Pyar Ka Intezaar (Waiting for Love): Arshi FF: Thread 1 Completed

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jeya0301

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Loved today's update..:) I love the way u r continuing it..plz continue.cant wait to know wat happens next ..

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hesinahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

yes...this ff is nice..
chapter 4 and 5 are showing matured way of writing than earlier..and also font and text style is very neat in the later chaps..
i like arnav characterization...especially so cool when it comes to khushi..
waiting for next update

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Kiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hesinahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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update is very nice...ur description abt arnav after he returns and sitting tired in his cabin..is very nice
poor Khushi ...hallucinating abt him...please dont make arnie to travel more times...😊
waw ..he has sent a gift also...but how he knows that it is khushi's bday...
i saw the saree..it looks very nice on khushi...
finally he praised her smile also...
i m feeling pity abt arnav thinking abt his home without near and dear...i hope soon khushi becomes close to solace him..
waiting for next update...

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hesinahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

hey !
when r we getting update?

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Kiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Teja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice update..Arnav is very different with Lavanya...what is their relation...

Interesting conversation between both of them...hey I am curious about next chap

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fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Absolutely awesome story. Love it. Looking forward to reading more.

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hesinahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

beautiful update!
i love the caring arnav shows towards khushi...and how he is so cool for khushi alone?so lucky this gal is...
i like arnsv's warning for lavanya..
khushi is looking beautiful in the pink saree..i want more description abt her in the next update!
waiting for the embarrassing moments very eagerly...😳
i have to keep imagine till Thursday evening...
ok ..till then bye...

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Deepthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Cool Prologue...Starting to read the chapters...

Chapter 1: I like this Khushi who is not very complicated..Just simple and real. I cant wait for her to meet ASR and see the sparks or bombs go off..LOL

Chapter 2: Haha, Khushi is Khushi in this chp. This characterization reminded me of Khushi in IPK...bilkul Paagal...Thank you for bringing that originality

Chapter 3: This is my fav chp so far...Can Khushi get any cuter than this. I love the way she asked him to talk and the best that cracked me up was "I have nice name right, I know". Coming to ASR, he looks like very charming and funny as well. I am guessing he has something to do with Sheetal..Probably his family forcing him to marry her? I will wait for the mystery to solve by itself..

Chapter 4: Awesome. Manorama will never change. And Coming to know ASR - doubt one, I am married..Hayeee, Now I am all geared up for the fight...I hope its cutesy fight..

Chapter 5: Oh damn I am in love with this ASR.He stole the show in this chapter. I am surprised that he kept so cool even after she blasted but I guess thats because he anticipated it...Now the real fun starts... Bring it on

Chapter 6: Kiran, you are crazy...Dont bloat me up yaar..I am feeling so mushy blushy and embarassed to take so many compliments...But on serious note, Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for being so wonderful and for thinking so high of me... Coming to the update, OMG its just getting better and better... I love your concept of Knowing ASR - DOubts..Arnav here is soo cool, I think they both r already in love...And the last part was just AMAZING...I dont why but I felt his words "I was waiting for you" more romantic than clearing doubt three...Beautiful Update...

Chapter 7: I totally forgot what I wanted to write after reading ur precap embarassing moments...Please update soonish..I am eager to know..Dont tell me they r going to kiss...I like this chpater very much for the way he took stand for her and cared for her..Other than I dont remember as I am trying to understand what the embarrassing moments are...

Kiran, awesome story and I like the pace of it. You have improved tremendously and it is very evident from prologue to the chapter 7..And you are doing an excellent job for being the first time writer...I can see you flourishing all the way girl...Congrats and keep it up...

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago