AR - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. part 25 (last) updated 18-05-2015 pmz later - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
dil dil such an awesome work again
loved it
armaan is supereb with his thoughts
update soon
want tosee the wedding rituals with their kids
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Posted: 11 years ago
HIT LIKE IF U WANT PM TO THIS FF


PM'Z...

this story has been on a hold since months bt ill try to be regular from now..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dnt knw y i can't hit lyk
ayye add me in ur pm list alsoi :D
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Posted: 10 years ago


thank u soo much guys for ur comments n patiently waiting for the updates..

i know im updating it almost 3 months... thats too late..
bt now ill try to be more regular..
n ill be winding it up soon.. in a few more updates..

without any more bak bak..

PART ~23

Mehandi ceremony..

Rum was divided by using a piece of cloth..
One side was armaan-rahul n other side.ridhima-muskan...
Ridhima and muskan were siting with her arms steched out.. N girls aplying mehandi on their hands..!!

Armaan was siting with an iritated face..

Armaan (thinking)
Hel yaar.. I thought Having all rituals together would be like a kind of blesing.. Bt all my dreams broke.. Being with ridhima in same house.. In same hall.. Bt still not able to see her..

Anji : armaan stop hiding ur hands..
Armaan : no ways.. Ridhima is puting it.. Then y should i..!!
A mom : armaan dont be stuben..its a ritual..
Armaan : no ways mom.. This mehandi i cant tolareate.. Firstly u will takes hrs to aply then.. Have to sit like handicap.. No ways..

Ria goes near armaan n says in his ears..

Ria : dada.. U wanna meet mom tonite..??
Armaan looks at ria with a confused look..
Ria : i have a deal if u aply mehandi.. I wil take u mom...
Armaan : angel no pranks...
Ria : its not a prank dada... Fair deal..
Armaan : bt i cant sit like a statue .!!
Ria : u dont need to.. Muma had bought instant mehendi for u.. It will just take 15 mins then u can wash u hands...
Armaan : but angle ill look like a clown.. With ful hand mehandi.. Mehandi is for girls..
Ria : oho dada.. Anji aunty will just write ur n mom's name...
Armaan : promise..
Ria : promise dada..

Anji aplied mehandi on armaans hands...
Ria : now my turn.. Anji.aunty cone plz..
Armaan : bt u promised only names...
Ria : dada.. I said Anji aunty will just write ur n mom's name...
I never promosed that i wil nt aply..!! N dont forget my deal..
N winks at armaan..

Everyone laughed on ria's prank..
Ria drew diferent shapes on armaan's hands...annoying him to core... He had to agree.. He had meet his ridhima.. N most importantly.. He cant be angry on his angle..!!
Then ria moved towards rahul.. N drew shapes giving him same deal...!! To which he hapily agreed..

A mom : ria is dublicate copy of armaan.. Ful pranster..

Atul : i agree.. Now she will take all our renenge from armaan...

some of the girls were dancing n ladies singing some songa with dholki..!!

Lites goes off n spot lite fells on ria n anji..!!!

both anji n ria came forward n started dancing...

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

O hariyali banno

Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan

Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi

Angnaayi, angnaayi

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Mehandi cermony ended with ful masti n lots of teasing...

All elders went to their rums..

Armaan : will this cloth ever be removed..!!
Rahul : ya rite.. Now the cermony is also over..

Atul : if the cermony is over then wat are u doing here go to ur rums..!!
Armaan n rahul gave him weired looks...

Anji : guys we still have one cermony left...
Armaan : now wat... This weding cerimonies..

Anji : finding names in mehandi.. If u are nt intered then its ok...

Armaan : are who said im nt interesed...
Anji : jst now...
Armaan : u did not listen to my complete line.. I said these wedind cerimonies.. Im loving it...

All of them laughed at armaans coment...!!!

Anji removed the cloth from between..
Armaan's eyes fell on ridhima...
He was memorised by her beauty.. ridhima was wearing a purple pink lehanga.. her hairs were properly tied in a bun..!!
armaan n ridhima ridhima shared a cute bt small eye lock.. which was broken by aman..
aman : anji aunty... which game is this... how will dada find name..??
anji : its very simple.. now ur dada n rahul will find their names writen in ur mom's n mauskan didi's mehandi..

ria : thats fun.. lets see who will win.. all the best dada.. all the best rahul bhaiya..!!

armaan moves n sits infront of ridhima.. taking her hands in his.. starts funding his name ridhima keeps on moving her hands to distract armaan...n so does rahul n mauskan..!!

armaan n rahul : i find it..!!
aman : thats not done its a tie..

