of all the lovely and encouraging comments🤗❤️... So, THANK YOU very very very much for that🤗... And yeah, Happy Readings😊!


As always, Red: flashback (voiceovers) & Italics: character thoughts


Part 4


*After Randhir had left, Sanyukta's office*


A lone tear rolled down Sanyukta's cheek, as soon as Randhir had turned around and never looked back... The uncontrollable urge to hug him tight as possible, to never get go of him... To soak all is warmth and comfort... To inhale his intoxicating scent... To devour the feel of his mouth again...


But alas, anger blinds all humans...


Just as rapidly the urge to envelope him in her arms had come, it was gone just as rapidly... The sorrow, the anger, the urge to yell and slap him, was filling Sanyukta up and she could not put a barricade over the volcanic emotions any longer.


The memories of how he had felt her, the memory of how he denied anything between them... The memory of how he denied their once strong love...


"Urrrg!!!!" yelled Sanyukta, as she slide all the files off her desk with all her force. "Damn you Randhir Shekwat!" she yelled as she threw her laptop on the floor and smashed the jug of water, along with the once pristine glasses.


Still not being able to satisfy her frustration, Sanyukta grabbed the projector and threw it on to the slide, completely breaking the slide and damaging the wall behind the slide as well...


The interior emotional turmoil brewing inside Sanyukta was reflecting to the interiors of the once professional and elegant room... A mess!


The emotional havoc that was looming inside Sanyukta was getting paramount by the second... Yet it was the inability, or the lack of control, to do anything about that situation... That was really breaking Sanyukta in to irreparable pieces...


Cutching her messy hair, Sanyukta fell to the floor and banged the floor with all her might... Her tears streaming uncontrollably, yet there was no sound coming out of her mouth... She was merely yelping, yelping tears of excruciating emotional pain... Her eye-liner that was perfectly adorning her eyes had smudged to give way to a very distressing sight...


As soon as Mariam heard the noise inside Sanyukta's office, she has sprinted to the site and the sight before her was the one to horrify... Her boss breaking down on the floor, amongst broken pieces of glass and all the files soaked in water and covered in glass...


"Madam, you are bleeding! What-"before Mariam could finish her statement, Sanyukta plainly stated, "Go away and leave me alone..." putting a face of dismay on Mariam


Somehow the glass in hand did not hurt at all, compared to her bleeding heart...


Teri yaadon mein likhe jo lafz dete hai sunayi
Beetay lamhe poochte hai kyun hue aise judaa
Khuda, khuda mila jo yeh faasla hai
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hai
Khuda hona tha woh ho gaya
Jo tune tha likha


"Pick yourself up Sanyukta, this is exactly why he is here... To see you break down... And I never going to let him see through me..."


"I can see right through you Sanyukta! You know why? Cause you are a part of me..."


"NO! You are not a part of me... Never were and never will be!"


After pulling the piece of glass from her hand and bandaging the wound, Sanyukta got up to clean her so called office, which now looked like it had been struck with an earthquake...


After cleaning up out all the rubbish and ordering new appliances for her office, Sanyukta properly cleaned herself and headed to Parth's... Aryan was leaving today...


Why is this day getting worse by the very minute?


Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya


*Meanwhile, on the phone*


Parth: Did you talk to her?


Randhir: Yes... Well not really


P: It's not going to be good today and even A... nothing


R: What?


P: No, I was just saying that she is not going to be well today


R: I know please handle her...


(Parth): Sorry Randhir, but it is better if you hear it from Sanyukta herself... She hasn't told you for 1o years and I am not the right person to tell you either... When the right time comes you will learn about Aryan as well... And I know that time is not long away now...I just hope you don't blame yourself too much for leaving her standing at the wedding altar Randhir...


***************

NOTE: I felt like this part was a little (ummm) slow?! Please do tell me if I need to pick up pace😃, since I really do not want to bore anyone...

Lots of Love,

Pari 🤓 (at the moment, i actually look like this, minus the glasses😆)

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Yippie!Am first!
This chapter was amzing..
Sanyukta's conditin is very sad but i know she's our JKR and will compose herself...
Randhir.. u gotta get ure girl back!
Fantastic update ! Continue soon..😃

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