TR SS: Unfinished Business Update (pg 61) - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update
luv taani n her new friends bonding
swaron r getting married
taarey meet was really gud
eagerly waiting to read more


Thank you!
Glad you liked the meeting and her new friends
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

awesome update...

i love the new gang...taani's gang...i really loved wahi and tacker...raman is very nice...

taarey both thinking same...taani still care for rey so much...that was so nice ...


Glad you liked the naughty guys 😆
Thanks for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

first of all i really love new character..
and their bonding..
and the update was nice..
love all the parts..

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

THIS SS IS REALLY GOING GREAT LOVING IT
STROING TAANI
ALONG WITH THAt emotional
waiting for the small encounters between taarey


Wow. Thanks a bunch!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome update :)

Loved it to the core :)
Amazing :)
Fab :)
Update soon :)
PM me :)


Thank you so much sumana...glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -GoluGudiya-

Heyy ... Was just looking out for some new TR stories when I came across yours.
I have to say I really love the concept and the story up till now.
One thing which I really really really liked about your story was that it was similar to D3 yet not the same. Changes were made and that gave me a tinge of happiness as the way TR had finished off in D3 had become a somewhat sensitive topic previously and at times does hit me.

Coming to the context, I'm not surprised by your work because I have read your previous Short Story and it was obvious to me that you are a very good writer. Personally, due to some secrets and some miscommunications, I find myself more engrossed in your story thus making me look forward to the upcoming chapters.

I'm not going to go much into depth of the previous three chapters, but I took note of 2-3 points. It was the dance factor. The D3 team are going to have a dance workshop of some sort and Taani's MBA course requires her to do that workshop. I don't know why, but it gave me some hint of a sort that us readers might get to see romance blooming once again between Taani & Reyaansh. Maybe it was not part of what you were going to write but I really hope you do.

Another point was about Taani wanting to become a doctor, a cardiologist if I'm not wrong. My question pertaining to that matter would be whether Taani would actually pursue her dream or will her priorities towards her Tauji and family possibly make this dream remain a dream.

That was all I had to say. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters and I am awaiting to see what is in store for Taani and Reyaansh's love.


Hello Neha. Yes I did stalk you to find out your name 😆 forgive me for that. Thank you for reading the story. To be honest, I was writing a SS before when TR had their breakup but I was not able to continue on with it. So I decided to start another one a year or so later that reflected to D3 but wasn't completely the same. I never thought the fake break up was a good idea and could have been avoided. Anyhow...I am glad that you liked the connection with the difference.

Wow. You read Convoluted too. Thank you for reading that as well...it was such a different story but thank you for the compliment. I never have liked villains in stories because I strongly feel that more times than not we humans complicate things for ourselves and my stories usually revolve around that idea.

I will be showing their love blossoming however I am not sure if I really want to display it in the college yet.

Regarding your question on Taani's career aspirations, I have not exactly decided how to execute her end. I might pull a cheesy card out of the hat and somehow make her a cardiologist or I will keep it real and leave her with the CEO position. However, that track will eventually come up and Taani's decision will shown there.

Thank you once again for reading and I hope to please you with my future chapters.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Neha..

Awesome story!
read in one go!
love tarey kitchen scene!
Continue soon..

Glad you liked the story so far Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Tooo fab update.taarey still luv each other


Aw thanks sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Superb update

Loved all d new characters..especially wahi..
Taarey moment was nice😃
Rey ate all d food prepared by Taani😆
Excited 4 further updates
Continue soon!!


Thank you so much sweety.
Glad you liked the characters
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prtn

please pm me...i likec this


Thank you!
I love your story at well...read it religiously

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