'HOW CAN SOMEONE BE SO STRONG' FF on Kriyaansh Thread 2 up - Page 2

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

anku KSG means kriya smriti ghai dont u think this could be the KSG..

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Chapter 1

Everything happened like in the show. How Kriya decided to choose her friends dream over hers and her love. How everyone slowly started to forget her and how Rey moved on. How everyone started to hate her for ditching the team and breaking Rey's heart unknown of the fact that this had shattered her beyond anyone could realize.

Two and a half years have passed since and Tani had entered the life of louins especially in the life of Rey. Rey was not the old Rey, he had changed and this new Rey had actually fallen for Taani and also made sure that no one ever talked about Kria and that Tani never knows about her.
(Note: In this ff Taani had entered almost a year and half after Kria had left the group and by then everyone had started to hate her for being selfish and ditching them; by everyone I mean everyone including Swayam. The reason for this was the letter she left for the entire group)

THE LETTER:

Hello everyone by now you must have got the news of me leaving the college. It was fun being here not only I got to destroy the titans of the college but I also got the opportunity to actually take a few nobodies to actually win the footloose eliminations. I had heard about the college from a few people how there were bunch of guys from St. Louis who thought they could win against anyone, at that time had decided to break them and make them realize who they actually are and it was very simple once I made their leader fall for me and make the dancer from the group of nobodies to be my best friend. You know what I am a great actress as I actually made you believe I am all sweet and helpful girl but this has made this trip even more worthwhile. I hope we meet again and see what each one of us has achieved more though I know it would be a waste of time as I know you would still be nothing and I who knows may be the future queen of dance but it still would be nice to see your embarrassed faces in front of me one last time. And yes win the footloose or else it would mean even with my help you are still losers but if you win it would at least mean you guys were worth breaking.

This letter did everything she wanted it to do; one was to make the entire gang despise her and the other was to fuel their desire to reach the pinnacle of success so as they could look down upon her and take their revenge and humiliate her like she did. On the other hand after reading the letter everyone in an instant were filled with anger, hatred.

The conversation after reading the letter

Sharon: How dare she call us losers and look down upon on us and what did she mean by making our captain fall for her. Rey did you actually fall for that heartless bitch

Rey was still in utter shock after reading the letter was about to reply when Swayam interrupted

Swayam: Yes he did fall for her so did we all. I still find it difficult that she made us believe all that we thought of her. Who could have guessed that she would be such a devil in disguise? Don't tell me Sharon you never ever believed in the fact that she was the girl who genuinely wanted to help us.

Sharon: (after a while) OK yes I did believe she was all the things she seemed but how dare she do this with us with you all and with Rey. I hope she dies a devilish death.

Rey: no She doesn't deserve to be dead instead she deserves to feel the pain she caused me; no the pain she gave all of us. She deserves to be tortured instead of being dead. (it was anger that was speaking not them)

Gang: yes such a girl doesn't deserve the talent she was given she deserves to be burnt in hell, tortured to death and hope someone makes her feel the same way she made us all feel today.

Little did they know she was already burning in hell and soon there other wish was going to come true as well?

I know this one is a bit small so ill definitely update the part 2 really soon and pls add me to the buddy list.

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Interesting concept ...!

awesome prologue nd 1st part was amazing...
update nxt part soon..
nd pls pm me...