Atul armaan n rahul were feding thier repected patners.. As tge ladies had mehandi in their hands...

Ria came runing n sat in armaans laps

Ria : dada im hungry...
Armaan gave a bite to ria..
Aman : thats not done.. I also want...
Ridhima :come here my baby..
Aman sat in ridhima's lap..
Now armaan feeds ridhima ria n aman.. One by one..
Ridhima : amu.. I wil not eat.. If u are nt going to.eat..
Armaan : relax jan.. First u all eat.. Ill havey diner later..
Ridhima : no means a no amu..

Armaan acepted his defeat n all for of them shared a family time..!!!

Ridhima : comon kids.. Time to sleep...
Ria : no mom.. Today ill sleep with dada...
Aman : n me too..!!
Armaan : lets goo kids..
Ridhima : amu how wil u handle both..
Armaan : dont wory ridhu..!!

Late at nite..!!
Armaan : angle did u forgot our deal..
Ria : no dada.. Im waiting for aman to sleep.. I know dada.. He cant hide secrets..
Armaan : smart girl..
Ria : come lets go..

In front of ridhima n muskan 's rum..
Ria : rahul bhaiya.. U hide here.. Ill take mom with me.. Then u can meet mauskan di..!! N dada.. U go to terace..

Ria moved inside the rum..
Ran to ridhima n sat beside her..

Ria : (shaking ridhima ) mom.. Mom..
Ridhima : ( shocked..) wat hapen ria.. Wat are u doing here.. Its too late...
Ria : (puling her hand ) come with me mom..
Ridhima : bt where..??
Ria : come na plz..
Mauskan also woke due to the noise..
Mauskan : wat hapen ria..
Ria : mom plz come with me na.. Dont make noice.. Coz of u mauskan didi also woke up..
Ridhima : ok lets go..

Ria draged ridhima towrds terace..
Ridhima : baby wat hapen.. Y are u taling me to terace..!!

Ria open the door n ran towards armaan..
Ria : dada i never break my deals..!!
Gud nite..!!
Gives a kiss on armaans cheek..
Armaan : gud nite angle.. Now go n sleep..

Ria ran from terace leaving armaan n ridhima there..!!!

Armaan came towards ridhima.. N took her n a hug..!!
Armaan broke the hug.. Took ridhima's hand in his n kises her hand..!!
Armaan made ridhima sit on a bench n sat beside her...
Armaan raped his one arm around ridhima n took her hand in his..

Both of them spent hrs siting there on terrace..

hope u guys enjoy reading..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
oosome... hhahahah ria is ttoo cute hihihi
and btw its hands wraped not raped
aarushi04 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part...so cute kids...
Update next soon...
N tnx for d pm...
se.ya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey,

this is a beautiful fan fiction and I loved it.. 😊

continue it as soon as possible..

-Seyacandyfloss
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Posted: 10 years ago

thank u soo much guys for ur likes n coments.. these mean a lot

PART ~24


Prepation for sangeet ware going on in ful swing..

Anji : atul do the step.froperly.. Ill fall down if u continue to dance like this..
Atul : anji im trying..
Ria : no uncle.. U have to do it perfectly..
Atul : yes maam..!!

Ria n aman were instrusting all othera how to dance.. Their both grandparents.. Muskaan and rahul's parents..

Aman : Mumaa dadi aunty.. Nt like this...
Ria : wait i will show u..

Ria performs the step wich the elderly ladies were to do..

Aman : try it again..

After a lot of scoldings from aman n ria finly the 4 oldi couple was ready to perform

R mom : thats it ria baby i cant dance more
A mom : she is rite.. If i reherse more i will nt be able to atend guest n perfirm..

Ria : ok fine.. Bt u have to perfome as we taught u..

All : yess maam

later in the evening..

The hall was beatifully decorated with lots of diferent clr curtains lites.. Many floating candles lit up in water..

Hall is full of guest.. Family members are runing here in there in order to atend guest..

