Pyar Ka Intezaar (Waiting for Love): Arshi FF: Thread 1 Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK after reading this update, it seems to be like Khushi is having crush while he is totally fallen for her..Ofcourse still at the exploration and denial stage which is the most beautiful stage before they confess.
I agree with you, Kiss is too early and I would have truly disappointed had they kissed in this chp..So take a bow u did splendid job with the pace as I said earlier.

I am waiting for the mystery to unfold. Looks like he lost his parents and its always sad when you lose someone close to your heart and he is such a tormented soul and I could feel his pain in your words.

Amazing chappy, loved the hug and even more the lines he felt for her. So beautiful and very apt..Did u write it?

I cant wait for him to take her to date and I guess we have to wait for that...I am sure Khushi is going to be one lost soul if ASR goes to woo her at this rate..Bring it on..I am all ready with popcorn..

Brilliant K!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really brilliant. You transformed a simple hug into a beautiful memory...I can't wait to see how they will progress in their relation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the update. loved the embarrassing moments...i didnt expect kiss ...hug itself more at this stage...and also it started with frightened khushi. ...but invoked new feelings for them... that poem is too good..I liked it from ASR ki..."khabhi khabhi aisa ho jatha hai"...we want these many many in future...i liked the saree colour combination...all the while i am imagining her in that...
i liked the flashback part..how he was recollecting his mother calling him ji...so arnav ..its pyar ka intazar...bad me shaad ka intazar...to have all wify things...
so arnav feeling the home in khushis embrace. ...earlier he was in doubt...why he is always thinking about khushi...why he wants to see he.etc.etc...but now he got some clarity that with her he can feel at home...
totally lovable update..and also i liked ur reddened cheeks at the end saying weekend is hubbys...so happy weekend..enjoy it...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept eager to read further
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Ufff..I love this chapter as well..Arnav is behaving different from person to person and I am getting curious about the sheetal and him track. Awesome to see the light moments with Sheetal
And as usual our sanka devi is thinking acidity...I love the way you explained Arnav feelings from selfishness to attraction,,,,

And awesome choice of words and I had to look it up in dictionary which I always love...

I love you for such sweet update and now I cant help but tell you that I hate you for stopping there..


URGHHH
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Very funny...ROFL..

I could hear her screaming..LOL
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Originally posted by: deepthiya

Ufff..I love this chapter as well..Arnav is behaving different from person to person and I am getting curious about the sheetal and him track. Awesome to see the light moments with Sheetal

And as usual our sanka devi is thinking acidity...I love the way you explained Arnav feelings from selfishness to attraction,,,,

And awesome choice of words and I had to look it up in dictionary which I always love...

I love you for such sweet update and now I cant help but tell you that I hate you for stopping there..


URGHHH


I am over the moon by seeing your comments...And I am out of words that you are liking my writing... Thanks Deepthi..I am truly overwhelmed. You observed it..you are right...His persona differs with each person. And It depends who is that person is. Why...I know, I don't have to explain to a brilliant writer...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi kiran kikku...i loved the update...
i too agree with deepthi for stopping abruptly at most important part...its too bad...
i like sheethal's character a lot..i really enjoyed her conversation with arnav...
arnav is irked by khushi ignoring him...too cute...
already there arnav leaving to boston.. u r also sending him to irland.. both my younger and elder sister are taking revenge on me...ok ..any way i m also going out of station ...so its right time to send him...
they should come back once i come back i.e.21st april.
eagerly waiting for next update,...missing u all in IF...i hope i can get chance to browse net next 10 days ..

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