Lites goes off n anousment..
"Thank u soo much people for cuming n blesing the couple in pre weding cerimonies.. Enjoy the sangeet party..!!"

Spot lite falls on anji n atul..!!
N both stars dancing..!!

{song mehroo

film super nani}

Haan..
Thoda thoda shor hai dil mein, thoda thoda gum sum hai
Thodi thodi saaf hai baatein, thodi thodi uljhan hai

Thoda thoda shor hai dil mein, thoda thoda gum sum hai
Thodi thodi saaf hai baatein, thodi thodi uljhan hai
Maheroo de sukoon, kar meri chahat qubool

Kar qubool, de sukoon, maheroo, maheroo

Now enters armaan n ridhima's parents followed by rahul n mushan's parents.. Four couples dance togethwr..!!

{song aye meri zohar jabeen..}

Aye meri zohra-jabeen, tujhe maalum nahi
Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan
Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan
Aye meri zohra-jabeen
Ye shokhiyaan ye baankpan,
Jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi
Dilo ko jeetne ka fan, jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi
Main teri
Main teri aankho mein paa gaya do jahaan
Aye meri zohra-jabeen
Tu meethhe bol jaan-e-man,
Jo muskuraake bol de
To dhadhkano mein aaj bhi,
Sharaabi rang ghol de
Oh sanam
Oh sanam main tera aashiq-e-jaawida
Eh meri zohra-jabeen

Now the stage is taken over vy rahul...!!!
He stars singing..

{song dill kyu ye mera shoor kre
movie kites}

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale Zara der main
(move towards mushan.. Taking her hand starts a couple dance..)

Yeh kya ho gaya Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya
Zara der main Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi

(armaan pulls ridhima n atulpuls anjali on the dance floor...)

Kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

Mushan comes out the from the close dance n stars dancing..!!
{song lovely
movie happy new year..}

Tere naal naal sajna ve
Mera dil dhadke, Mera dil dhadke
Habibi, Aashiqui, Hayati, Asidi
Habibi, Aashiqui..

(ridhima n anji joins mushan on the dance floor.)

Main lovely ho gayiaan
Naam tera padh ke, naam tera padh ke
Main lovely ho gayiaan
Naam tera padh ke naam tera (x2)

Armaan sinhs the songs loking towards ridhima.. n a guitar in his hand..!!

{song hai mera dill
movie hate story 2}

Hai dil ye mera
Mujhe hardum ye poochta:
Kyun hai mujhe tujhse itni wafaa..
Kyun teri hasrat
Hai har khwahish se badhkar mujhe
Kyun naam tera hi leti zubaan..
"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Or de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salamat rakhun

now RIDHIMA comes in middle of stage..!!

{song bole chudian
movie hum apke hai kon..}
Bole chudiya bole kangna, haye main ho gayee teree sajna
Tere bin jiya naiyo lag da, main te margaiya
Le ja le ja soniye le ja le ja, dil le ja le ja ho...
(anji n mushan also starts dancing with her..)

Haye haye main marjawan marjawan tere bin
Abb toh meree raate katatee tare gin gin
Bas tujhko pukara kare, meree bindiya ishara kare

(Vitin armaan n rahul also joins them..)

Hoye lashkara lashkara, teree bindiya kaa lashkara
Aise chamke jaise chamke chand ke pas sitara
Meree payal bulaye tujhe, jo ruthe manaye tujhe
O sajan jee, ha sajan jee
Kuchh socho, kuchh samjho meree bat ko
Bole chudiya bole kangna, haye main ho gaya teraa sajna
Tere bin jiya naiyo lag da, main te marjawan
Le ja le ja, soniye le ja le ja, dil le ja le ja ho...


Aman n ria takes the hold of stage...

{song wah wah ram ji
movie hm apke hai kon}

Waha Waha Ramji, Jodi Kya Banaai
Didi or jiju Ko,(pointing towards rahul n mushan..)
MUMY OR PAPA ko(points towarfd armaan n ridhima..)
Badhaai Ho Badhaai
Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai
Aapki Kripa Se Yeh, Shubh Ghadi Aai
Jiji Aur Jija Ko, mummy or papa ko..
Badhaai Ho Badhaai
Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai

after a rocking performance by kids.. Anji along with ridhima n mushan's mom..

{song meri bano ki ayegi barat
movie aaina}

Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Aaj nachungi main saari raat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Sajna ke ghar tu jaayegi, yaad hame teri aayegi - (2)
Jaake piya ke des mein na hamko bhulaana
Aankh baabul teri kyon bar aayee, betiya toh hoti hai parayi - (2)
Abb rahegi yeh saiyaan ji ke saath, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji

After a bet senti performance..
Armaan rahul n atulcomes up on stage..!!
n drags other too...!!!!
{song abhi toh party shuru hue hai..
movie khoobsurat}

Darwaaze ko kundi maaro
Koi na bach ke jaane paaye
DJ ko samjha do,
music ghalti se bhi ruk na jaaye
Thaka thaka jo feel kare wo jaake dou RedBull gatak le
Aur jisko dance nahi karna
Woh jaake apni bhains charaye

Bas aaj ki raat hai
Kal se wohi siyaape hain
Jee bhar ke naach lo
Na ghar waale na maape hain
Sab pe apna raaz hai
Darne ki kya baat hai
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai
(Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai)
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..

with lots of msti n dhamal sangeet party came to an end..

next morning..!!!

the weding couple were locked intheir respective rooms so that they dont meet each other..

ladies were bsy in arranging for the upcuming cerimines n gents were bsy in cheking food preprations..

cerimonies for armaan n rahul were suposed to take place in the garden outside n for ridhima n mushan in the hall..

1st cerimony that was to held was Chuda (On the wedding day the rituals at the girl's home begin with the Chuda ceremony. Chuda is basically a set of red and cream ivory bangles that is touched by all present which is gifted by girl's Mamma (mother's brother..) After that, the girl's uncle, aunt, friends and cousins tie kaliras (silver, gold or gold plated traditional ornaments) to a bangle worn by the girl

ridhima n mushan were made to sit in the middle of the rum..
ridhima's mom sat infront of ridhima n made her wore the bangles follwed by other present there..
All the girls present tied kalira's to ridhima's chuda..

n then came the turn of mushan..

both the brides were sent back to their rum as next cerimony was to take plaace in the afternoon..

later in the afternoon..

Ghara gharoli The decorated pitcher of water (ghadoli) is brought by the groom's bhabi (brother's wife) & the bride's sibling or sibling's spouse. they visits the nearby temple and fills a pitcher with holy water. The girl n boy is then bathed with this holy water. Thereafter, they wears their wedding attire

this ritual was perfomed by jeevika for both bride n the groom.. aas anjali was like a sister to ridhima n mushan.. n also bhabhi to rahul n armaan being viren's wife..
with a band the ladies of the house left home singing gharoli songs towards a near by temple n after filing the pot came back...

next cerimony was Vatna involves applying the paste made from turmeric powder and mustard oil all over the girl's n boy's body by their friends and relatives.

both the brides were made to sit in the hall n ladies surrounding them.. n all of them applied vatna on their face legs n arms..
after all the elderly ladies aplied vatna.. anjali n ria covered the complete face of ridhima n mushan..
after a lot of mansti n teasing sesion.. both the brides were made to bath in the holi water brought from temple...

in the lawn..
many ladies were gathered around armaan n rahul
both were bsy making diferent face expresions wen someone or the other tried to apply vatna..
Armaan : thats it yaar.. How much more..
Atul: relax bro.. Its a rasam..
Rahul : taking advantage of ritual u guys are bsy making me yellow
Aman : oho dad.. Its too much fun.. U both are enjoying hoki 2nd time in this year..!!
Rahul : ohh ya i forgot holi is ur fav..
Aman : yes jeju..
Armaan moves towards aman n puts vatna on his face.
Aman : yukkk.. It is to stiky.. Daaaddd...!!
Armaan picks him up..
Armaan : manu baby enjoy holi..!!
Aman : nt fare dad..!!

A mom : enough of ur masti now go n get ready..

Ufff...
Finalyy i wrote something..!!!

hope u guys like it..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
pout ...
ye achi baat nahi hain.. tumhe sara part i mean update gaano mein nikal dya.. hump...
but i luved the llast bit of haldi rasam... hahhahh
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb!!!! loved it . the sangeet was super fun. 😊
wow loved the whole part but sirf songs the part mein jyada dialogue nah the
but last scene of haldi was awesome holi!!! he he he 😆

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